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Response to Zohar Gonen

I must first begin by commending you for not only organizing your post well, but also for using

an elaborate language when arguing your points. Your explanation of how your example is

connected to the SDG goal of your choice, is also accurate, and this is another strength in your

post. At the same time, your account of the most important stakeholders for your business,

coupled with its customers, help in painting an accurate picture of how said business operates. In

a nutshell, this post, is well-written, well-organized and and while at it, also relevant to the topic

at hand, which makes it a great piece of work.

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