Họ và tên : Phạm Quốc Thắng

Lớp : 2A Writing
KẾT QUẢ BÀI KIỂM TRA
Overall band score : 4.0
Test 1
The photos give information about highlights data on changes in a student dormitory
between 2010 and present.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that the garden was pulled down in the North and South
of the student accomodatino. The garden will be take the place of student-bedroom
and car parking.cả đoạn này sai
In terms of the inside of the dormitory, the bathroom main entrance hallway will be
unchanged. Besides, the kitchen will be unchanged but the kitchen will be have more
convient that the kitchen and social area will merged into one. Đoạn này không chỉ ra
được vị trí cụ thể
The classroom will be a dramaticly? Không nói rõ tăng giảm hay biến động by 3 room
to 5 rooms. Similaneously, en-suit room will appear on right-hand side which will
make it be located between the hallyway and student bedroom.
Finally, the gradent outside in the top will be unchange
Test 2
The mix charts highlights data on the percentage of the cinema attendance in Australia
and the average cinema visits by difference age group from 1996 to 2000 during the
period of time. Sai công thức viết intro
Overall, it can be clearly seen that the percentage of attendance and frequency in the
table during 1996 to 2000 was been fluctuated.
Besides, the rate of age groups who visited the cinema in the line grapph was been
raised during the given period of time.
In the table, the figure for attendance is was fall, but in start in 1996 in 62 percentage
and after one year it was considerable to 72% and it was fall to 70% in 1999 but raise
again to 72% in 2000 but in generous, the figure for attendance was increaded
Nhận xét chung :
*Ưu điểm
- Nắm được các phần cơ bản của một bài phân tích biểu đồ
- Có triển khai được bài làm hai phần change and unchange
*Nhược điểm
- Sử dụng sai thì ( Thì phải sử dụng là QKĐ và HTĐ nhưng lại sử dụng TLĐ)
- Không chỉ ra được vị trí cụ thể của từng địa điểm
- Dùng sai cấu trúc ngữ pháp, câu diễn đạt tối nghĩa, thiếu sự mạch lạc và logic