Họ và tên : Hà Sơn

Lớp : 2A Writing
KẾT QUẢ BÀI KIỂM TRA
Overall band score : 5.0
Test 1
The photos give imformation about the transformation of student accomodation from
2010 to present.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that the number of garden was decreased. In addition,
two of the gardens were was destroyed for purpose building more student bedrooms
and car parking of during the given period of time.
The bathroom, hallway and main entrance saw no change. Despite kitchen unchanged,
social area was added in on the same room with kitchen. Moreover, the garden on the
top still be kept.
By contract, the living room was destroyed to add more student bedroom. The garden
on the top left-handside and bottom werewas removed for builingt student bedroom
and car parking. Besides, en-sute room was appeared next to the student-bed room on
the bottom right-handside

Test 2
The table highlights data on the cinema. The line graph gives information about the
number of cinema visits by fourdifferent age groups. Both figures refer to the cinema
four distinct visits on all age group from 1996 to 2000. Australia from 1996 to 2000.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that the rate of attendance was increased while the ratio
frequency was decreased. In addition, the percentage of all mentioned age group were
fluctuated during the given period of time.
Firstly, there was witnessed a rise in attendance from 1996 to 1997 by 10%. Besides,
there was saw a slightly decreased from 1998 to 1999 by 2%. Moreover, the number
of frequency fluctuated by varying degrees.
By contract, the number of 14 – 24 age group and 25 – 35 age group were nearly on
the same level. Finally, all mentioned age group were fluctuated on the same.

Nhận xét chung

*Ưu điểm
- Nắm được cấu trúc đầy đủ của một bài phân tích bản đồ
- Triển khai viết được overall
- Triển khai được 2 ý rõ ràng của maps bao gồm change và unchange
*Nhược điểm
- Liên tục sai cấu trúc to be + V-ed
- Không sử dụng Ving đằng sau các giới từ
- Không vận dụng được từ chỉ phương hướng của bản đồ
- Không chỉ ra được cụ thể vị trí của các điểm điểm trên bản đồ.