FRENTY MAHARINI,S.

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UNTAN BAHASA INGGRIS KELAS A

MODULE 5 (LA 2)
Assignment

Sample 2
1 What is the issue of the discussion?
2 What is the writer’s position in question of the discussion?

1
Some people say that children should always follow their parents’ advice; others
claim that this is not always right. 2I believe that children should follow their parents’
advice when they are young, but they should become more independent when they are
older.

The issue of the discussion seems to be “the children’s obedience toward parents” and the
writer’s position in statement of discussion is an agreement of that but by giving
additional information in the last statement.

Sentence one in this section provides information about the two points of view of this
issue while the next sentence the writer states there is an exception for this issue.  

Revision

Sentence 1 It is undeniable that parents plays an important role  in our life. 

Sentence 2 Some people think that children should always follow their parents' advice.

Sentence 3 However, should the children follow their parents' advice all their life?

Sample 3

1
Many people hold the belief that violent movies and computer games have been the
cause of increasing crime levels in many countries around the world today. 2Even
though there are increasing rates of crime amongst the youth of today, I strongly
disagree that television and games are at the root of this problem.
The issue of the discussion seems to be “the increasing rate of crime is caused by the
violent movies and game” and the writer’s position in statement of discussion is to give
the disagreement of this issue.

Sentence one in this section provides information about the issue while the next sentence
the writer states there is an exception for this issue by giving a opening statement that the
root of the problem us not caused by violent movies and games. 

Sentence 1 Today, the level of crime that occurs in society continues to increase.

Sentence 2 Many people hold the belief that the crime occurred because of the effect of
violent movies and computer games.

Sentence 3 Even though there are increasing rates of crime today, I strongly disagree
that television and games are at the root of this problem.