My Experience On The First Ramadan

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My Experience On The First Ramadan

The first day in Ramadan I felt very sad because this is my first Ramadan without my family. The
togetherness with the family in the moon of Ramadan which had made me sad and wanted it felt like I
was in the midst of them feeling together and happily welcoming the first sahur and breaking the first fast
at Ramadan this time but I had to be separated from them because I had to stay study here. My
preparation for the first sahoor I woke up early to prepared food for sahoor. I cook some vegetables and
tempe.

My activities like usually on Monday, we have full class until 5 p.m and we have many activities
in the class like learning and presentation. Therefore, I don’t felt thirsty, hungry or limp until the breaking
fast time arrives I just bought iftar food at the stalls because I have no time to make fast breaking meals
for my self . I’m alone at boarding house because one day before Ramadan my mother had to go back to
the village but it’s doesn’t matter it will make me more independent.

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My Experience On The First Ramadan

The first day in Ramadan I felt very sad because this is my first Ramadan without my family. The
togetherness with the family in the moon of Ramadan, which had made me sad and wanted it felt like I
was in the midst of them feeling together and happily welcoming the first sahoor and breaking the first
fast at Ramadan this time but I had to be separated from them because I had to stay study here. My
preparation for the first sahoor I woke up early to prepared food for sahoor. I cook some vegetables and
tempe.

My activities like usually on Monday, we have full class until 5 p.m and we have many activities
in the class like learning and presentation. Therefore, I don’t felt thirsty, hungry or limp until the breaking
fast time arrives I just bought iftar food at the stalls because I have no time to make fast-breaking meals
for my self. I’m alone at boarding house because one day before Ramadan my mother had to go back to
the village but it’s doesn’t matter it will make me more independent.

Word count = 188