Writing assignment

student name: Randa Aqeel Al Rashidi

ID: 411004123
 My sister Thin hearted

STEP1:
BRAINSTORMING Understand me
You advise me
a lot

Her special characteristics: Solve my Like a mother

honest, wise, very problems in her behavior
important, good role
models, good behavior,
affectionate.
Her love is real
My role model
and sincer
 Step 2: organiz
introduction
• Topic : Who do you turn to when you have a problem? A description of him / her Describe his effect on you, or focus
the world on his / her inner features, not external ones.
• Hook: My sister has a great position and a great position in my family and anyone, as she is the source of happiness
and joy in the home.
• Background Information: Talking about someone who is important to me and their impact.
• Thesis statement: Someone has turned to him when I have a problem and always helps me in solving it (my sister).
Body paragraph
• Topic Sentences: My sister is my role model. I see her behave rationally and wisely, and win everyone's love.
• Descriptive details: My elder sister cannot give her her right to simple words because her actions are too large to
describe those actions that touch the heart and make others relate to her and love her and those actions that show
the strength of love and her fear for us when we make mistakes and her constant advice to us in order to be the best
of my phones in the world, she is like a mother to me They give attention, responsibility, love and share time with me
to have fun and play.
conclusion
• Restating the main point: My sister is a very important person to me and has always been a tender cuddle for me and
a companion of my secrets.
• Final opinion: I think I have the best luck in the world because she is my sister.
Step3: write your first draft

• Sister is my role model, whom I see acting rationally and wisely,

and obtaining everyone's love This is my older sister, whom I
want to be like when I grow up. She is wonderful and amazing in
her dealings with me and with others. The sister has a high
position among any family, she is the source of happiness and
joy in the home. She cares for her siblings as if she were their
mother. All she wants is their happiness and comfort, the sister
is a sincere friend, the keeper of secrets and the sane person
who provides us with useful advice for what is good for her
brothers. Friends may abandon each other, but your sister will
stay by your side no matter what, and always willing to sacrifice
for you, I highly recommend everyone who has a sister to take
care of her to make her as happy as he can.
Step 4: write your final draft
• My older sister is my role model in this life. Whenever life made me sad or
faced problems, whatever I resorted to, it helps me and makes me happy
in all matters, and is always ready to sacrifice for me. I always see her
behave rationally and wisely, and win everyone's love. I hope to be like her
when I grow up. She looks exactly like my mom in every way. I like being
close to me, listening to me, and giving me good advice that spares me
from error in some matters, such as improving behavior and morals. Her
qualities are very much I am proud of. Always honest, she tries to teach me
this row and always tells me to tell the truth in any situation, and I like to
describe her as my role model in bearing responsibility, morals and many
of her characteristics, as she bears the responsibility of all my brothers in
the absence of my father and mother. It also always shows love, affection
and concern for me and my brothers. The sister can never be given her
right to simple words, because her actions are too large to describe those
actions that touch the heart and make others relate to her and love her
and those actions that show the strength of love and her fear for us when
we make mistakes and her constant advice to us so that we can be better
sisters in the world. Sister is like completion, she gives attention,
responsibility, love, and shares time with us to enjoy and play, this is the
sister who is like a blessing that sisters receive.
THANK YOU FOR READING I WISH TO YOU HAVE A NICE DAY