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Regina Nishiyama
English 1301
4 November 2021
classes between deaf and hearing children and the benefits to both communities of learning sign
language and being integrated. All the rhetorical choices in this article are made to get others to
agree with Daniels's claim, but each device is used with a slightly different purpose; even though
each device has a different purpose, the main goal is to get others to agree. Using mainly ethos
and pathos, while adding bits of logos, Daniels is able to build credibility and build a connection
with her audience to support her claim on the benefits of integrating deaf children into hearing
classes.
authority. The first instance of this is when Daniels introduces William Stokoe as "the pioneer
educator who authenticated American Sign Language,"(Daniels 9). They build up his character
to allow readers to think he is a credible source. Then Daniels mentions Stokoe's theory that
questions whether math is easier to learn through a visual language rather than speech. Since
they introduce him as knowledgeable in the signing community, readers can trust him and
Daniels when they say that sign language was an effective tool in learning math for hearing
children. This addition of information from other sources is also an attempt to add logos into the
article. These citations of other scientific data adds more reasoning to the article making it more
than just an emotion based experiment. Adding a credible source to the article builds up the
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paper's ethos, allowing the audience to trust it as a reliable study while the facts and studies build
the logos side of the article, allowing for readers to think it is logical to listen to what the author
has to say.
Another instance of ethos would be when they try to credit their results by including
other studies conducted in the U.S., which gained the same conclusion. Daniel's investigation
concluded that integrating deaf students into a hearing class was beneficial for the hearing
children to learn new skills that would help them expand their knowledge on things they already
know. They also found that for the deaf community, being included helped them gain more
confidence. They were able to back this up by having studies that found similar results. For
example, they state that studies conducted by Hafer in 1986, Vernon, Coley, and Dubois in 1980
all found that sign language is used to help children learn to read; they continue to back this up
by saying that the "International Reading Association recognizes and recommends sign language
as a reading aid," (Daniels 14). They include credible studies and a well-known reliable
organization and as a result, readers are more inclined to trust the results of Daniel's study. The
evidence from these sources is another bit of logos mixed into the article to add a clear and
logical connection to the idea that sign language integration would be beneficial. These sources
not only build readers' trust, but they also back up her own research which makes her article
stronger.
Ethos also occurs when introducing the project designer, Kathy Robinson. They try to
give her credit and say she has experience in the deaf community to justify why she is capable of
conducting this study. They introduce her as "the mother of two daughters who are deaf," which
ties her into the deaf community and allows readers to see that she has expertise in the area
(Daniels 6). If the project designer were utterly ignorant of the deaf community, the audience
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would not take them seriously. Still, because Robinson has personal experience and knowledge
in this area, she is qualified enough to conduct a study for the deaf community. Her qualification
strengthens the purpose of this article and connects it back into the deaf community through
ethos.
Pathos is also used in this essay to allow readers to feel or relate to the deaf community.
For example, after including a stat that says, "90 percent of all Deaf children in the United
Kingdom are integrated into mainstream schools where they are expected to communicate in
English," (Daniels 6). Daniel proceeds to say how "the burden is placed solely on Deaf children,
who cannot use their own language and must instead learn to use English," (Daniels 6).
Although the beginning part is considered logos because it is a fact, when combined with the
second quote, it makes readers feel bad for making the lives of people who are deaf more
difficult by expecting them to learn English rather than the hearing community learning sign
language. After having read the aforementioned, readers are more willing to consider Daniel's
research, and it is almost as if the audience is guilted into continuing to read the article. And the
bit of logos inclines readers to reason with Daniels since she is adding more depth and again
They continue to try and appeal to emotion when they introduce an anecdote from the
teacher of the deaf. She recalls, "four (Deaf and hearing) children had been huddled together
around a table discussing what they liked about a comic book one of the children had been given
for Christmas. The BSL conversation was animated, and a Deaf child was able to explain that
she had also received the same comic book," (Daniels 7). By including this story, the study is
given a personal and affectionate touch. Daniels is able to radiate the sense of accomplishment
the teacher felt when the kids were able to communicate successfully, despite their differences.
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Instead of being a boring statistical research article, this paper is given a bit of life through this
One other pathos device is used when the article discusses an accomplishment of the
hearing teacher of the hearing children. They say that she started not knowing anything about the
deaf community or anything about sign language. Still, after integrating the classes, she
comments, "when the children come in (Deaf children) they wave to me and sign to me because
they know I can sign back," (Daniels 8). Daniels goes on to say how "this ability bolstered her
confidence." The aforementioned allows readers to feel the sense of accomplishment that the
hearing teacher gains and makes them believe that the study was successful. By allowing readers
to feel the feelings of those involved in the study, a more personal connection is made, allowing
Although Daniels does include many rhetorical devices that strengthen her article, one
thing that would have earned her a gold star would be charts and graphs to appeal more to the
logos end of the article. It is not like her article completely fails on the logos scale, but because
she only cites other pieces of work and does not include her own facts or evidence her article
may fall short. Daniels did not include a single chart or graph, which makes it hard for readers to
understand just how well this study went because there is no tangible record or statistical data in
one place. By adding graphs, it would strengthen her claim by providing solid evidence.
However, she does counter this argument by stating that "although these behavioral attributes are
essential to instruction, they are difficult to measure," (Daniels 14). Though her counterargument
is brief, the fact that she considered outsiders' opinions and critiques add to her credibility as a
writer and researcher. By acknowledging how her study might fall short, she is able to build her
Overall, Daniels does an excellent job of getting her audience to trust her work by using
credible sources. She can show her connection to the deaf community, and she also evokes
emotions within readers to get them to connect with her article at a deeper level. Her appeal to
authority gains her article credibility, and her use of loaded emotional language gains the
audience's pity which guilts them into reading the article. Her use of anecdotes takes typical
superficial research and converts it into a personal and enjoyable read. Bits and pieces of logos
based evidence were added to strengthen her article and make it more three-dimensional. Even
though Daniel's lacked the logos aspect of rhetoric, she was able to counter any of these
arguments, which also gained her article credibility. In the end, Daniels was able to use ethos and
pathos to support her claim on deaf integration while adding bits of logos to add to her rationale.
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Work Cited
Daniels, Marilyn. “Sign Language Advantage.” Sign Language Studies, vol. 2, no. 1,