Essay draft 1

Write a thesis and body paragraphs, use the circle graphs to help you with your bodies. After

that, email the draft to professor and partner so partner can leave comments on it and receive

their essay to leave comments as well. Leave comments about the essay using the questions.

Intro:

Thesis

Bodies:

Bodies:

The genre that is shown is a twitter thread and the topic is about the newly

released album, “Donda” by the one and only, Kanye West. The audience includes his new fans,

old fans, Drake fans, Christian fans and the twitter thread consists of the moral support for Kanye

West by showing interest in the route he took when creating the album. A girl named Dedee

tweeted out “Donda by Kanye West is Kanye’s most exciting project since Yeezus. He honors

his mother by combining ideas from each era of his career. He took a huge risk by not sticking to

an exact sound. This is not a project I’ll play every day, but it’s one that I can appreciate.” The

route that Kanye took was that when he first started out his rapping career, he stuck with his go-

to music genre hip hop/rap and soon started evolving into rock and Christian music. Although

some fans didn’t expect the musical choice he made, but there was some appreciation shown for

the risk he was taking.

Bodies:

Kanye West dedicated the album in memory of his deceased mother

named Donda. 66% of males had loved the album because it showed that Kanye was a family
type of guy, he was a momma’s boy. Not only did it show that Kanye was a momma’s boy, but

so were the 4 males that retweeted this tweet from a male user, @3moorie, that mentioned “He

really loves his mom, this love was the driving force behind this album. He turned that energy

and love into a beautiful piece of music, a nearly perfect celebration of the life she lead.” The

males that retweeted this tweet showed the type of personalities that the boys have and show they

have a soft spot for family.

Conclusions: