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Literacy Narrative Final Draft
Literacy Narrative Final Draft
Professor Campbell
WRDS 1104
13 September 2021
Learning to read and write was a very exciting part of my childhood. I finally got to put
everything I wanted to say on paper, and it would make sense! Reading books like Junie B. Jones
or Magic Tree House were no longer just words on a page, they were little movies that would
play in my head. I would sit there and create ideas of what I thought the characters would look
like. It was all so fascinating. One of my favorite memories of learning to write was whenever I
was in first grade. My teacher would teach us how to properly write and be descriptive.
My first grade teachers name was Mrs. Loper. All I remember about her at the time was
that she was really pregnant. Back then I really didn’t know what that meant, I just assumed she
had some big ball under her shirt. She was one of my favorite teachers and really seemed to take
an interest in everyone. It was around the middle of the school year and everyone in my class had
a solid group of friends that they would travel around with. It was different from high school and
college where with each class everyone is different. I liked the fact that in elementary school I
got to see the same kids everyday, it almost felt like a family. Our class days were split up into
four different time chunks for each subject. Reading and writing was at the beginning of the day.
I walked into the classroom that day with my sparkly Justice backpack and uncoordinated
outfit excited to learn something new that day. We all sat down at our tables, and doodled as we
waited for Mrs. Loper to give us instructions on what we were going to do. She handed out
worksheets that were blank and titled with how-to make hot chocolate. “Seemed easy enough,” I
thought to myself. I chatted with people at my table as Mrs. Loper made her way to the front of
the classroom. Mrs Loper clapped and said, “Good morning everyone!” The whole class yelled
back, “Good morning!” with the same excitement. She then went on to explain what we were
doing for the day. “Today we are writing our own how-to’s on making hot chocolate, and then we
will actually get to make some.” The whole class squealed with joy. She lined up all the
ingredients and utensils that we would use in order to make the hot chocolate. Including: red solo
cups, packets of hot chocolate mix, mini marshmallows, a gallon of milk, plastic spoons, and a
microwave. She then said, “Okay class, I will give you 10 minutes to write down the instructions
for how to make hot chocolate on your how-to sheets, and then I will come around and follow
your instructions.”
Everyone laughed because it seemed so easy. After the giggling died down, we all
proceeded to pick up our pencils and start writing. The class didn’t even take 5 minutes to finish
writing because it seemed pretty self-explanatory. We all watched as Mrs. Loper walked up to the
first student and followed her written instructions. As Mrs. Loper read, she did EXACTLY what
the girl wrote down. “Put the milk in the cup.” Mrs. Loper then placed the gallon of milk on top
of the cup. Everyone looked puzzled and laughed. Mrs. Loper said, “The instructions told me to
put the milk in the cup, so I did.” Everyone then frantically started erasing what they wrote down
and started over, attempting to be more descriptive this time. One by one, Mrs. Loper made her
I would write instructions down, only to erase them 30 seconds later after watching
someone make the same mistakes I did. Mrs. Loper was almost at my table and I was pretty
hopeful that my how-to was perfect. Finally, it was my turn and she picked up my paper and
started making the hot chocolate. She read off my paper, “pour milk in the cup.” She picked up
the gallon of milk and tipped it over the red solo cup, only for nothing to come out. I sat there for
a second and then it hit me, I forgot to write unscrew the cap to the milk!! She looked at me and
said, “Give it another try Jenna, I’ll be right back.” Again and again I heard the same, “Give it
another try Jenna, I’ll be right back.” Slowly I started to get frustrated with myself because I
couldn’t figure out how I kept messing up. All of the sudden more and more kids started to enjoy
their hot chocolate, as I sat there burning the eraser off my pencil. Finally she came back up to
me and read my how-to over again. In my mind I thought, “So far so good...” Mrs. Loper got to
the end of my how-to and there was a steaming cup of hot chocolate sitting in front of me. “Well
done Jenna, I knew you could do it.” I smiled from ear to ear. I was so proud of myself for finally
completing it correctly. For the rest of writing class, I sat there with my friends and finished my
hot chocolate.
Mrs. Loper grabbed our attention by clapping three times. Everyone looked up and she
said, “Everyone did such an amazing job today.” Then she proceeded to say, “I know it was
challenging in the beginning but, now don’t you see why it is so important to be descriptive with
our writing? As you all continue to write I want you to remember this activity.” The whole class
nodded in agreement and she smiled back at us. Even though that assignment was frustrating at
the time and made me want to give up, I never let myself. It made me realize that writing was
fun, and hell I could even get hot chocolate out of it. I loved how my teacher made learning fun
and interactive, I think that's why that story has stuck with me for so long. It made me realize