Rhetorical Analysis - First Draft

by Johnathan Mendoza

Submission date: 04-Nov-2021 09:43PM (UTC-0500)

Submission ID: 1693515155
File name: First_Draft.pdf (60.88K)
Word count: 1457
Character count: 7611
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ORIGINALITY REPORT

32 %
SIMILARITY INDEX
14%
INTERNET SOURCES
31%
PUBLICATIONS
6%
STUDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

1
Policing: An International Journal of Police
Strategies & Management, Volume 20, Issue 2
23%
(2006-09-19)
Publication

2
konstanza.emeraldinsight.com
Internet Source 6%
3
Submitted to Siena Heights University
Student Paper 1%
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www.ncjrs.gov
Internet Source 1%
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Submitted to Temple University
Student Paper 1%

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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

100
Instructor

/100
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Comment 1
You need your own title and not the actual article title. 

Comment 2
Too much of this essay is just information copy/pasted from the article. You need to go back
and paraphrase when needed and only quote when you can't paraphrase. 32% of essay is
from the article. 

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Comment 3
Why is this just copy/pasted like this? This can't be in the final draft. 

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