Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Steven Solari
Brianna Topchev
Britney Coleman
Rutgers University
11:374:430
07 December 2021
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Nature of the Hazard
It is no secret that incorporating fish into one’s diet has many health benefits and is even
believed to be a way to prolong life expectancy. In many foreign countries where seafood is a
staple food, the citizens are much healthier and live considerably longer than Americans. For
example, Japan consumes approximately 730,783.86 tons of fish annually, and their average life
expectancy is currently 87.74 years for women, 81.64 for men respectively (Countries That Eat
The Most Fish, 2018). This is significantly higher than the current US life expectancy, which is
80.2 years for women and 74.5 for men (Mainichi, 2021). Since it stands to reason that a
person’s daily diet is a major contributing factor in their health and longevity, it is quite apparent
that fish consumption has much to do with the exceptional health and longevity of the people of
foreign countries like Japan. Eating fish reduces the risk of heart disease, and is also very rich in
omega-3 fatty acids, which reduces blood clots, triglycerides, and arrhythmias (irregular
heartbeats). Eating at least 250 mg of these omega 3's per day is enough to provide health
benefits. Unfortunately, Americans eat less than half of this amount (Picklo, 2020). However,
there has been a big push for quite some time now in the United States to add fish to Americans’
regular diets. However, with this comes the popular farm-raised fish varieties, which are found
The main issue with farm-raised fish is that there are many toxic chemicals and
carcinogens found within them that pose serious health threats. Much of the farm-raised fish that
is distributed and sold in the United States comes from overseas, much from Asia, which does
not have the same safety requirements as does the United States. “Seafood from other countries
is not guaranteed to be as regulated as it is in the United States. High antibiotic use in imported,
farm-raised fish is common. Many international fish farms are not held to the high inspection
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standards that you would see in the United States. Additionally, some overseas seafood
2021). Over the years, the US Food & Drug Administration (FDA) conducted inspections of
imported seafood from countries such as China, Korea, the Philippines, and Vietnam, and found
numerous harmful carcinogenic contaminants within it. Most of which are commonly used to
deal with fungal and bacterial problems in aquaculture (INI World Report, 2020).
Consequences
Those who consume farm-raised, especially farm-raised fish produced outside of the
United States, run a risk of contracting major diseases, such as cancer. “The contaminants found
in the fish are the antimicrobials nitrofuran, malachite green, gentian violet, and fluoroquinolone.
Nitrofuran, malachite green, and gentian violet, which are used to treat fungal infections, have
been shown to be carcinogenic with long-term exposure in lab animals” (Foran, 2005). In
addition, other serious health problems were found to be linked to farm-raised fish. For example,
90% of salmon currently sold in the United States is farm-raised, and also contains another
times more PCBs than any other food on the market. Toxaphene and dieldrin are other toxins
found in farm-raised salmon, both of which are abundant in farm-raised salmon, and are found to
be linked to Parkinson’s disease, breast cancer, and reproductive & nervous system damage
(Hites, 2004). In a human risk assessment looking at farm-raised fish produced in Uyo, Nigeria,
researchers found, “...the highest concentrations of trace metals were present in the feeds except
for zinc while the lowest concentrations were observed in all the water samples. From the results,
it was observed that lead, cadmium, and chromium exceeded the maximum permissible limits set
by WHO (World Health Organization) and other international regulatory agencies in water while
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cobalt and chromium was above permissible limits in fish and feed” (Daniel & Matthew 2016).
There is, of course, the possibility that fish from farms such as this one in Nigeria are imported to
the United States for consumption. The United States has little control over the regulations in
which these farms must and, therefore, the conditions in which these fish are raised. For
example, one study looked at farm-raised fish in India that were raised near a source of raw
sewage, something that would not be acceptable in the United States. The study found that fish
near the source of the sewage were under higher levels of psychological stress, were lower in
protein content, and had lower respiratory activity. The study states, “Conspicuous differences in
the SDH activity of fish between the last and first stocking pond or the facultative pond were
clearly due to the result of the differences in water quality. There was a direct relationship
between SDH activity in gill tissue of any of the fish investigated and ammonia-N concentration
of water or water pH. This shows that the respiratory activity of these fishes was strongly
affected by the ammonia and pH of water. In other words, this suggests that as the distance from
the point source increases, there was a substantial improvement of water quality in the ponds
located along the sewage effluent gradient. Evidently, there is a progressive pattern of growth,
survival and physiological health of fish and an abundance of favorable diversity of food
organisms with rich biodiversity” (Mukherjee, 2006). One must also consider pollutants found in
raw sewage, such as traces of pharmaceutical drugs that can contaminate these fish.
Wild salmon are deep reddish-orange on the inside. What most people don’t realize is
that salmon get their color from what they eat. Wild salmon eat krill, tiny shrimplike crustaceans
that contain carotenoids, which are naturally occurring orange pigments. Farm-raised salmon eat
feed that is made of corn, soy, other fish, poultry litter, and hydrolyzed chicken feathers. Due to
this unnatural diet, farmed salmon meat does not turn its natural orange-to-red color, but rather a
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less-appetizing light gray. Studies from West Creek Aquaculture, based in British Columbia, and
DSM, a company that supplies pigmenting compounds to the salmon feed industry, both have
shown that consumers will not buy gray-colored salmon. Therefore, in order to make these
artificially grown fish look natural, farmers use chemicals called canthaxanthin and astaxanthin
to dye their insides to make for a more pleasing aesthetic (Gajanan, 2017). Unfortunately,
although visually pleasing, canthaxanthin and astaxanthin have been linked to vision damage
Several major chemical companies produce these “internal paints,” the largest being
Swiss chemical giant, Hoffmann La Roche. This is the same pharmaceutical giant that produces
tranquilizers like Valium and Rohypnol (aka the “date rape” drug). To help the farmer decide
exactly what tint of pink they want to paint the fish’s insides, the salesman will show the farmer
a SalmoFan. This is a color selection fan similar to the one used to find when deciding what
color you want to paint your bathroom walls. Scientists have found a link between a high
canthaxanthin intake and damage to the human retina, prompting the European Union to ban
canthaxanthin for direct human consumption due to its potential for vision damage (Friedman,
2021). Recent studies also linked artificial food colorings used in dying farm-raised fish to
Aside from all the dangerous contaminants in farm-raised fish, the overall nutritional
value of farm-raised fish vs. wild-caught fish is also considerably worse. Protein and omega-3
fatty acids, which are beneficial to the human body, are relatively lower in farm-raised fish than
in wild-caught fish (Simon, 2020). “Although all fish accumulate Persistent Organic Pollutants
(POPs) from the environment into their fats, farmed fish do so at a higher rate than wild fish
(Cleveland Clinic, 2020). This is because farmed fish are fed on a diet high in contaminated fish
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oils and fishmeal. Fewer chemicals accumulate in wild fish because their diet contains less of
the contaminated fats and because they get more exercise, reducing their fat levels. Farmed fish
contain lower levels of protein, a lower ratio of omega-3 to omega-6 fatty acids, and higher
Populations at Risk
Cancer, Parkinson’s disease, and the many other negative consequences resulting from
farm-raised fish consumption are not prejudiced. All races, ethnicities, sexes, ages, etc. are
prone to these diseases. The US Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) and the FDA
recommend eating two 3.5 oz. servings of fish per week. Pregnant women are advised to limit
their fish consumption due to levels of mercury in certain fish. The same goes for young
children (Picklo, 2020). The advisements and recommendations go on and on, such as broiling
your fish as opposed to frying it, removing the skin and lateral bloodline from the fillets, etc, etc.
However, for the purposes of this paper, the hazardous contaminants in farm-raised fish affect all
people across the board and should be avoided by all. Similar to organic produce sold in local
farm markets or Whole Foods, wild-caught fish is no different. Therefore, the argument can be
made that certain lower-income communities, sometimes found in urban or very rural areas,
would be more at risk of these hazards from farm-raised fish, since the people within these
communities would not be able to afford the more expensive wild-caught option, subsequently
Prevention
Simply telling people to eat wild-caught fish is nowhere near enough to transition the
population to this safer option. Exposing the hazards of farm-raised fish must be made, through
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advertising as well as in education. Popular apps for smartphones now exist, such as Safe
Seafood and Monterey’s Seafood Watch advising of different types of seafood, their nutritional
value, along with how, when, and where they were caught. People need to be encouraged to ask
questions and educate themselves at their local grocery store or seafood market when they make
their purchases. Federal regulations pertaining to seafood packaging and labeling require that the
country of origin and the method of production be listed on the label. The method of production
would indicate if the seafood was farm-raised or wild-caught. The National Oceanic and
Atmospheric Administration (NOAA) has a website called FishWatch.gov, which has a plethora
of facts and information on different types of fish, sustainable seafood, fisheries management,
videos, and other useful information that one could utilize when trying to decide on a certain fish
policymaking, when it pertains to fisheries issues. Much of this problem stems from commercial
fishing industries, whose main goals are profit and not so much the environment or consumers’
health. Supporting local small-scale fishing industries rather than the big corporations is another
Cancer was the second leading cause of death, after heart disease, in the United States in
2019. In 2019, there were 599,601 cancer deaths; 283,725 were among females and 315,876
among males (An Update on Cancer Deaths in the United States, 2021).
From 1999 to 2017, age-adjusted death rates for Parkinson’s disease among adults aged
≥65 years increased from 41.7 to 65.3 per 100,000 population. Among men, the age-adjusted
death rate increased from 65.2 per 100,000 in 1999 to 97.9 in 2017. Among women, the rate
increased from 28.4 per 100,000 in 1999 to 43.0 in 2017. Throughout 1999–2017, the death rates
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for Parkinson’s disease for men were higher than those for women (QuickStats: Age-Adjusted
Death Rates* for Parkinson's Disease, 2021). Some contaminants that were found in farm-raised
fish, such as malachite green, which is used as a fungicide, were found to be carcinogenic with
long-term exposure in lab animals. “We conclude that tumors of the thyroid gland, liver, or
mammary gland in female rats might have been caused by malachite green chloride” (National
Toxicology Program, 2021). Another carcinogen Nitrofuran, which has also been found in
imported farm-raised fish, has been banned in the United States for quite some time now for use
in all food-producing animals. “The Food and Drug Administration has prohibited all uses of
nitrofuran drugs in food-producing animals because they pose a public health risk...the rule went
into effect on May 7, 2002, and is the result of evidence that the drugs may induce carcinogenic
residues in animal tissues. Since 1991, nitrofurans have been banned for systemic use in poultry
and swine because the drugs can cause cancer. Nitrofurans have been added to the Animal
Medicinal Drug Use Clarification Act list of drugs prohibited for extralabel use in
responsible for the deaths of 23,000 Americans each year (National Consumers League, 2014).
Controversy
There is an argument that farm-raised fish have a smaller carbon footprint than
non-environmentally friendly. “In order to source wild fish, one must send a fishing boat out
into the ocean, have it run while the fish are caught, send the fish back to shore, then drive the
fish to the packaging facility before they’re driven or flown to your local grocery store. This
results in a large carbon footprint that’s really not environmentally friendly. Meanwhile, fish
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farms are able to catch, clean, and package the fish all in one facility, which results in a much
smaller carbon footprint” (Lutz, 2021). However, what is typically not mentioned is the carbon
emissions that are generated by transporting farm-raised fish from foreign countries to the United
States. This argument might be somewhat plausible for fish farms within the United States, but
transportation and subsequent greenhouse gasses are still generated in this scenario as well.
Another argument that is made by proponents of farm-raised fish is that wild-caught fish
production causes overfishing and it destroys marine ecosystems. “The world’s oceans, lakes,
and rivers are currently being depleted faster than they can be naturally replenished, but the
demand for fish keeps growing. That’s why responsible fish farms are so important for the
environment. They provide a constant source of fish for hungry consumers without taking away
from the wild fish population, ensuring that fish will remain plentiful for generations to come.
Another cause for concern when it comes to wild fish is the destruction of marine habitat. In
Alaskan waters alone, a fishing method known as bottom trawling removed over one million
pounds of deep water corals and sponges annually between 1997 and 1999. These corals and
sponges are important habitats that provide food and shelter for marine species…it’s common for
“bycatch” to occur when fishers drop their nets and trawls. That means unwanted fish, rare
corals, and endangered fish are caught up in a fisherman’s haul. This collateral damage can
amount to up to 90% of a fisherman’s total catch” (Oceana, 2010). As far as the overfishing
argument, what many people do not know is that farm-raised fish are also fed fish, which are
wild-caught from the oceans, and in the same way with trawlers as described. While the
argument of destroying marine habitats is valid and is a major issue that needs addressing, the
statements that farm-raised fishing methods are not causing this problem are simply false. The
negative environmental impacts aquaculture has had are nuanced. Nutrient buildup happens
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when there is a high density of fish in one area. Fish produce waste, and their waste has the
potential to build up in the surrounding area. This can deplete the water of oxygen, creating algal
In conclusion, the costs of wild-caught fish are slightly higher for the economy and to the
individual consumer, due to fishing industry expenses, transportation, etc. However the value on
human health and safety, along with the environment as a whole, far outweigh the lower price tag
and the dangers associated with farm-raised fish, specifically unregulated imported varieties
from overseas that are contributing to growing cancer rates, diseases, and other health problems
in our country. While certain aquaculture practices can be safe to both humans and the
environment to a limited extent, if properly performed and regulated, the evidence in this paper
shows that the consumption of wild-caught fish is overall the much more responsible, safer, and
beneficial choice for both human health reasons as well as for the environment.
Audience
It has been concluded that farm-raised fish pose hazards that put human health and the
environment at risk. These hazards include high levels of antibiotic use amongst farm-raised
fish, leading to resistant bacteria that can cause hard-to-treat diseases in humans. As well as the
use of carcinogenic chemical dyes, and poor standards at farms in foreign countries exposing fish
to pollutants, amongst other hazards. These hazards are relevant to all who consume seafood as
the risks associated, such as the potential development of a disease, are not biased to any one
group of people. Therefore, no specific demographic group such as gender, age, or location will
be targeted. However, we would want to target those currently buying farm-raised fish products.
For example, we would not want to place our materials in a fresh-local seafood market, where
people are already buying wild-caught fish, and may already understand many of the hazards
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associated with farm-raised fish. Instead, it would be beneficial to place our materials in a
grocery store or supermarket where farm-raised fish are sold, as well as wild-caught options.
This way, once people are educated, they can then switch to a healthier alternative.
Those who eat seafood typically have a basic understanding of the two methods of
production, farm-raised and wild-caught. Unfortunately, very few are aware of the hazards
associated with farm-raised fish (Glaser, Seggerman, & Zisser). This is largely due to the fact
that big seafood corporations attempt to limit information about environmental accidents,
potentially harmful chemicals in their products, and more in order to prioritize profit, and not
lose any sales or customers. Also, because many foreign countries do not have to reveal this
information there is often a lack of transparency with these foreign companies (Hardt, Howell, &
Flett, 2017). Therefore, finding information on these hazards is very difficult. Furthermore, those
who have a basic understanding of farm-raised fish most likely have a positive view of it.
Farm-raised fish is heavily advertised as being just as healthy and safe as wild-caught fish, if not
the better, more sustainable option. This is largely because research shows that, overall,
farm-raised fishing does have a smaller carbon footprint than wild-caught fishing, and
regulations of farms in the United States are held to very high standards (Centner). However,
what this information widely advertised to the public fails to relate is that farm-raised fish,
regardless of origin, are not immune to very damaging environmental effects. It is essentially
impossible to regulate farm-raised fish in other countries, leading to pollutants in the fish and
environmental damage.
Key Messages
The key messages we want to get across to our audience in this campaign are the risks,
and dangers associated with farm-raised fish, why farm-raised fish is not necessarily a better
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alternative than wild-caught fish, and how to make the best, informed decision when purchasing
seafood. First, we not only want to present the risks associated with farm-raised fish, but also
give our audience an understanding of them. It is one thing to simply state the information that
antibiotic use is rampant in farm-raised fishing, but it is far more effective to explain to the
audience that rampant antibiotic use in aquaculture can lead to resistant bacteria that can spread
or transmit resistance genes to non-resistant bacteria that infect humans, causing diseases that are
difficult to treat (Lockwood, 2017). It is crucial to not simply present the risks, but have our
audience understand why they are harmful to themselves and their environment. Secondly, our
campaign must combat competing claims that the consumption of farm-raised fish is overall
better than the consumption of wild-caught fish. This is the main myth we have to combat. We
have to present our information in a way that, as simply as we can, weighs the costs and benefits
of farm-raised fish and convey that those costs significantly outweigh the benefits. It must be
clear to the audience that between wild-caught and farm-raised fish, wild-caught fish is, overall,
the better alternative. Finally, we not only want to educate our audience on how to make the
best-informed decision when purchasing seafood but also provide them with resources to do so.
Providing the audience with quality sources such as seafood watch.org, run by the Monterey Bay
Aquarium, avoids the possibility of misinformation being spread by big seafood corporations,
Competing/Complementary Campaigns
Thankfully, there have been many campaigns similar to seafood watch.org, that actively
promote the most sustainable products, and have a plethora of information on advising of
different types of seafood, their nutritional value, along with how, when, and where they were
caught. These campaigns are easily accessible to the public as they come in the form of popular
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smartphone apps and websites. Furthermore, the federal government passed the Country of
Origin Labeling (COOL) law in 2005 which required retailers to put the country of origin and
method of production on all seafood products to combat foreign products on U.S. shelves
(Country of Origin Labeling (COOL), 2021). Promoting trusted, unbiased sources such as these
is a critical linkage to our campaign. However, a large hurdle we must overcome is competing
campaigns that claim farm-raised fish are, overall, just as healthy for yourself and the
environment as wild-caught fish, if not better. The linkage we must make to the competing
campaigns spreading this message is pointing out to our audience the weaknesses in these
opposing claims. Much of the information promoting farm-raised fish explains that the carbon
footprint of farm-raised fish is lower than that of wild-caught fish. Yet, these campaigns leave
out the significant information of the fact that farm-raised fish can have detrimental effects on
the environment, such as farm fish escaping into local ecosystems (Andrews). Pointing out the
information these competing campaigns leave out of their message is another critical linkage to
Contexts
Fish is an extremely nutritious and healthy food. In fact, marine fish provide 15 percent
scientists as an essential part of one’s diet. This leads to much of the population attempting to
incorporate or at least better incorporate it into their diet. As environmental awareness has
increased over the last few decades, there has been much pressure put on the fishing industry to
stop overfishing, reduce fishing waste, and protect endangered marine life to preserve our
oceans. Another environmental concern many have is the population of the world growing at an
exponentially fast rate. As the population increases, so will the demand for fish, making
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sustainable fish practices even more necessary in the future (Feldstein, n.d.). The high nutritional
value of fish, the environmental damage of the fishing industry, and population increase are all
Additionally, diet is the leading contributing factor to cancer. Cancer was the second
leading cause of death, after heart disease, in the United States in 2019. In 2019, there
were 599,601 cancer deaths; 283,725 were among females and 315,876 among males.
Additionally, from 1999 to 2017, age-adjusted death rates for Parkinson’s disease among adults
aged ≥65 years increased from 41.7 to 65.3 per 100,000 population. (An Update on Cancer
Deaths in the United States, 2021). Not only is this context important to our campaign, as fish
may be seen as a way to reduce the risk of cancer by incorporating healthier foods into one’s
diet, but also because there are toxic chemicals and carcinogens found in farm-raised fish which
cause cancer.
Barriers
Certain obstacles present themselves when attempting to educate the public on the risks
associated with farm-raised fish, and when promoting locally sourced, wild-caught options.
Large-scale corporations and foreign companies are one barrier. These large enterprises are
usually backed by the support of politicians and other public officials. This can make laws that
ensure stricter regulatory standards and better quality products extremely difficult to pass
through the federal government. These large corporations also have the money and power to
promote campaigns in support of farm-raised fish, and ones demonizing wild-caught options.
This can make it very difficult for smaller-scale organizations, such as non-profits, to reach their
audience and have a stronger campaign with fewer funds and resources (Carter, 2018). Our
campaign will attempt to work around this barrier by educating our audience and correcting the
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misinformation or lack of information provided by these corporations. Once our campaign is
established, we could accept donations from those who are also passionate about our message in
order to gain more money and resources to better match the quality of the materials provided by
these companies.
Additionally, even though our campaign does not look to target any specific
socio-economic group, income level is definitely a barrier to consider when presenting this
information. Certain low-income communities may not have the ability to purchase seafood that
is wild-caught as it is the more expensive option. Despite being presented with the information
from our campaign, they still may choose to purchase farm-raised fish as they do not have the
ability to afford and incorporate wild-caught seafood into their diet regularly. This leaves certain
lower-income communities, sometimes found in urban or very rural areas, at a higher risk of the
dangers associated with farm-raised fish. Location can also inhibit one’s ability to purchase
wild-caught seafood, especially locally sourced seafood. It would be very difficult for people
who live in regions like the midwest, away from coastlines to eat wild-caught options where
there is not any locally sourced, wild-caught seafood available. This may push those living in
these areas, who still want to incorporate fish into their diets, to choose more processed seafood,
with added preservatives, that keep fish fresh while being transported away from the coasts.
These processed seafood products are often of foreign origin and farm-raised (Taoukis, Tsironi,
2019). To work around these barriers of limited access to wild-caught fish, our campaign has
provided resources that are free and accessible to all. These resources provide information on the
quality of a plethora of seafood products, including both farm-raised and wild-caught fish.
Utilizing these resources, those who may not be able to purchase wild-caught options or do not
have access to them can at least avoid foreign products and low-quality products if they must still
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consume farm-raised fish. The majority of the risks our campaign identifies are found more so in
these foreign products so even a subtle transition away from these products would benefit our
audience.
fish. As previously discussed, the wild-caught fishing industry has come under intense scrutiny
in recent decades over its contributions to environmental damage within our oceans. Many of
those viewing our campaign may already have pre-established fears of contributing to
environmental harm by consuming wild-caught products. To overcome these fears, our campaign
warns of the environmental damage possible of consuming farm-raised fish and promotes locally
It is very important that when we present our message and our materials that we do not
overcomplicate the information. Since we have established that we are not attempting to target
any specific demographic, but rather the general public purchasing farm-raised fish, this would
mean our audience would have varying levels of education and comprehension skills. Therefore,
it is critical we present our information in the simplest and most easy-to-understand way
possible. We must use simple, plain wording and avoid technical jargon regarding fishing
practices and toxicology. We must also consider the way our materials are presented. As
previously stated, our materials would be more beneficial if presented in a place where
farm-raised fish are sold, such as a supermarket, rather than a place where people are most likely
buying primarily wild-caught seafood like a local market. Our materials that would be suited for
a supermarket would be our brochure and our poster, but our recording and our newspaper article
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would have to be presented elsewhere. When presenting the news article we would want it to be
run in a newspaper that reaches a broad audience, as our target audience is broad and could have
many different characteristics. We would not want to run into it in a newspaper read by only one
demographic, say, men, women, conservatives, liberals, young people, older people, etc. The
same is true for the recording, whether it be a radio spot, video, or podcast, we would need to
make sure the medium it is presented in is not dominated by one specific audience. For the
recording and the newspaper article, we would also want to ensure that they are not placed in an
inappropriate medium. For example, we would not want our news article printed in a magazine
for fishermen, who already know much of this information, or our recording playing on a
Campaign Strategy
Based on our analysis, the overall strategy for successfully presenting our campaign's
messages is education and making the campaign memorable by drawing on our audience’s
emotions. In order to educate the public on this issue, our campaign will widely distribute
materials such as brochures, posters, media articles, etc. to the public, advising of the health
hazards pertaining to farm-raised seafood. Educating our audience on the risks associated with
farm-raised fish and attempting to make our audience understand these risks is crucial to the
success of our campaign. Most are completely unaware of these risks and pay little attention to
the origin of their seafood products or the method of production. Since this will likely be the first
time most of our audience is exposed to this information, it is important our campaign makes a
lasting impact. Therefore, once again, we must ensure that our audience has a clear
announcement campaigns are those that can grab the audience's attention, and be summarized by
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the audience in a single sentence (Goodwill, 2019). Our campaign will present our information in
a very simple manner, easy for almost anyone to grasp while also remaining short and to the
point to keep our audience's attention. For example, our recording is only one minute long, any
Furthermore, another aspect that makes public service campaigns successful is their
ability to elicit an emotional response from their audience, which makes the information more
memorable (Dillard, 2000). The emotions that our campaign is attempting to evoke in our
audience are fear and disgust. We are attempting to draw out these emotions with jarring images
on our materials, alarming statistics, and negative word choices describing farm-raised fish. For
example, an image that is shown on our brochure and in our newspaper article is one of a foreign
fish farm, where the water is clearly polluted and the fish are overcrowded. People are less likely
to accept risk when they feel it is out of their control and when they are unnatural (Philley, 1991).
Both concepts are presented in this image example, fish are not supposed to be swimming in
polluted water, overcrowded, but freely swimming in the vast open ocean, naturally. When
buying farm-raised fish, the consumer is not in control of the origin and is not in control of the
Pretest/Final Strategy
To pretest our materials we presented a group of 13 people with physical copies of our
brochure, newspaper article, and poster and played our recording for them. The ages of the group
ranged from 20 years old to 59 years old, they were all from various different parts of New
Jersey, made different incomes, and were overall generally diverse in other demographic areas.
We asked the group to provide feedback on the material by answering the following questions,
“Can you summarize the main message of our campaign?”, “How did these campaign materials
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make you feel?”, “Do you feel our materials were effective?”, and “How would you improve our
campaign materials?”.
The feedback to our materials was overwhelmingly positive and our group's responses
were mostly on par with what we wanted to hear back. However, there were some important
notes made by the group that gave us insight on what small adjustments needed to be made to
our campaign to make it more effective. The entire group was able to provide a summary in
about a sentence, and they were all accurate to what we feel our main message is. This first led
us to believe the materials were presented in a way that was simple enough to understand yet, a
few comments we got from the group led us to realize there was still simplifying that could be
done. A few of the group members expressed that certain technical names of both carcinogens
and chemicals in the newspaper article and poster were confusing to them. Therefore, we went
back into those materials and edited the technical terms to simply say phrases like “toxic
directed at big corporations and foreign countries as an emotional response to our campaign.
However, upon examining our group's responses regarding how the campaign made them feel,
only one response mentioned anger. The responses overwhelmingly described feelings of fear
and disgust. We originally were trying to draw out disgust from our audience, which we were
pleased to see translated through our group’s responses, yet we realized that fear was the emotion
we should expand on and not anger. We edited our materials to have less content directing blame
towards foreign countries and big corporations and elaborate more on the consequences of these
hazards. The entire group provided feedback that they felt our campaign was effective; most of
the group noted that they had not heard the majority of the information prior to viewing our
materials. The consensus of the group was that they would try their best to avoid farm-raised fish
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products in the future, especially those of foreign origin. This left our group satisfied with the
The only other notable comment we received with a suggestion for an improvement, was
a group member who suggested instead of recommending simply “wild-caught options”, but
specifically locally sourced sustainable wild-caught options throughout our materials. This group
member made the point that some may find it easy to argue with our campaign that many
wild-caught options have a detrimental environmental impact. The group member explained that
recommending locally sourced, sustainable wild-caught options would receive less criticism
from proponents of farm-raised fish, and would make our message more sound. We completely
agreed with this group member and decided to change the wording multiple times throughout the
materials and even added a paragraph about shopping locally to our newspaper article.
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