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WRITING TASK 2 – NGUYEN HAI PHUONG

The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in
sea.
What are the reasons and solutions?

There has been a global rising concern recently that related to the dwindling
population of some animal species. It is widely believed that the primitive causes
of this problem can be attributed to human expansion on land and in sea. In my
opinion, it is time for us to take further action to prevent rare wild animals from
the brink of extinction.
Excessive poaching and marine creature exploitation activities might be regarded
as obvious explanation for the issue. That is to say, hunters nowadays are likely to
kill as much animal individuals as possible in the wild in order to maximum their
profits. However, this illegal hunting naturally poses a great threat to the wildlife
communities since the finite number of immature individuals is required for the
species recovery. To be more specific, if the dead toll outstrips the birth rate of
the breed, that species may take the risk of being wiping out of the Earth.
To address this matter, the deployment of biological hunting ban from local
authorities is necessary. Being strict punishment or eventually going to jail may
impede the poacher to hunt more animals. Besides, the government should
construct national parks for endangered animals such as rhinoceros, pandas,…
Those organization would provide animals the protective inhabitant from outside
hazards as well as the optimum care from well-trained staff.
In conclusion, our prompt intervention will play a key role in the conservation of
nature diversity. As a result, human effort should be made immediately to
prevent any species from becoming extinction.

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