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Primary Claim:
- Abortions should retain their legality in all of the fifty states because it is a personal right
Subclaims:
- Abortions prevent many women from enduring health promblems, trauma, and in some
cases death.
- Abortions also allow for women who are not ready for a child, do not have the finances to
take care of a child, or simply do not want a child to make that decision for themselves.
A. My thesis: Abortions should retain their legality in the United States not
only because they are a personal right established in multiple court cases,
but because of the various medical and personal reasons a woman may
powers to create laws in the United States, the Supreme Court holds the
1. The decision made by the Supreme Court in Roe v. Wade (1973) the courts held that
2. The Supreme Court is not the only thing that supports the legality of abortions, the right
3. By creating a negative stigma around abortions and the women who get them,
anti-abortion activists are ignoring the important reasons women get them.
4. Although America is said to be the land of the free, the citizens directly try to take away
5. Women get abortions for various reasons and should not be denied them simply because
of a personal belief.
This outline shows good organization by showing that the topics are connected. I would
like to change the sudden jump between the second and third ideas to a more smooth transition. I
think that overall my outline has a strong legal and political backbone which makes it easier to
organize the topics as they are all connected together. The reasons behind why women get
abortions will shed a light further on why they should remain legal. I am proud of the utilization
of the Supreme Court Cases as well as laws and rights in order to back my main claim.