Thessis Statement : Technology is very important for a company, becaus
technology can develop human resources and can assist
companies in the production.
Topic Sentence 1 : Technology can develop human resources.
Topic Sentence 2 : Technology can assist companies in the production system.
Supporting Sentence 1 : 1. First, technology can improve human creativity. Detail : a. Today, the marketing staff can be more creative, because now there are some applications that can create posters with many interesting features. b. On the shirt company, now the employees can be more creative, because there are applications that can design t-shirts as you wish. 2. Second, technology can help human in doing a job. Detail : a. With the computer, then a manager is easier in the presentation. b. A manager is easier to check attendance with the feature of finger print on the company. 3. And the third, technology can improve human efficiency in work. Detail : a. Employees can more quickly complete the work in the presence of computer technology. b. Companies can be more efficient in marketing, because they do not have to market directly, but can use social media. Supporting Sentence 2 : 1. First, technology can improve product quality. Detail : a. At the furniture company, there is a "Powder Coating" technology that can make the coating become flat, thick and smooth, so improving product quality. b. Currently, dairy companies can improve the quality of their products by using milk squeeze machines, because with these machines the quality of milk is more hygienic. 2. Second, technology can improve efficiency of the company in the production. Detail : a. To do packaging, In ancient times, companies used manual methods using human labor, whereas now there has been a special machine to do the packaging, so the packaging process can be more efficient. b. In the bakery, now there is a technology "mixer", so the process of stirring the dough faster. 3. And the third, technology can increase the production of a company. Detail : a. At the laundry company, there is now a large "washing machine", so they can produce a larger amount and can increase their production. b. With the technology of "mixer", the bakery company can be faster in production, so they can increase production. Topic Sentence 1 : Technology is very improtant for a company because technology can develop human resources. Supporting Sentence 1 : First, technology can improve human creativity. Detail 1 : Today, the marketing staff can be more creative, because now there are some applications that can create posters with many interesting features. Detail 2 : On the shirt company, now the employees can be more creative, because there are applications that can design t-shirts as you wish. Supporting Sentence 2 : Second, technology can improve efficiency of the company in the production. Detail 1 : With the computer, then a manager is easier in the presentation. Detail 2 : A manager is easier to check attendance with the feature of finger print on the company. Supporting Sentence 3 : And the third, technology can improve human efficiency in work. Detail 1 : Employees can more quickly complete the work in the presence of computer technology. Detail 2 : Companies can be more efficient in marketing, because they do not have to market directly, but can use social media. Topic Sentence 2 : Technology is very important for a company because can assist companies in the production. Supporting Sentence 1 : First, technology can improve product quality. Detail 1 : At the furniture company, there is a "Powder Coating" technology that can make the coating become flat, thick and smooth, so improving product quality. Detail 2 : Currently, dairy companies can improve the quality of their products by using milk squeeze machines, because with these machines the quality of milk is more hygienic. Supporting Sentence 2 : Second, technology can improve efficiency of the company in the production. Detail 1 : To do packaging, In ancient times, companies used manual methods using human labor, whereas now there has been a special machine to do the packaging, so the packaging process can be more efficient. Detail 2 : In the bakery, now there is a technology "mixer", so the process of stirring the dough faster. Supporting Sentence 3 : And the third, technology can increase the production of a company. Detail 1 : Employees can more quickly complete the work in the presence of computer technology. Detail 2 : With the technology of "mixer", the bakery company can be faster in production, so they can increase production. Concluding Paragraph :
In conclusion, technology has several benefits to the company, among
them can develop human resources and help companies in the production.
Therefore, technology is very important for a company.