Thessis Statement : Technology is very important for a company, becaus

technology can develop human resources and can assist

companies in the production.

Topic Sentence 1 : Technology can develop human resources.

Topic Sentence 2 : Technology can assist companies in the production system.

Supporting Sentence 1 :
1. First, technology can improve human creativity.
Detail :
a. Today, the marketing staff can be more creative, because now there are
some applications that can create posters with many interesting features.
b. On the shirt company, now the employees can be more creative, because
there are applications that can design t-shirts as you wish.
2. Second, technology can help human in doing a job.
Detail :
a. With the computer, then a manager is easier in the presentation.
b. A manager is easier to check attendance with the feature of finger print
on the company.
3. And the third, technology can improve human efficiency in work.
Detail :
a. Employees can more quickly complete the work in the presence of
computer technology.
b. Companies can be more efficient in marketing, because they do not have
to market directly, but can use social media.
Supporting Sentence 2 :
1. First, technology can improve product quality.
Detail :
a. At the furniture company, there is a "Powder Coating" technology that
can make the coating become flat, thick and smooth, so improving
product quality.
b. Currently, dairy companies can improve the quality of their products by
using milk squeeze machines, because with these machines the quality of
milk is more hygienic.
2. Second, technology can improve efficiency of the company in the
production.
Detail :
a. To do packaging, In ancient times, companies used manual methods
using human labor, whereas now there has been a special machine to do
the packaging, so the packaging process can be more efficient.
b. In the bakery, now there is a technology "mixer", so the process of
stirring the dough faster.
3. And the third, technology can increase the production of a company.
Detail :
a. At the laundry company, there is now a large "washing machine", so they
can produce a larger amount and can increase their production.
b. With the technology of "mixer", the bakery company can be faster in
production, so they can increase production.
Topic Sentence 1 : Technology is very improtant for a company because
technology can develop human resources.
Supporting Sentence 1 : First, technology can improve human creativity.
Detail 1 : Today, the marketing staff can be more creative,
because now there are some applications that can
create posters with many interesting features.
Detail 2 : On the shirt company, now the employees can be more
creative, because there are applications that can design
t-shirts as you wish.
Supporting Sentence 2 : Second, technology can improve efficiency of the
company in the production.
Detail 1 : With the computer, then a manager is easier in the
presentation.
Detail 2 : A manager is easier to check attendance with the
feature of finger print on the company.
Supporting Sentence 3 : And the third, technology can improve human
efficiency in work.
Detail 1 : Employees can more quickly complete the work in the
presence of computer technology.
Detail 2 : Companies can be more efficient in marketing,
because they do not have to market directly, but can
use social media.
Topic Sentence 2 : Technology is very important for a company because
can assist companies in the production.
Supporting Sentence 1 : First, technology can improve product quality.
Detail 1 : At the furniture company, there is a "Powder Coating"
technology that can make the coating become flat,
thick and smooth, so improving product quality.
Detail 2 : Currently, dairy companies can improve the quality of
their products by using milk squeeze machines,
because with these machines the quality of milk is
more hygienic.
Supporting Sentence 2 : Second, technology can improve efficiency of the
company in the production.
Detail 1 : To do packaging, In ancient times, companies used
manual methods using human labor, whereas now
there has been a special machine to do the packaging,
so the packaging process can be more efficient.
Detail 2 : In the bakery, now there is a technology "mixer", so
the process of stirring the dough faster.
Supporting Sentence 3 : And the third, technology can increase the production
of a company.
Detail 1 : Employees can more quickly complete the work in the
presence of computer technology.
Detail 2 : With the technology of "mixer", the bakery company
can be faster in production, so they can increase
production.
Concluding Paragraph :

In conclusion, technology has several benefits to the company, among

them can develop human resources and help companies in the production.

Therefore, technology is very important for a company.