Task 1: : Identifying Sentence Problems in these sentences and improve them.

fragment (FR) run on (RO) comma splice (CS) choppy (CH) correct (CO) stringy (ST) , unparralel (UP)

1. _FR______A place where I used to play with my friends and I spent most of my childhood is the field
after my house.

2. ___ST____ Julia Roberts lives in Manhattan, not far from the apartment which she once shared with
her sister in Greenwich Village.

3. ___FR____My grandmother who I hadn’t seen for a long time, called me by my Chinese name.

4. ___CS____In high school, Julia found classwork boring because she didn't know how to be a good
student.

5. ___CH____ Our waitress was costumed in a kimono. She had painted her face white and had
arranged her hair in an unswept lacquered beehive.

6. ___UP_____ With some paint, wallpaper, and new drapes, this apartment will look better.

7. ___CH____After our walk, Uncle Raymond and I went to my house, looked up each bird in a guide,
and showed my parents.

8. ___CO____Somethings in my grandmother’s apartmnet were still the same some looked different.

9. ____FR___ While I was flying on the airplane. I looked out in the window in anticipation.

10. ___CS____The best time to go bird-watching is just after sunrise, so my uncle picks me up in his
truck while most of the people in my neighborhood are still sleeping.