Second Speech Evaluator

Name: Genesis Villa Course: 18:00-20:00

Congratulations speakers for your speech, you have done a great job. I realized that you gave the
best in your presentation, because I can see the fantastic pictures that you used in your power point.
You must continue like this and always be responsible in your life.
I want to talk about Adrian's speech first.
POSITIVE ASPECT ASPECTS TO IMPROVE
Adrian has a high level of vocabulary and he Adrian needs to read and understand a little
can express his ideas in a creative way, he used more about the correct structure of a speech,
his body language during his speech and that because he didn't follow the structure that he
helped him to connect more with the public learned in superior speaking class and maybe
around him. the public couldn't connect with him and his
ideas.

Now I wanna talk about Ninoska.

POSITIVE ASPECT ASPECTS TO IMPROVE
Ninoska needs to use the vocabulary that we
Ninoska understands and uses the correct have learned in class during her speech so that
structure of speech extremely well and she this speech can achieve a more sophisticated
uses her body language to express her ideas. language, for example, she said in one
sentence "it was beautiful" she could have said
"this place was undeniably beautiful" and his
speech was able to have more impact.

In conclusion, the two speakers were extremely fantastic and although they must have been with
their hearts in their mouths, they looked as cool as cucumber.