Harris Cheung 4D (3)

16/3/2021

Composition 6 corrections

1. In our secondary life, we can meet a lot of people and some of them can be our friends.

2. Here, I would like to talk about some qualities that are most important in a friend.

3. First of all, among the traits of a best friend, I think honesty is one of the most significance.

4. Your friends should tell you the truth, rather than lying to keep you in a short period of

happiness.

5. For example, friends should be straightforward when they discuss something about you.

6. And if you find out that your friends are lying to other people, the chances they are

dishonest to you are high as well.

7. Good friends are accepting, even though you are different.

8. For example, they will not comment on how you look or fight with you when you have

different views about something.

9. Although friends can encourage you to say more about values, it shouldn’t be done with

the goal of changing who you are.

10. There are a lot of ways to respect others

11. For example, your friend should keep your secrets and not telling other people.

12. For conclusion, friendships that are built on trust are usually long-lasting and deeply

satisfying.