Body paragraph 2

The authors said, trophy hunting may change the ecosystem cycle of animal that which is one of
the laws of nature. The authors used the fact statement technique including an expert opinion.
The authors also explains about impacts if trophy is legalised, it will cause the number of
animals will be decrease at certain place and increase the other animal population. We had
agree with that statement because we also believe eventhough this trophy hunting can bring
profit or financial contribution to certain parties and industries but if not control similarly bad
manage, it will hurt the overall population of a spesies as an example given by the authors.
However, the authors only used a general example and not specific such as which country is
involved. The authors should include what is the type of action by the local authorities.

Cadangan untuk Conclusion

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2.To sum it up, the authors iniatiated the paragraph with the general thesis statement and the
authors gave a clear purpose and the summary of impact of trophy hunting is stated concisely.
3.In addition, the sentences continue with what action we are suppose to do as a human being
and to protect our ecosystem of flora, fauna and animal.

5.The authors use a discussion and argument technique to end their essay. We think it is
effective because the authors is clearly listdown the main ideas about what