Name: Claudia Orlandini Mendoza

Writing N° 1

Hi Josy,
I am glad to communicate(WRONG WORD) with you again. I know you must be very busy
doing your thesis but I want to tell you about me. Sometimes living alone can be stressful
because I have to organize my day and accomplish my academic activities and do chores
around the house but I don't have time. I have a hard time organizing my activities. However,
I got good grades in my first exams, I will try to improve my way of organization. Maybe, my
roommate and I could make a list of chores and assign them to each other. Could you give
me some advices(GRAMMAR) for that?
In and other hand(NOT CLEAR), I have a great new(NOT CLEAR). I am going to do my
thesis here because I have been choosed(GRAMMAR) for the investigation project. It is
important for me this opportunity(REDO THIS SENTENCE) because I want to try getting an
offer job(WRONG ORDER) in this country(HERE? PERU?). Working here would be an
accomplished dream, for that I have to do two things. First, learning English very well
(GRAMMAR) and second one looking forward jobs opportunities wherever(NOT CLEAR). I
realize now that my having gotten a good grade in the university is the reason I got this
vacant in the master(NOT CLEAR). What do you believe?
Finally, I want to tell you that I am still excited about having been accepted in the
scholarship. This scholarship is to study a master’ degree in food for one year and I have to
live in Palencia. This place is a city worth seeing because it is beautiful and quiet and every
day is different about the weather because there are days too cold(GRAMMAR) and others
not. Even, some days snowed too strong(NOT CLEAR) and it was amazing to see snow.
Honestly(MISSING PRONOUN) is the best experience to live and I have enough time to
know more places.
“Be persistent to achieve our dreams”, I often say.

Well Josy, I wait to communicate with you very soon.

Take care