Writing Corrections

1 - Going away from home is good for the

students because they get independendy, they
also make friends and get involve in the
campus atmosphere. However, a student
needs a quiet place to focus on their studies.
2 - The first one is that if you get used to avoid significant responsibilities
such as paying the rent, fill in paperwork or just as simple as go to the
supermarket, one day when you really need to perform these activities, you
don’t know how to do them.
3 - Cleaning and cooking is also better, parents can their sons if an exam is
approaching.
4 -Despite of not being indenpendent…Despite this advantages.
5 - Living with your parents at the same time you are studying
has some advantages, for example: A lot of money can be
saved.
6 - Likewise, if you live in residentes you will socialise
and learn things about other people.
7 - One of the most persuasivo arguemtns for remaining at
home is not having to pay bills at any rate. Which prevente
students from spending large amounts of money.
8 - Alicante is a very toruistic city because of so many things, but what about
living in it? Well, it actually has beautiful scenery and lots of things to do and
see if you are young, so young people love to live in Alicante.
9 - Secondly, Alicante often has traffic jams. Furthermore, there are not many
bicycle lanes.
10 - Finally, most of the people too much time is being spent on digital
screens.