1. Revise the following sentences to achieve involvement through personalization and by adding pronouns and names. a. Matt, JCL Talent will need further information before we process this request. b. Emma, it has been decided that a new procedure must be put in to avoid further mechanical failures. c. John, the department supervisor, wants to thank you for your effort. d. Amy, I think you have done a great job. I want you to know that you have surpassed this month’s quota by 12 percent. I believe I speak for the entire department by saying thank you. e. Andrew, if the computer overloads, constantly press reset and control. Wait for the screen command. If it reads “Data Recovered” continue operations. If it reads “I/O Error”, call the computer resource center. 2. Revise the following sentences to achieve reader involvement and benefit, using positive words and pronouns. a. We can lay your cable after you sign the attached waver. b. John, purchase the right program. If we continue to keep efficient records, our customers will be satisfied. c. When you pay the bill, the services can remain. d. If you correctly quote and paraphrase, you will receive a good grade on the assignment. e. Your team has won 6 of their last 12 games.