B 2 PARAGRAPH PEER ASSESSMENT FORMAT

Name Luna Rodríguez

TOPIC SENTENCE The topic was clear and understood
“The most captivating view I ever saw was on the seventeen floor,
on my father's duplex apartment, in the principal balcony, which
has a beautiful city center view.”
MAIN IDEA It is understood that she is talking about the view that he likes the
most and the explanation is understood
Supporting ideas 1. details are evident in the paragraph
2. the ideas are clear and concrete
3. use the indicated rules

Conclusion
“There is no more beautiful feeling than seeing your city, where
you were born and grew up, with all the footprints that people had
been making for years and years, and it will continue during the
time our place continues progressing.”

SUGGESTIONS Make the sentences shorter