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AA Position Paper

1. Upon searching on the policies of different banks in the Philippines, select one bank that you find stable and
efficient; and do a thorough research on their policies.
2. Write position paper, stating the company’s policy, position, and philosophy; and proposing evidence and
reason why the bank can manage well your personal finances.
3. In writing the position paper, provide the following:
A. Thesis statement
B. Textual evidence
C. Documented sources using citations
D. Title of your position paper

TITLE OF YOUR POSITION PAPER

The Philippine central bank has approved rules that will strengthen banks as financial frauds surge during
the pandemic. The Bangko Sentral ng Pilipinas stated in a statement that banks and financial institutions
must implement a risk-focused screening process that takes into account the sensitivities of holdings that
may necessitate strict measures. It said that a candidate's background and character, conflicts of interest,
and "propensity to perpetrate fraud or irregularity" must be adequately understood, and that central bank
information should be utilized in the screening process. In November, the Philippines reported an increase
in financial frauds as internet platforms were more commonly utilized during the coronavirus pandemic.
The conventional strategy of the government to tackling welfare issues such as poverty and inequality is
addressed through targeted programs centered on the development of citizens' skills. It is primarily viewed
through the lens of fiscal policy. Inequality is thus primarily attributed via the prism of public economics,
where income taxation and government spending are used to implement redistribution. However, there is a
growing corpus of scholarship that explores the distributional effects. The effect of monetary policy that is
related to the principal goal of most central banks in the world. Attaining low and consistent inflation in an
economy, an erratic and high inflation environment exists. Since it leads to heightened uncertainty and
expectation of a future, fundamentals of the economy are unstable.
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Peer Revising and Editing

1. After having written the position paper, exchange essay with your partner.
2. Read your partner’s work and with the use of the rubrics, assess on how well your pair’s paper
followed the guidelines in writing a position paper.
3. Shade with yellow the item of which your pair’s paper is evaluated.

Pair’s Name:__________________________

Title of the Position Paper: _________________

Criteria Poor Fair Good Excellent

Content & No clear position Position not clearly Clear position taken Takes a strong, well
Development taken; reasons stated; development and defined; some defined position;
undeveloped; no is brief; unrelated, reasons and some uses at least three
supporting facts used unsupported general details present, but appropriate reasons
statements, reasons, not fully developed. with at least two
and details; minimal Counter arguments supporting details for
facts used. Counter addressed. each reason. Counter
arguments not arguments effectively
acknowledged. addressed, w/o
undercutting
position.

Organization & Organization and Structure of the Structure is mostly Structure of paper is
Structure structure detract paper is not easy to clear and easy to clear and easy to
from the message of follow. Paragraph follow. Paragraph follow. Paragraph
the writer. transitions need transitions are transitions are logical
Paragraphs are improvement. present. Conclusion and maintain the
disjointed and lack Conclusion is missing, is logical. flow of thought
transition of or if provided, does throughout the
thoughts. not flow from the paper. Conclusion is
body of the paper. logical and flows
 from the body of the
paper.
Format Paper lacks many Paper follows most Paper follows Paper follows all
elements of correct guidelines. Paper is designated designated
formatting. Paper is over/ under word. guidelines. Paper is guidelines. Paper is
inadequate/ the appropriate the appropriate
excessive in length. length as described length as described
Paper is not double for the assignment. for the assignment.
spaced Format is good. Format enhances
readability of paper

Grammar, Paper contains Paper contains few Rules of grammar, Rules of grammar,
Punctuation. & grammatical, grammatical, usage, and usage, and
Spelling punctuation, and punctuation and punctuation are punctuation are
spelling errors. spelling errors. followed with minor followed; spelling is
Language uses jargon Language lacks clarity errors. Few or no correct. Language is
or conversational or includes the use of spelling errors. clear and precise;
tone some jargon or sentences display
conversational tone. consistently strong,
varied structure.

Overall Evaluation:

What is/are the strongest point/s of the essay?

What need to improve?

RUBRICS:

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Ideas This paper is clear This paper is The writer is Topic is not well- As yet, the paper
and focused. It mostly focused, beginning to define defined and/or has no clear
holds the reader's and has some the topic, even there are too many sense of purpose
attention. good details and though development topics. or central theme.
Relevant details quotes. is still basic or To extract
and quotes enrich general. meaning from the
the central theme. text, the reader
must make
inferences based
on sketchy or
missing details.
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organization The organization Paper (and The organizational Sentences within The writing lacks
enhances and paragraphs) are structure is strong paragraphs make a clear sense of
showcases the mostly enough to move the sense, but the order direction. Ideas,
central idea or organized, in reader through the of paragraphs does details, or events
theme. The order, order, and text without too not. seem strung
structure of makes sense to much confusion. together in a
information is the reader. loose or random
compelling and fashion; there is
moves the reader no identifiable
through the text. internal structure.
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Sentence The writing has an The writing The text hums along The text seems The reader has to
Fluency easy flow, rhythm, mostly flows, with a steady beat, choppy and is not practice quite a
and cadence. and usually but tends to be more easy to read orally. bit in order to
Sentences are well invites oral businesslike than give this paper a
built, with strong reading. musical, more fair interpretive
and varied mechanical than reading.
structure that fluid.
invites expressive
 oral reading.
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Conventions The writer The write The writer shows The writer seems Errors in
demonstrates a understands reasonable control to have made little spelling,
good grasp of good writing over a limited range effort to use punctuation,
standard writing conventions and of standard writing conventions: capitalization,
conventions (e.g., usually uses conventions. spelling, usage, and
spelling, them correctly. Conventions are punctuation, grammar and/or
punctuation, Paper is easily sometimes handled capitalization, paragraphing
capitalization, read and errors well and enhance usage, grammar repeatedly
grammar, usage, are rare; minor readability; at other and/or distract the
paragraphing) and touch-ups times, errors are paragraphing have reader and make
uses conventions would get this distracting and multiple errors. the text difficult
effectively to piece ready to impair readability. to read.
enhance publish.
readability.
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Presentation The form and The format only The writer's The writer's The reader
presentation of the has a few message is message is only receives a
text enhances the mistakes and is understandable in understandable garbled message
ability for the generally easy this format. occasionally, and due to problems
reader to to read and paper is messily relating to the
understand and pleasing to the written. presentation of
connect with the eye. the text, and is
message. It is not typed.
pleasing to the
eye.