Sample Essay: Letter of advice

Dear Mary,
I understand that you’re currently feeling frustrated and upset. I’m here now
to lend you a helping hand. I genuinely hope my advice is constructive
enough to help you disentangle from your difficulty.
First of all, I’m convinced that it isn’t an appropriate idea to accept the
invitation to be a part-time model. It’s because no one can ensure your safety
when you participate in their training courses. In recent years, there have
been reports claiming that there were countless model agencies which
weren’t trustworthy. It has been justified that there’ll be definite risks of
being victims of fraud if you’re tricked by those dishonest agencies. In some
worse cases, raping is even involved during the training courses! As a result,
for the sake of your safety, I suggest you not to promise them.
Additionally, in my opinions, you should turn them down nicely by sending
them an email. In the email, you should include your name, and reasons why
you don’t want to be a part-time model. If they continue to persuade you to
accept their invitation, please don’t reply them. I believe sending an email is
the most friendly, yet decisive way to reject them. Please bear in mind that
it’s extremely crucial to be aware of tricksters, especially in adolescence
years.
All in all, I sincerely hope my advice can help you and brighten up your day.
I understand that my suggestion of writing an email is a bit time-consuming.
However, in the view of favourable outcome, it’s definitely worthwhile.
Please count on me whenever you encounter any obstacles in the future.
Look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Chris
(4B Cherry Luk Wing Heng)