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Marghanita Laski:
She was a feminist, left-wing author who contributed through her
writing to the feminist movement. It was a time when women were
pursuing equal rights in a patriarchal society
The story is about a young newlywed woman who is struggling with
real and psychological challenges in her new relationship with her
ambitious and pompous husband. The theme of feminism explores
deep emotional scars that the protagonist is dealing with
Analysis:
Caroline, the protagonist in this story, has taken her car for the first
time outside of Florence, where she has moved after her marriage to
her husband, who constantly tries to overshadow her with his own
knowledge.
“..something of her own to contribute…”
Husband had lots of souvenirs due to constant travel and
nature of work, uses this knowledge as a way to throw his
weight around. She shows that she can be his equal when she
goes alone in this exploration of the countryside. She has her
guide-book but she is not fluent with her Italian.
A power struggle is seen – she is annoyed by his “know it all”
attitude, to make a point to him and herself she travels outside
of Florence and explores the countryside. She is intrigued by
the tower and secretly hopes that he does not have any
knowledge about it so that she can win his respect by sharing
her experience
She wants to escape his influence, work on her own
initiative and individualism by driving on her own,
taking pride that she follows all the traffic laws. She
wants to make a statement … to show autonomy
Strong symbolism:
Tower:
Phallic symbol of male domination
Symbolizes power and control
The bats inside the tower symbolise the emotional scars
she has
Going out alone:
She wants to be alone, in search of her identity
The husband seems to take quite a lot of pride in his knowledge,
using it to prove his superiority. He is pompous, overbearing and self
absorbed. He is also condescending when he compared his wife to
the young lady in the portrait
She doesn’t want to be classified as an “ordinary tourist”
She resents the fact that her husband took her to famous,
extraordinary places showing off elite Italian pieces while she
just wanted to learn about ordinary art. She feels controlled
and overpowered
There is sarcasm in the calling of these trips
“pilgrimages” – for her husband Neville they exude
elite aura
She was quite done with Italian art – the excitement had
waned, as seen in the usage of “dutifully” “politely” ~
every line is reeking of passive-aggressive sarcasm
She is irritated by his refusal to admit even the slightest bit of
ignorance, when he talks about Giovana and her husband and
the history behind it
Foreshadowing:
Repeated mentions of Giovana, black magic
She is “rather like” the young girl ~ like her, she
was young, beautiful, and asked too many
questions, and perhaps like her, she will be
doomed to the same fate
The reader is then moved back to the present time, driving to the
tower
It was barren around the tower, indicative of what was to
come… no life (symbolism and foreshadowing)
She enters it, thinking it’s going to be a quick visit for the
proof of independence, and starts climbing the stairs
The voice of reason (the inner instinct of survival) tells her to turn
back when she reaches quite high near the top
A buildup of suspense – hesitation, shivering – despite her
sixth sense pushes on into uncharted territory
She is doing this only to prove to herself and her
husband that she is mature
The breaks in the rail symbolize the uncertainties of life
The danger increases when the rail crumbles away, creating
more and more suspense in the atmosphere
To create tension for the reader, every step she takes to
ascend is highlighted – it marks the passage of time, and
the steps down are perhaps a final countdown to her
death
The timespan is stretched to make this dull act of
climbing steps more interesting, as now the reader is
wondering what would happen with each passing step..
In her descent the twos exceed the actual number of
470… the count goes up to 523. Does she literally fall to
the dark pit and die?
The fact that the reader knows that there are 470 steps in
total but the count continues indicates the possibility of
Caroline falling off
There is constant tussle between the voice of reason and
her desire to prove herself. Her ego is badly bruised.
When she reaches the end, there is nothing but a piece of broken
railing, creating even more fear, which has paralysed the reader as
well as Caroline
She realizes as she is emotionally and physically spent that it was
pointless for her to go through this ordeal just to assuage her broken
ego
Once she reaches the platform at the top, the self-destructive feeling
takes over momentarily but the voice of reason prevents her from
doing anything drastic or dangerous
She finds herself in a dilemma should she end her agony or be
forced to return to her suffocating marriage. If she lets her ego
control her actions she will put an end to her miseries. She is
experiencing fright which is real and also psychological
She tries to keep her nerves under control, talking to herself
positively to make herself step back
Eventually, she begins to go down, she decides to move down
cautiously to show the strength of her conviction to prove a point.
The descent is dangerous and she is dizzy if she misses a single step,
she would perish. There is no safety net
She purposely steps down/ jumps down to end her life … is
she depressed with her life and in her despondency ends her
life or
She accidentally falls
If she does die, then the story she was writing, in the
beginning, would never be finished, just like the story of
her life – she would never be able to fight her fate right,
fix her marriage and find true happiness.
Author’s Craft:
Setting:
Narration:
Plot:
Conflict:
Climax:
The Climax is at the end, when despite the voice of reason, she
continues to climb, eventually reaching the top, only to realise that
she has no escape she must go down the treacherous path that she
climbed up in the hope that she will have some memorable and
valuable experiences to share with Neville
Ending:
Literary Devices:
Symbolism:
Alliteration:
‘timeless time’ highlighting the fact that this climb seems like
forever
It could also be allocated to her dull marriage, which is like a
dragging dead weight attached to her ankle
Imagery:
Suspense:
Characterization:
Neville:
He is a pompous, domineering man who is desperate to prove his
intellect not only to his wife but also the people he meets.
This is seen when he often visits cultural attraction not to gain
new knowledge – he already knew it all, as seen when he is
able to provide a description and history of every art piece
being displayed – but to show off to his wife that he knew this
knowledge.
It is also portrayed by the fact that these trips were a sort of
“pilgrimage” for him – they were not passionate endeavours
but a habitual, almost religious event that he placed high
importance on (for it was a way to prove his place in society).
His condescending nature is shown in the way he treats his wife,
acting like a teacher congratulating a child for doing well in class
He also has a superiority complex, which is why he wants to bring
his wife to his standard and class, which he sees as better than hers
Caroline:
From the beginning, we can see that she is unhappy with her
marriage, taking what little victories (such as writing) that she can
get
Despite this, she is still forced to follow him around on his
endeavours, even taking the Italian guidebook she was “urged”
to take,
Due to this, she decides to rebel against her husband and the
patriarchy by climbing the tower
Themes:
Dependence:
Control
The Patriarchy:
Inner Demons:
Rebellion:
It is at this point that when the call of the void becomes overbearing
that her voice of reason finally kicks in, initiating an internal
struggle between suicidal tendencies caused by an absolute lack of
self-confidence and self-preservation
It is depicted by her verbal conversations with herself, which
makes it seem like she was trying to convince herself what to
do.
The tenseness of that moment is highlighted extremely
effectively with the usage of alliteration – it is described as
“timeless time”, making it seem to go on forever.
When it initially starts to win, an ally of her self-doubt, the bats in
the tower, attack her, again causing her extreme fear and pain.
The author purposefully leaves it ambiguous as to how this
struggle ended – perhaps she fell to her death, or perhaps she
exited to her car, so scared that she still counted her steps.
Quotes:
Something of her own to contribute
Anaesthetized to Italian art
She was immeasurably, unbelievably high and alone and the ground below
was a world away
Timeless time