Dear Sally,

Thanks for your interview, it was very interesting to know a little more about you. It
was a pity not to be able to talk more to tell you about myself. For this reason I would
like to tell you some things about me.
What can I tell you? Well, I am from Spain, but now I am working in Canada like you. I
am a business woman and I am working for an important multinational company. I
started to work in Spain and two years after they proposed me to work in Canada, of
course I accepted it. I studied business degree and I did finance master. In my free time
I love visiting others cities and to know new costumes and people. I have a boyfriend
since 2 year ago, we met in a new year´s party. He is Mexican and works as a biology
teacher in the university. We live in a small apartment and we are thinking to buy a
house here, because we will married next summer, and we would like to have children
in a near future.
Why don´t we arrange a meeting? Maybe we can go to drink a coffee and we can talk
quietly. Next month I am going to organise a barbecue in a special place, if you want
you can come with you husband. I hope your answer.

Best wishes.
Loren.
CORRECCIÓN
Dear Sally,
Thanks for your interview, it was very interesting to know a little more about you. It
was a pity not to be able to talk more to tell you about myself. For this reason I would
like to tell you some things about me.
What can I tell you? Well, I am from Spain, but now I am working in Canada like you. I
am a business woman and I am working for an important multinational company. I
started to work in Spain and two years after they proposed me to work in Canada, of
course I accepted it. I studied business and I did a finance master´s. In my free time I
love visiting other cities and knowing new customs and people. I´ve had a boyfriend for
2 year, we met in a New Year´s party. He is Mexican and works as a biology teacher at
university. We live in a small apartment and we are thinking about buying a house here,
because we are getting married next summer, and we would like to have children in a
near future.
Why don´t we arrange a meeting? Maybe we can go for a coffee and we can talk
quietly. Next month I am going to organise a barbecue in a special place, if you want
you can come with your husband. I can´t wait to hear from you.
Best wishes,
Loren.