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Improving Style and Cohesion
Improving Style and Cohesion
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1.Compare the text A and the text B about Zara Hadid in your Student‘s book ,page 118 / 119.
The text B has a better style.The text A is clear and easy to follow,but it lacks interest and variety.
The text B has more varied sentence structure , avoids repetition and includes more colourful and
interesting adjectives.