The diagram illustrates us how the cherry jam is

prepared. The production of cherry jam involves a

range of stages, from picking the cherries from the
tree to separating the cherry stones and cooking
them in a jar.
First a sheet is spread on the ground and the tree is shaken to collect the cherries. Then, the cherries
are collected and transported by a lorry to the factory. By collecting the cherries are transported to
the factory. In the factory the leaves and stems are removed. Next, the cherries are washed. After
that the stone is taken out of the middle of the cherry by using a metal spike. Then, the cherries are
cooked and ingredients such as sugar; pectin and lemon juice are added. The quality of jam is
checked by an expert. They are It is then, put into jars. In the final stage, labels are stuck on the jars.
The final a label is stuck on the jars. 

Thank you for the submission, Semiha. In terms of the organization and basic grammar structure/
sequencing adverbs you haven’t got so many problems. Please check the sentences that I have
corrected.