1.

Topic Sentence: The mansion at the end of the winding driveway is an

illuminating sight.

2. Topic Sentence: Proclaiming Ninoy a hero does not guarantee that the race will
remember.

3.

1. Topic Sentence: The bonding of Filipinos and Tourists that lead them into sights
in Manila.
2. Topic Sentence: The Advantages of having Cats.
3. Topic Sentence: The ascendancy of better train system.

C.
1. Characteristic: Unity
Explanation: Because it shows in the paragraph that all of the sentences are
related to Filipino. Also the whole paragraph begins and ends with one focus only.

2. Coherence
Explanation: Because it arranged in a logical manner, and it makes us understood it
easily by the ideas given and signal devices.

3. Adequate Development
Explanation: Because the paragraph showed some evidences, examples, facts and
details about the topic.

D.
1. Flaw: It lacks of transitions. Transitions are needed within the paragraph.
Revision: I have a lot of interests in my school. First, My favorite place to stay
in school is the library. It may be surprising but i like the library for some
reasons. Next , I have friends in my school and i like talking to them.
While, I am more into quite places. Also i am excited to gain a knowledge.
Moreover, I am thankful when teachers help me in my studies. Therefore, the
bookshelves are tall and you can hide behind them.
I am glad by what i discovered in the pages of book; it's kinda pleasing because of
the genres of the book. Lastly, i can even sleep and relax during my free time!
Thats's all my interests in my school.

2. Flaw: The last sentence. It does not focus and there's no proper ending.
Revision: There are many causes for being "friend-zoned" by your crush. One can be
that your crush likes someone else. Another can be that he/ she sees you as a
sibling. Next, the object of your affection could have other priorities, like
focusing on his/her studies. No matter the reason, it is always good to remember
that you should not measure your value and self-esteem on whether or not your crush
likes you. Truly, there are always more fish in the sea! Meaning your crush is not
the only human in the world. That's the many causes for being "friend zoned" by
your crush.

3. Flaw: The paragraph lacks of evidence.

Revision: The K to 12 program has allowed for more students to learn a new
language, apart from English and Filipino. Just 20 Percent of K-12 Students Are
Learning a Foreign Language. Learning a foreign language helps children see the
world through different lenses. There are manay benefits of learning a language,
that is here are many benefits of learning a language, that is, why you should see
learning a new language as a welcome challenge instead of a burden. There is the
fact that it boosts a student's brain power because your reading, memory, and
problem solving skills are sharpened. It also allows us to be exposed to new
cultures and thus, increases our cultural sensitivity. There are a lot of people
who are more confident because they can express themselves in different languages.
Many career opportunities await those who know another language. And these are just
some of the reasons why you should learn a new language.

E.
1. Many memes on the internet are actually socially relevant.
a. Memes contribute to the worldwide social phenomenon.
b. Memes increase and master viral marketing strategy and social engagement.
c. Memes help people to express their ideas and insights.
d. Memes today hugely influence modern language and culture.

2. A long commute to school has both advantages and disadvantages.

a. Long commute causes people to be late on their meetings, classes and works.
b. By a long commute, you can finish or have idea about your homework.
c. Long commute can make people bored.
d. Long commute lead to decreased job satisfaction and increased risk of mental
health issues.