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I. OVERHEAD OUTLINE
● BRIEF SUMMARY
● NOTABLE PARTS/ CRITICISM
● BRIEF QUOTES
● CONCLUSION
● SIMILAR BOOKS?
● STAR RATING

A. BRIEF SUMMARY
a. AUTHOR AND BOOK TITLE MUST BE ITALICIZED AND MENTIONED AT
LEAST ONCE
b. Summary of Story
c. Genre
i. Sci-fi fantasy
ii. Historical Fiction

B. NOTABLE PARTS/CRITICISM
a. PROS
i. Historical fiction
1. Does its best to stay true to it
ii. Interesting cast
1. Characters other than the main protagonist are memorable, much
needed
2. Other characters are given the spotlight
iii. Great start to fiction adventure books
b. CONS
i. The modern period was rushed and the sense of urgency was not present
1. The sense of urgency only came in points of the adventure
ii. NEEDS. MORE. DETAIL.
iii. Potential of other characters not utilized
 1. Elizabeth
2. Boriana
iv. Graphic depictions of torture and implications of rape
v. Jarring chapters/pace
1. Other chapters are need not to be separated but expounded on to
further emphasize time difference between spaces
2. Too much cuts in between chapters, sometime not even going
further than a paragraph before jumping back
a. Above details make it difficult to remain focused on the
book without getting dizzy
vi. Vocabulary random and out of place
1. HIghlight Luke and Bat

C. QUOTES
a. Of Love (Iona the Blind)

D. CONCLUSION
a. Great initial introduction to adventure books, but not for the faint of heart due to
gruesome depictions and uncomfortable topics such as rape, sex, and profane
words

E. SIMILAR BOOKS

F. STAR RATING
a. 3 OUT OF 5 STARS