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CEATL’s European Literary
Translators’ E-zine
Counterpoint • No.4 • 2020
Contents
From the editors 3
My three languages: 5
The political backdrop of a
Polish translator’s career
Hanna Jankowska
special feature:
machine translation & literature
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me and my dictionary 38
Variants – a lucky break for languages
Jacqueline Csuss
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From the
editors
While preparing this new issue of for quite a while experienced the radical
Counterpoint, a fascinating book came changes machine translation entails.
to mind: the facsimile of a 12th-century When it comes to the translation of
manuscript, written in the region that literary texts, the question of how
used to be called Upper Mesopotamia. useful machines could be has for a
In this text the author, İsmail al-Jazari, long time been met with cynicism.
who some believe was a source of But recent developments show that
inspiration for Da Vinci, describes and machine translation could very well
draws a large number of mechanical become part of a literary translator’s
devices he invented for daily use – a life in the not too distant future.
hand-washing automaton with flush
mechanism for ritual ablutions, a boat What would that be like, what would
with machines that look like musicians it entail? Would it be ‘game over’
playing the saz, a servant filling your cup for literary translators? Will they
whenever your drink is about to run out. be turned into high-end editors,
correcting machine-produced errors?
Machines doing work for human beings Will translators still be able to engage
have stimulated human imagination with the author’s voice in a text in the
for a very long time. And just as much same way as before, when there’s also
as machines have been the subject the machine’s voice to be dealt with?
of desire, they have also invariably What about the copyright of translators
been approached with caution. What when a machine does part of the job?
if their effects turn out differently
to what had been envisaged? Five contributors raise these and
other intriguing questions in the
As literary translators, we might be special feature of our fourth issue:
confronted with a game-changing machine translation and literature.
machine sooner than we thought.
Colleagues who (also) work as James Hadley, researcher at Trinity
commercial translators have already College, Dublin, describes the
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My three
languages
The political backdrop of a
Polish translator’s career
Hanna Jankowska
I sometimes wonder if I still have the the Soviet Union”, supported the Arab
right to call myself a translator of countries. The declared and obligatory
Arabic? Yes, I graduated from Arabic political support, however, did not go
studies at Warsaw University, and for hand in hand with the dissemination
nearly 20 years I worked as a translator of information about these countries.
and interpreter of this language (not I wanted to know what the Middle East
every Oriental studies graduate was so turmoil was really about, to read the
lucky).I mention three languages on my press and literature from the rather
CV: Arabic, English, Russian, but for the unknown Arab side, to understand
last 25 years I have rarely translated it and to present its arguments. And
from Arabic. Since 2000, I have only to do so, knowledge of the language
translated two books, one of which is was essential. So, I started to learn on
waiting to appear in print (My Name my own with the Teach Yourself Arabic
Is Adam by Elias Khoury) and several tutorial, a mimeographed textbook
poems by an Iraqi poet, Hatif Janabi, for language courses and the Arabic-
who happens to be my colleague. More Russian dictionary by Baranov. By the
often I do fact checking of books about time I started my formal studies I could
the Middle East for various editors. read a simple press article. The Arab
press available at the time in Poland was
I probably would have stayed with the weekly Al-Akhbar, an organ of the
my profession as a translator of Communist Party of Lebanon, which had
Arabic if it had not been for the quite a good cultural section. This is how
changes in our part of the world. I became acquainted with the poetry of
the Palestinian resistance movement,
It was not the fascination with the exotic which fascinated me, and these were
that brought me to Arabic studies, not thus my first exercises in translation.
Arabian Nights, not an interest in Islam,
but political events. In the six-day war of While still a student, I managed to have
1967, Poland, as well as other countries some translations of poetry published
from the socialist camp “headed by in literary magazines, but my real
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Arabic literature,
first 15 of the best hundred Arab novels
selected by the Arab Writers Union. The
third was Zayni Barakat by Gamal Ghitani
I hoped I would published in 1990. Shortly afterwards,
I also completed the translation of this
stereotypes of
financial reasons. State funding was over.
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tear-jerkers, pop-psychological
guides – all those kinds of books that “Reading crime
stories […] I
had been unwelcome in communist
Poland. As one translator of Swedish,
who unsuccessfully tried to persuade
publishers to publish translations
of Swedish literature, put it, “Polish
discovered a lively
publishers firmly believe that God speaks
English”. Even today, translations modern language
that we were not
from English account for around 60%
of all translations of foreign literature
published in Poland, and according
to various estimates translated books
account for 26-40% of the book market.
taught at school”
In that strange chaotic period at the had some connection with my
beginning of the transition there was specialisation – a friend of the editor
such a demand for translators from who was looking for a translator for
English that many people with various Not Without My Daughter by Betty
language skills tried their hand at Mahmoody remembered that she knew
the profession. Some have proven someone who had graduated in Oriental
themselves as literary translators, others studies. (Iran – Iraq – apparently that
have not. I tried it, and I succeeded. didn’t make much of a difference?).
My first translations from English Together with my late friend Grażyna
Gasparska we translated the book under
a pseudonym. The second one, about
oppressed Saudi princesses, which was
also a co-translation with Gasparska,
I do not even want to mention. I
am not proud of those translations,
being aware that I have contributed
to the consolidation of the orientalist
stereotypes that I so wanted to fight
against. Fortunately, no publisher asked
me again to translate books of this kind
(and if they did, I would refuse). Having
no background in formal English studies,
especially in English literature, I did not
dare to translate English fiction. In my
work with Arabic I focused on language,
style, cultural background, etc. In
working with English, which I consider a
kind of contemporary Latin, the subject
matter is important. I was (and still
First page of Teach yourself Arabic am) lucky to translate books on themes
Photo: Hanna Jankowska that interested me. I found fulfilment
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A sense of mission
Until the mid-1990s it seemed that
Arabic literature would disappear
irretrievably from the Polish market.
But this did not happen. Poland turned
out to be the only East and Central
European country where more books
translated from Arabic were published
after the transition than before it. For
example, in the early 2000s the Smak The Polish translation of H is for Hawk
Słowa publishing house published Photo: Hanna Jankowska
several translations of modern Arab
prose. Nevertheless, translations from bluntly: if someone wants to do this
Arabic represent only about 0.09% work, they must have another source
of all translated books in Poland. of income, because they can’t earn a
living from translation. English has
I remember that in my youthful naivety enabled me to become a freelancer
I had a sense of mission: I hoped that and a full-time literary translator. It
by translating Arabic literature I would gave me the freedom so that I, in the
break entrenched stereotypes of the Arab mid-1990s, was able to leave my job
world. Now I am aware that in the reality at an Arab embassy in Warsaw where,
of the present book market original due to the dwindling political and
ambitious literature can hardly compete cultural relations, my work had become
with sex-and-violence thrash books rather pointless and unsatisfactory.
on oppressed Muslim women and bad
terrorists. But its presence is important, Missing the Russian melody
and it is available for these who care. As for Russian, that’s another story. I
have always had a sentiment for this
The majority of the few Polish literary language, for its melody, for Russian
translators from Arabic have been poetry, classic novels and songs. At
and are academic scholars. To put it the beginning of the 1990s, access to
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Russian culture was practically cut off, Publishers remember me when they look
which was quite a natural reaction to for translators of books by Arab authors
forced love for the Soviet Union. I missed who write in English (Anthony Shadid,
it – not the USSR but the culture, of Hisham Matar). My old fascinations
course. I borrowed Russian books from have faded, but still there is one book
a rental shop in one of the booths of I would love to translate. It is Fadwa
Jarmark Europa, the giant bazaar in Tuqan’s autobiography A Mountainous
Warsaw Stadium. Reading crime stories Journey that enchanted me many years
by Marinina and Dontsova, I discovered ago. Maybe someday I will have a chance
a lively modern language that we were to present it to Polish readers …
not taught at school. After several years
Russian films returned to some new
TV channels and my refreshed Russian
turned out to be of use when I was
asked to translate feature films and TV
series. Have I completely moved away
from Arabic literature? It’s hard to tell.
I do not follow its recent developments
as carefully as my colleagues in the
Academia do but I keep up with its
publications in the Polish book market.
From time to time I translate poetry.
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As it was (and still is) quite a special year, The responses about translation fees,
last-minute questions about the initial royalties, subsidies and prices, which
consequences of the COVID-19 crisis in form the greater part of the data,
Europe were included. Questions asked will be evaluated and summarised
were: if the crisis affected translators in by the end of 2020, when it is hoped
their work, if they had a lower workload, the final report will be published.
if deadlines of existing contracts were re-
negotiated, and also if they were able to How the data will help translators
concentrate and work under the stressful The results of the surveys on working
circumstances as well as they did before. conditions are used for different
purposes: Firstly, CEATL needs this
data for lobbying the EU institutions for
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Miquel Cabal-Guarro
Photo: Elvira Jiménez
Claudia Steinitz
Photo: Guido Notermans
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Literary machine
translation:
Are the computers coming for our jobs?
James Hadley
In the wake of the second world of machine translation would be fully
war, experiments in machine solved within three to five years.
translation began. In 1947, American
mathematician Warren Weaver laid Multiple exceptions to language rules
out in a memorandum his vision for Rules-based systems, comprising
how digital computers might be used bilingual dictionaries, along with
to translate human language. Earlier logical rules for how to handle the
in the decade, a series of computers, textual information were based on the
including the Bombes and Colossus had traditional language teaching methods.
been used by the Allies at Bletchley Park However, as anyone who has learnt a
to decode Nazi messages. By comparing second language knows, language rules
translation to decoding, it was not a tend to come with multiple exceptions,
great leap of imagination to conceive meaning that these systems quickly
of machines being used to render became unwieldy, slow, and plagued with
messages from one language to another. errors. In 1966, the Automatic Language
Processing Advisory Committee
During the 1950s and early 1960s, concluded that despite significant
research devoted to creating machine investment, machine translation
translation systems, primarily of the systems were not likely to reach the
English-Russian language pair, was same standards as human translators in
seen as a national security priority on the near future, and that efforts should
both sides of the Iron Curtain. One of the be moved towards developing tools to
most notable events of this decade was assist translators, what later came to be
the 1954 Georgetown–IBM experiment, known as CAT tools, such as Trados.
in which the automatic translation of
more than sixty Russian sentences into Thus, for over a decade, machine
English was carried out by a rules-based translation research in the US slowed
system. This experiment was seen as to a crawl. However, it continued in
such a success at the time that it was other countries, with the focus falling
confidently claimed that the problem on a very small number of languages,
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such as English and French, as in the data, they can produce translations
case of the METEO system used in that are indistinguishable from texts
Canada from 1977-2001 to translate produced by human translators.
weather forecasts between the country’s
two official languages. Around the So, is it game over for the human
same time, rules-based systems were translators? Well, no.
being replaced by statistical machine
translation (SMT) systems, which did
not rely on manually coded rules, but “Authorial
on large corpora of parallel sentences
which a computer uses to produce new
translations. These systems originally
styles are not
worked word-by-word, and later came
to work phrase-by-phrase. Thus, they
necessarily
work relatively well for high-resource,
relatively similar languages pairs, transferable”
where the huge number of parallel
sentences required to build the corpora While neural systems are extremely
are available. However, in the case of effective at translating certain types of
languages with substantial differences texts, especially those of a formulaic
in word order, or a limited availability of
nature with short sentences, they are still
parallel data, they tend to fair less well.
very restricted in terms of what they can
do well. This is because of technicalities
Statistics versus neurons that underlie the systems. In order to
By 2014, these were being superseded train a system, a large corpus of parallel
by systems using neural machine sentences is required, and the system
translation (NMT). These also rely on will perform better when it is trained
large corpora of parallel sentences in on the kinds of sentence that it will be
the two languages under consideration. asked to translate. For example, a system
However, neural systems are modelled trained on parallel sentences all taken
on the way that neurons communicate from car manuals will likely perform
in the human brain, where many very well at translating car manuals, and
small processes are brought together less well at translating cookery books.
to create the final product. So, they Getting past this issue is not as simple
depart from statistical systems in that as just training a system on every kind
statistical systems use their corpora as of text, because the machine has no way
the ingredients for their translations, of distinguishing which kinds of text it is
whereas neural systems use their corpora trained on and dealing with in any given
effectively to learn how to translate for instance. Therefore, training a system
themselves. These newer systems tend on a wide range of text types will likely
to produce translations more quickly and mean that the outputs for any of them
to a much higher quality – to the extent will not be as strong as if the system were
that if they are given enough training trained specifically on any one of them.
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and data from the UN. Although the language A to language C, a mediating
vast majority of the words in the poems or “bridging” translation in language B
appeared in the training data, the might be used. While sentiments about
style of the texts was so different from whether this practice should take place
what the system was trained on that at all have historically overwhelmed the
in most cases, it simply drew a blank. fact that it has and does take place very
widely, this project is interested in how
A related point is that machine the practice can be useful in helping
translation systems today work on us spreading knowledge and literature
the sentence-level, meaning that they to languages that have historically
translate one sentence in isolation, been overlooked. One of the things
and then forget about it as soon as the QuantiQual project is doing just
they move onto the next. Again, this is now is to work out how the strengths
generally not a big issue when dealing of machine translation, in drawing
with technical texts. But for literature, on a very wide range of information
where ideas, metaphors, allusions sources; categorising technicalities;
and images can be recalled sentences, and identifying patterns, can be used to
paragraphs, or even chapters later, support human translators. The team
the machines have a long way to go is finding ways to help a translator who
before they will be able to approach the is faced with something like the poems
skills of a human literary translator. in the Arabian Nights, and needing to
render them into another language.
Software as the literary
translator’s assistant
For these and many other reasons,
machine translation programmers are “Any serious
challenge to
generally extremely tentative about
what they expect from their systems and
by when. Thus, what we are currently
seeing is developers working on tools
specifically to help literary translators.
human literary
While some literary translators already
make use of CAT tools, such as Memo-Q, translators is still
a long way off”
many have not found these as relevant
to them as to technical translators. But
machines do have the ability to help with
issues specifically relevant to literature.
They are building a system which will
For example, the QuantiQual Project is not create translated poetry itself, but
researching indirect literary translations will give the human translator key details
produced by humans and machines. about the source text at a glance, which
Indirect translations are translations will allow them to work as efficiently
of translations. For example, if a as possible. For example, the software
translation cannot be made directly from can tell the translator which of the
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James Hadley
Photo: Private Archive
rhyming patterns found in this type of So, while “never say never” is probably a
poetry each text corresponds to, show good maxim, it is worth bearing in mind
where the rhymes, alliterations, and that pessimistic translators have been
assonances are, tell the translator what foretelling the arrival of their mechanical
the word counts, and average sentence replacements since 1954. In translation
lengths are, and give thesaurus-like studies and machine translation alike
glossaries in the target language for over the past seventy years, the more
each of the words found in the poems. we have found out about translation,
This way, the human translator is still the more we have seen that it is much
the one choosing the most appropriate more complicated than we ever could
options and producing the translations, have assumed. Any serious challenge
but the software is assisting them by to human literary translators is still a
allowing them to focus their attention long way off, but we are already starting
on producing text, rather than on to see tools being developed that will
searching, and collecting supporting assist literary translators in their work.
information from multiple sources.
Compared to this highly complex text
type, adapting a similar system to
work with texts such as novels to assist
translators in maintaining certain
elements of style, such as sentence
length, pronoun usage, or idiosyncratic
word usages is a relatively small step.
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found that my “textual voice” was This work of 333 pages was deemed
somewhat diminished in my post- suitable for a full-length comparison
edited work compared to its stronger of original text, machine-generated
manifestation in my earlier machine- translation and post-edited version.
independent German version.
And thus it was that, in spring 2019,
In my comments on those findings, I I fed the DeepL Translator window
argued that the diminution detected by with small portions of the original
qualitative corpus analysis might also, (the limit for any one feed is c. 5000
if not more, have to do with a general characters) – a process that took,
impoverishment of my vocabulary believe it or not, less than seven hours,
which seems to have occurred over meaning that an English-language
time in spite of the amassed wealth novel of considerable length could be
of experience as a literary translator. presented to the prospective German
In other words, there was not only reader in less than one working
the opposition “man v. machine” to day. But would it be a faithful and
consider, but also that of “then v. now”.1 creative rendering of Christopher
Isherwood in German? Would there be
Which tools did you use? a recognisable translator’s voice at all?
My suggestion to the researchers
was to use DeepL Translator, the free In addition to those aesthetic questions,
commercial machine translation service I fear certain repercussions not so much
launched in 2017, which I judged to be for not using the tool but, indeed, for
more accurate than Google Translate using it. To my non-expert mind, there
or Bing Microsoft Translator, if by no might very well be legal and contractual
means adequate for literary purposes. implications. Whose work is the
As the translation in question as well finished product? The machine’s (or its
as the more comprehensive follow-up producers’ and providers’), the human
was or is to be a once-off experiment translator’s or both? Who can, in the end,
and I do not necessarily wish to proceed claim copyright? Could DeepL Translator
wholesale with machine translation, rightfully maintain that, in spite of my
I did not purchase DeepL Pro. post-editing efforts (which would place
me in a position similar to that of a
I was then asked to engage in a quasi- publisher’s editor and copy editor), I had
supervised translation research project appropriated “their” translation? Could
on a much larger scale, the funding the publishers contend that not I myself
of which has not yet been approved. but rather a translation program was the
A German publishing company based originator of the German version and
in Hamburg had commissioned me that therefore I should receive less pay?
to translate Christopher Isherwood’s
novel The World in the Evening
(published in autumn 2019).
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The findings were published in Dorothy Kenny & Marion Winters, “Machine Translation,
Ethics and the Literary Translator’s Voice”, in: Translation Spaces, vol. 9, issue 1 (August
2020), pp. 123-149. See also the Click List in this issue of Counterpoint.
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of the translator. Its output is altogether word selection and sentence formation.
uninspired and uninspiring. “Post- Whereas, if confronted with the original
editing”, in fact, entails painstaking alone, you are compelled to find
retranslation. Hence, in the case of innovative solutions of your own to each
Christopher Isherwood’s novel there and every challenge. Your professional
was hardly a sentence that did not have experience, your educational habitus,
to be thoroughly revised and rebuilt. your instinctive feeling for language,
your aesthetic intuition, the spontaneous
There is another trap. When you revise inspiration of the moment will
a pre-existing translation, and the suggest words, phrases and sentence
machine translation is a pre-existing constructions utterly different from
translation and not a rough draft of those suggested and indeed pre-empted
your own making, you are faced with by the machine. Your translational
a dilemma not encountered when activity might be aided on one level but
embarking on a fresh translation that is on another it is hampered and impeded.
not machine-produced. It is a dilemma
known to every editor proper: how to Was your translation fee any different
respect both the original author’s and than if you hadn’t used an MT tool?
the translator’s voice? You do not have As no one was aware of my doings, I was
to “respect” the machine’s “efforts” paid my usual fee. However, there are
but you have to set to work against justified fears among literary translators
two backdrops at once: the original that in future publishing houses
and the pre-existing translation, might commission book translations
each posing its own difficulties. stipulating the use of machine
translation tools in order to reduce fees
and to downgrade the literary translator,
“Post-editing”, who only recently has been able to
secure some degree of social standing,
painstaking
How do you see the future of
literary translation in relation
to both CAT and MT tools?
retranslation” Technological progress, including the
development of artificial intelligence
and its offshoots, seems unstoppable,
Psychologically and mentally, more irrespective of ethical and practical
often than not your creative energy is considerations. There is no doubt that
channelled along predefined paths which sooner rather than later neural machine
you might not even have known to exist translation tools will be further refined,
and which might not at all correspond incorporating ever greater quantities
to your own writing style as it has of text corpora and ever more subtle
developed over time. This might result logarithms doing greater justice to
in a constraint if not a loss of linguistic complex grammatical features.
and literary competence in terms of
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Hans-Christian Oeser
Photo: Barbara Schaper-Oeser
My savvy computer linguists seem I, for my part, shall continue to avail
to think that the advantages of both of electronic tools but, being conscious
machine translation and human of the dangers arising to my artistic
translation could be combined by autonomy, only to spot-check and not
“personalising” the tools on offer. over a wide area of text. As an organised
By means of computer-aided text community, however, we must strive
analysis all previous works of one to resist and reject any attempt by
literary translator could be assembled publishers (some of whom are already
as a comprehensive text corpus which rumoured to contemplate steps in that
would form the basis for future text direction) to transform, as part of a cost-
generation to be used and polished minimising exercise, from machine-
by the selfsame translator. aided human translation to human-
aided machine translation that which is
For now, I would propose that every rightly our work. We will have to be the
literary translator ought to have the Luddites of the humanities! For as long
possibility and the right to utilise every as publishers regard literary translation
tool at their disposal, that is to say: not not primarily as a commercial
only analogue and digital dictionaries, commodity but as a product of the
not only translation memory and human intellect, the human imagination
terminology management software and the human spirit, for as long as
but also online or offline translation they are interested in high literary
programs of every description. On the quality, we may harbour some hope.
other hand, no literary translator must be
coerced into doing so or made to merely
redact machine translations, with the
corresponding loss of income and status.
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What CAT tools have you used supply the original in a format that
for literary translation? would allow me to use a CAT tool.
I’ve used both MemoQ and Trados, I may get paper, or scanned copies
mostly the latter. I think they are – whatever was obtained from the
comparable in terms of functionality agent. It’s all rather 20th century!
for a literary translator. While I also
have some experience with OmegaT, I Were you offered any training
would not use it for literary translation; and did using the tools have
I find the interface is not suited to any influence on your fees?
that. What you need – at least, what I’ve had some training for MemoQ,
I need – is having the original and which is very transferable to Trados,
the translation side-by-side. but that was on my own initiative. And
I’ve had a lot of peer-to-peer help,
What kind of texts did you mostly from non-literary translators,
use CAT tools for? who are more likely to use CAT tools.
Creative fiction and nonfiction. For My fees have remained the same.
verse – especially rhymed verse – I feel
the need to go freeform on the page. How do CAT tools affect the quality
of your translations and the
Was it your choice or did a publisher/ amount and nature of the work?
employer ask you to use a CAT tool? I don’t think a publisher would
It’s entirely my choice. If anything, necessarily notice a difference in the
publishers tend to be surprised end result, but the CAT tools certainly
– and sometimes even unable to make a difference in the process of
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Katja Zakrajšek
Photo: Gordana Grlič
getting there. It’s just easier to produce How common, in your view, is the use of
a consistent translation. Sometimes I machine translation tools in your field?
use glossaries, which are really meant In literary translation, it’s not common
for terminology but work just as well if at all. It’s not unheard of – I tried it at
a literary text has words or phrases that the recommendation of another literary
crop up repeatedly. (Or for names, so I translator – but so far, we’re a small
don’t have to misspell and then correct minority. It may be more common
them a hundred times.) Translation among people who move between
memories help with repetitions and literary and non-literary translation.
variations as well. Furthermore, a CAT
tool makes it easier not to miss bits of How do you see the future of literary
text. And for rereading and checking translation in the light of CAT tools?
the translation? It’s glorious. Finally, However helpful CAT tools are, I don’t
I find it’s a more ergonomic way of see them revolutionising literary
going about translation – a somewhat translation even if – or when – they
unexpected but invaluable advantage become more widespread. The main
for me. (Book below screen, book tool is still the literary translator’s
beside screen, two screens: I’d tried brain, aided and abetted by their peer
them all, with no luck. There’s a lot to network and the book’s editorial team.
be said for not being in pain because
of your work.) On the other hand, I
have lost work to mysterious technical
issues with the tool. It’s not perfect.
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“High-quality
translation of a literary text? How does
this impact the final target text?
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Waltraud Kolb
Photo: Private Archive
their own unique perspective, while How do you see the future of
it is still largely unexplored from a literary translation in relation to
literary translation studies perspective. machine translation tools?
I expect to observe a shift away from
Can you tell us something about translation to post-editing work in the
your preliminary results? medium term, with the key factor being
One result, not surprising, is that time: will it be faster to translate a book
high-quality post-editing is not much or post-edit a machine version? This
faster: even though Hemingway’s will be more relevant for some sectors
story is simple and straightforward, of the book market than for others,
the post-editors changed 90% of the but generally I anticipate increasing
sentences – the main problems the pressure from publishers to cut costs
machine had were cohesion, reference, this way, even though post-editing
idioms, polysemy. Another preliminary may be as cognitively demanding and
finding is that the two groups seem time-consuming as translation. And
to distribute their efforts differently. I am sure this will have all kinds of
While the translators spent ample time implications for copyright issues. The
on repetitions and ambiguity, stylistic other issue at stake is quality, and the
features typical of Hemingway, the post- main risk I see is that post-editing will
editors did so to a much lesser extent. often not be done by translators. Is there
This indicates that engagement with the also a long-term risk that, with the
source text/author differs between the increasing use of machine translation,
two modes. With post-editing, there is (literary) language will eventually
an additional layer to deal with, much of become more uniform? Possibly.
the cognitive effort going into deciding
what to do about the machine version,
and this seems to leave less room for
engagement with the source text/author.
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The future
relationship of literary
translation and AI
Reflections from CEATL president
Morten Visby
While it is certainly an interesting we might not like it, the fact is that
question how AI-based machine machine translation of genre literature
translation would fare in dealing is actually quite good – meaning that it
with densely written, highly complex is not always obvious whether a human
literature, particularly when translating being or a machine have translated the
between languages and cultures that text. And in this regard, it is important
are very far apart linguistically or not to take free Google Translate services
historically, the more pressing concern as an indication of the level of quality
for literary translators living and working for AI translation. Also, due to the logic
today and tomorrow is the commercial of ever-increasing processing power
viability of AI-based machine translation AI translation can only be expected
of contemporary genre literature, not to become even better. And we know
least when the languages are closely from unpleasant experiences in other
related – e.g. the Nordic languages or quarters of our professional field that
the Romance languages. I am referring publishers are, if not more than happy,
to the translation of crime, suspense then at least sometimes willing to
and romance between linguistic accept less good, but workable solutions
domains that are closely related in to translation. Particularly if these
time and culture. At this moment we solutions hold promise of a cheaper
need to look at the actual, real-life and more streamlined production of
implications of AI-assisted machine translated literature, to the detriment of
translation for us as literary translators. what would otherwise be considered fair,
And regarding that issue, I do have decent and sustainable in the long term.
a couple of notes. Some of them are
rather pessimistic. Others less so. So, let’s get real on this topic. This is
not the time to feel safe in the belief
Getting real on people vs. machines that the human brain will always, in
I believe that we underestimate the the end, be superior to stupid machines.
powers of AI at our own peril. Although The issue of AI in literary translation
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will always be
superior to stupid
machines”
Contemporary genre literature can be
acceptably translated by machines. I am
sorry, but it can. It is perfectly feasible
that publishers would want to use
machine translation of such works. It is
faster and cheaper. The quality is good
enough for the market, and a human
editor would be needed anyway, because
human translators also make mistakes. I
have talked to publishers who admit that
they would like to go down this route,
and that they only elect not to, because
they fear the damage it would do to their
brand. That should tell us something
about the very real danger of AI for us
as professionals, but also something Al-Jazari elephant clock driver
about the strong public perception of Photo: Metropolitan Museum
our cultural value as literary creators.
and can be relied upon to slow down
Recently (but before the COVID crisis), the implementation of AI-assisted
an independent consulting firm working translation considerably. But it would
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Morten Visby
Photo: Ildikó Lőrinszky
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From Romania
to Belgium:
Seven questions to Doina Ioanid
and Jan H. Mysjkin
Where did you stay and for how dense, yet not at all long. It’s both
long? What made you choose tongue-in-cheek and touching at the
that particular location? same time, which appeals to people.
We spent the first half of July 2020 at We believe that the novel will be very
the Vertalershuis / Translators’ House well received by Romanian readers.
in Antwerp. We tend to choose our
location according to the specific project What is the most challenging aspect of
we are working on: the Vertalershuis translating this text into Romanian?
in Amsterdam for Dutch authors, the In terms of composition, Elsschot plays
European College of Literary Translators around a great deal with verb tenses,
in Seneffe for French-speaking which change abruptly, sometimes from
Belgian authors and the International one paragraph to the next. At times
College of Literary Translators in these changes correspond to an inner
Arles for French-speaking authors. voice, a dialogue which the character
We also come to Antwerp when we has with himself, at others to a scene in
are translating a Flemish author. which one feels like a spectator. We had
to carefully follow this shift from one
What have you been working on? verb tense to another and make sure that
Can you tell us something about it would occur naturally in Romanian.
the text and the writer? Fortunately, Romanian is more flexible
On this occasion we were working on in this respect than French, for example.
Willem Elsschot, a classic Flemish
writer. According to a survey by the You have already done literary
De Standaard newspaper, he is the translations together. How did
most translated Flemish author in the this collaboration work?
world, but there isn’t a single book by One of us produces the first draft, and
him in Romanian. For our first title sends it to the other by e-mail, with
we chose Kaas (Cheese), the novel that variations and questions. This is followed
the author himself considered to be by translation sessions over the phone,
his finest work. The text is simple and which can easily last as long as two
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Jan H. Mysjkin (left) and Doina Ioanid at work in Translators’ House Antwerp
Photo: Karen Thys
Jan H. Mysjkin was born in Brussels in 1955. Doina Ioanid was born in 1968 in Bucharest.
Since 1991, the year in which he received She started out as a French teacher and
the National Prize for Literary Translation since 2005 she has worked as a cultural
in Belgium, he has led a semi-nomadic journalist with the Observator Cultural.
life between Amsterdam, Bucharest and Her personal work consists exclusively
Paris. He has written about ten collections of prose poems, which explore female
of poetry, some in Dutch and others in individuality, translated into a dozen
French. He has translated poetry and languages. Translator of Marguerite Duras
prose, ranging from the classics to avant- and Georges Rodenbach, among others,
garde authors. His translation work has she has been working with Jan H. Mysjkin
garnered him awards in the Netherlands, since 2012, translating from Dutch into
Romania and the Republic of Moldova. Romanian and from Romanian into French.
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Section has been a member ever since, the Union and the Swedish Publishers’
sending delegates to every Annual Association had an agreed Standard
General Meeting. In 2008, we took an Contract and both parties loyally
active part in arranging WALTIC, the stood by it. But in 2017, the agreement
Writers’ and Literary Translators’ was unilaterally terminated by the
International Congress, in Stockholm, a publishers during renewal negotiations.
very successful conference for writers, Sweden’s largest publishing house,
translators and scholars from all over Bonnier, presented a new model. Their
the world, and that same week the suggested contract included a great deal
CEATL AGM was held in Stockholm. of changes for the worse for translators
Through the Union we are also – the new model for remuneration
represented on the European Writers’ would in effect result in lower fees,
Council, and through the Norne network the Publisher would be granted the
we work to maintain links between the “Last Word” on the wording of the
Nordic countries. Nationally, we are translation, and the Publisher would
represented in many forums dedicated acquire all rights to the translation
to translation and translators’ issues, for a period of 30 years. And so on.
including the Baltic Centre for Writers
and Translators in Visby, Gotland. Renowned translators who were offered
commissions on these terms refused
Boycotting works! to agree to these provisions. The Union
One of the Section’s main concerns and the Section recommended that
during the past five years has been their members didn’t sign Bonnier
negotiating the renewal of our Standard model contracts. The boycott made
or Model Contract. For a very long time, headlines in daily newspapers, TV
Translation from left to right: ‘Who has written this beautiful text?’ ‘Me!’ ‘Me!’
Cartoon by Sven Nordqvist
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Lena Jonsson
Photo: Private Archive
and radio, was much quoted on social from public prize ceremonies and
media, and also received support from seminars to monthly pub meets.
colleagues abroad. And it worked! With
the aid of the Union officers our selected
committee managed subsequently
to negotiate a much-improved
contract and the boycott was lifted. The Swedish Writers’ Union
The Union has approx. 3000 members
Currently the most important and of those, approx. 600 are literary
issues for the Section are: translators. The association works
• We are re-negotiating the Bonnier to safeguard the economic and
contract for translation commissions moral interests of all members by
that has been in effect for two defending freedom of expression
years. Together with a couple of and of the press, and by keeping up
other publishers we are trying to to date with copyright stipulations
negotiate a contract model suitable and laws regulating copyright.
and acceptable to both parties.
• We are looking into the practices of two All members may consult the office
or three smaller publishers to decide for individual help with interpretation
whether or not to dissuade our members and negotiation of contracts, and
from taking commissions from them. with agreements and disputes over
The terms in their contracts are simply such, as well as get tax counselling
far below all reasonable standards. and other legal assistance. These
• In cooperation with our colleagues in services are free of charge. In
the translators’ organisations SKTL principally important cases, e.g.
and KAOS in Finland, we were planning concerning freedom of expression,
for the CEATL AGM in Åland in 2021. the Union may absorb litigation
• Finally, we are considering how costs for members. And finally,
to plan members’ activities in the association assists members in
COVID-times, including everything collective bargaining measures.
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me and my dictionary
Variants – a lucky
break for languages
Jacqueline Csuss
Austria is a German-speaking Standard German is taught in schools,
country … as are Germany, Switzerland, it is the standard written and spoken
Liechtenstein, Luxembourg, Southern version in official settings, it is what
Tyrol and parts of Belgium. We all we speak when we don’t speak dialect.
speak German, at least so it seems. Our To claim, however, that there is one
common language is “Hochdeutsch” or standard version would be misleading
standard German and the Duden is our because there isn’t, not even in Germany.
sanctimonious reference. A frequent It doesn’t mean we don’t understand
and admittedly tedious question each other; it’s just that many words
German speakers (from countries also have a regional variant which often
other than Germany) are confronted differs only slightly from “Hochdeutsch”
with is whether, for instance in Austria and is in most cases self-explanatory.
or Switzerland, we speak German. Variants are also often related to the
historical past; in the case of Austria,
So yes, we all speak German; and yet they can be of French origin which
Karl Kraus, the Viennese turn-of- entered the standard language in
the-century writer and journalist, Imperial times, whereas Viennese dialect
famously said: “What separates is full of Czech, Yiddish, Hungarian and
Germans from Austrians is the common Italian words and expressions going
language.” Oscar Wilde, by the way, said back to a time when the city was a
something similar about the English melting pot of migrants from all over the
language: “We have really everything Austro-Hungarian Empire. To a certain
in common with America nowadays, extent they too entered the Austrian
except, of course, language.” The standard German. So, when I speak
same would be true for Flemish and Viennese dialect I’m literally a linguistic
Dutch, Portuguese in Portugal vs. Brazil, mongrel with a huge wealth of phrases
Spanish in Spain vs. Latin America. or words at my disposal I obviously
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A wealth of variants
Photo: Jacqueline Csuss
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Three translators from Belarus arrested: CEATL condemns the unlawful arrests
CEATL joins declaration of solidarity of our colleagues, and several delegates,
In the crackdown on voices of including the CEATL president, have
independent civil society currently participated in the digital solidarity
going on in Belarus fundamental manifestation #freewordsbelarus for our
human rights as the freedom of fellow translators and writers in Belarus.
expression and the freedom of opinion
are being violated by the regime under On the initiative of the Swedish Writers’
President Aleksandr Lukashenko. Union, and in a cooperative effort
between CEATL and the European
In September 2020 three translators Writers’ Council, representatives of
and members of the Belarus PEN 120,000 authors from 22 countries
centre, Hanna Komar, Uladzimir has taken part in a reading the poem
Liankievic and Siarzh Miadzvedzeu, “The Border” by Barys Piatrovič, the
were arrested and administratively Chair of the Belarusian Writers’
imprisoned for participating in Union. The poem was translated into
peaceful demonstrations in Minsk, English by a translator who, for safety
though these are legal according to reasons, prefers to stay anonymous.
the present constitution of Belarus.
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