4 Proposal

I would like to propose two ways in which we could celebrate our company’s great
success this year.

First, I’d like to propose that we have a party. It would be a really enjoyable and
relaxed way to acknowledge the success we have had. At the party, there could be
a time for recognising the particular contributions that different individuals and
teams have made to the overall company success. The staff would benefit from
having some ‘downtime’ together and also from focusing on what we’ve done
well. The company could benefit from the good feeling this would generate.

Another suggestion I’d like to propose is that we, as a company, take an afternoon
off and get involved in some sort of community project. We are lucky enough to
be located quite close to the beautiful Tyrella beach, so I propose that we could
participate in a beach cleanup day there. I have done this myself and it is a great
cause and a very satisfying project. This would be a way for our company to give
back to the community we are a part of, and also it would allow us to spend time
together doing something other than work and to get to know each other better. It
would help us build stronger teams within the company.

Either of these ideas would be very attractive to staff, but if only one can be
implemented, I think we should have a party, as it is more of a celebration. We
could look at a community project another time.

Notes
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Correct length (258 words)
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