Name: __________Hermes Luna________________ Date: ________3/25/22___________________

Working with Peer Feedback

Directions: In the space provided below respond to these questions.
What are the three things you’ll change based upon your peers’ responses? Why will you change each one?

1. One of my peers recommended elaboration in my 2nd subheading section on one of the author’s claims. I therefore

decided to add information form my own analysis into the paragraph making it flow in a much better manner.

2. A factor that one of my classmates suggested was the division of some long paragraphs and divide them into two.

Thus, I ended up splitting some paragraphs in half to get rid of that 5-paragraph feeling of essay.

3. A final thing that was edited was some random vocabulary and transitions that some peers of mine recommended

be changed. This then gave my essay a better diverse flow and vocabulary throughout.

What are three things you’ll keep despite your peers’ responses? Why will you keep each one?

1. One of my peers did not like my title and suggesting an alternative. However, I really found my title interesting

with the word choice selected hence I kept it as is.

2. Another one of my peers wanted me to change my subheading, but I found my subheading pretty straight-forwards

where it guides the reader successfully throughout my writing.

3. The third thing I did not change was the recommendation of utilizing extra sources than the 6 needed. It could have

been beneficial to my word count and elongate my essay, but I felt as if I wrote that much the reader would lose

interest if it was excessive. I tried to keep short and sweet, while meeting all the requirements perfectly.

What work do you have left to do after today to successfully complete the project?

1. Turned in my essay 2 final draft after proofreading it.

2. E-mailed my professor that I made a few minor changes when I submitted it online (since she might be grading the

hard copy).

3. Get my essay reflection done by Sunday.

4. Established an understanding for the upcoming essay 3, as I will be using the same topic since it is a requirement.

5. Hopefully get full points (A+) on essay 2 and succeed in the task!