Asynchronous Homework (Revised)

Analysis Subject JTC Strategies in JTC Problems in Rating of Intro &

Intro and Conclusion Intro and Conclusion Conclusion, plus
Rationale
Analysis of Frost's In the introduction, Problems with the Intro: 8, it’s effective
"Road Not Taken" there are these JTC introduction: The and opens the readers
strategies used: thesis presents itself as to the main point of
Stating the topic of the vague, and does not the essay in an
paper, establishing the leave room for accessible manner.
context in which the argument.
readers will need, and Conc: 6, it’s adequate
stating the thesis Problems with the but could be stronger
statement. conclusion: It’s short, and could reinforce the
it doesn’t fully thesis more.
In the conclusion, encapsulate the intro's
there are these JTC main point, only
strategies used: mentions that the
Closing the paper with poem is tricky.
a quotation and
linking the intro to the
conclusion.
Analysis of "Yellow In the introduction, Problems with the Intro: 10, it is effective
Wallpaper" there are these JTC introduction: I really and fully grasps the
strategies used: don’t see any issues attention of the reader.
Stating the topic, with the intro; a
establishing the suggestion: Maybe Conc: 9, the
context in a historical name one of the conclusion is effective,
account, stating the manipulative tactics but has an issue with
thesis, and a shocking used by John. the flow. All of the
statement about the correct information
ongoing issue of Problems with the and effective JTC
domestic violence. conclusion: There is a strategies are there, but
lack of flow with the the sentence structure
In the conclusion, ending paragraph. could use some minor
there are these JTC Suggestion: tweaks.
strategies used: Switch the sentence
Closing with a story, about statistics with
linking the intro to the the sentence about
conclusion, other authors and their
 reinforcing the points stories about domestic
made in the intro and abuse to aid in flow.
speculation about the
future of domestic
violence victims.
Analysis of Great In the introduction, Both the intro and Intro: 8, the intro is
Gatsby there are these JTC conclusion offer A effective but is long
strategies used: LOT of information and the reader can get
Stating the topic, that is easy to get lost lost in it. All of the
establishing the in JTC strategies in use
context in a historical work well though
account, stating the (historical context,
thesis, making a thesis statement, etc).
shocking claim about
the symbolism in Conc: 8, the
Gatsby, and defining conclusion is also
the problem. effective in following
the JTC strategies, and
In the conclusion, while offering more
there are these JTC analysis at the end is
strategies used: good, it’s a bit clunky
Closing with a quote, and long. Again, it’s
offering more easy for the reader to
analysis, and linking get lost.
the intro to the
conclusion.

SLOs: 1, 4, 5