1st ACE Visit

Revisions for Essay 1

• Eliminate first person pronouns. “Or” “You” “I”.
• Introduction: Concept of sleep, essential part of life, research question? How different
amounts of sleep effect our everyday focus, mood, and motor function.
• Experiment:
- 4-5 hours (energy/mood)
- 7-8 hours (energy/mood)
- 9-12 hours (energy/mood)
• Control Days:
- Day 1: Chart from beginning to end of the day to track mood, ability to focus on
class, level of hunger and thirst. (Same for each day in what I’m tracking).
- Day 2:
- Day 3:
• Materials & Methods:
- Study design.
- Participant.
• Date & Observation.
• Discussion (include sources).
- Include Research.
• Conclusion:
- Advice, restate purpose.