3rd ACE Visit

Revisions for Essay 3

• Use 8 peer reviewed sources.
• Introduction:
- Topic of Research-Abolition of nuclear weapons.
- State flaws with nuclear weapons that most people are unaware of. (In
introduction not the thesis).
- Add “This paper argues that” to the beginning of my thesis statement. Cut down
the thesis to focus on the main points.
• Body Paragraphs:
- Have transitions between paragraphs and sentences.
- Use 2-3 sources per paragraph.
• Conclusion:
- Significance of thesis statement.
- Remind of greatest pieces of environmental damage.