Fabio’s Feedback on the Writing 1:

1. On next Sunday (We do not use at/on/in before last/next/this/every)

2. Suggestion: My American Airlines flight number is …
3. Suggestion: (Regarding sightseeing), I would like to visit …

Overall feedback about the text: even being a simple text, you showed a very good complexity,
which would roughly rank you in the Upper-intermediate level. Congratulations!

Feedback on the Writing Assessment:

1. in good healthy
2. 8,5 millions km2 ( We don’t add ‘s’ when we give an exact number; )<> millions of
people came to the exam (Add ‘s’ if you don’t give an exact number).
3. In addition/moreover, furthermore, its tropical weather …
4. One of the most famous city cities in …
5. I’d suggest you to begin <> (recommend) I’d suggest beginning … or I strongly suggest
beginning … (we don’t use “sb” after “suggest” and the following verb should be in the -
ing form.) … or I (strongly) suggest that you begin … ; the verb “recommend”:
recommend somebody to do something We'd recommend you to book your flight early.
6. The use of other/another → another + singular; other + plural nouns; the others
(without any noun)
7. Tijuca’s forest → Tijuca forest
8. the Botanic(al) garden ; the Sugar loaf
9. a very delicious plate →dish

Overall feedback: Excellent writing. Just a few mistakes. High level quality.