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It is argued that children should study at the institute until they are 18.

In this essay, I will discuss


both the positive and negative impacts of this opinion to disagree with this idea.

On the one hand, staying at school until 18 is essential for children because it would bring various
benefits. Firstly, going to school could provide opportunities to approach basic knowledge as well as
communicate with the other children. Secondly, Pupils after graduation could have a chance to
apply to higher education such as college, therefore getting formal qualifications and preparing for
their future careers. Moreover, it reduces social problems such as juvenile crime. As a result,
children should go to school to gain their essential knowledge

On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why we should not apply the idea of being at
school until eighteen for all children/ everyone. To begin with, in some families, it is likely that some
children are not able to continue going to school due to financial difficulties, they tend to get labor
jobs to help their family, or their siblings get opportunities to have access to education. Additionally,
some children do not appropriate for the school environment since their characters. Consequently,
they may leave school early or move to some vocational centers.

In conclusion, despite going to school until 18 are beneficial for the comprehensive development of
students, personally, I am convinced that it should not apply for all.

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