Plan:

Setting- House
Characters- Demala, Mom
Plot:
Exposition- Demala and her mom are arguing
Rising action- Demala wants a dog for her birthday but her mom refuses
Climax- Demala receives an unknown message
Falling action- Demala does what the message says and get surprised
Resolution- Her mom surprised her with a dog for her birthday

The Message:

It was a cold, rainy night in a village called Colano. The storm was so strong
that the rain made a piercing snare when it hit the ground. Demala, a girl
with the eyes of an eagle, had a deadpan expression sitting in the dining
room arguing to her mom. Suddenly, Demala’s blood was boiling to death,
and left the room. Bang! She obliterated the door and went to her room.
Demala always wanted a dog but her ‘careless’ mom wouldn’t even give her
the only thing she asked for. Before her combustion of emotions, Demala
asked her mom.
“When can I get a dog?”
“You’re too irresponsible to even take care of a dog. What would you even
do with it?” Demala’s mom exclaimed.
As the trees were swaying from side to side, the ocean waves pushing and
pulling against the sand, Demala mustered up the courage.

“Why do you have to act so unrivaled…, I hate you!”

Upon hearing those words, Demala’s mother became shocked as an eel.

Both have now been in their room hiding their face asking the same
question

“How do I convince her that I’m getting a dog no matter what??”

A week has passed, and it was almost time for Demala’s birthday. She
received an unknown message saying, ‘Go to St. Peters Street near the
church, I will give you what you want.’ This message made her heart dilate
rapidly.
Her eyes were circulating around the room in fear, as she queered
hideously.
What if this is dangerous? She wailed like a banshee and became frozen as a
snowman the spot due to confusion.

Why, why would this person text me at this time?

As Demala’s birthday came, curious and frightened she decided to take the
risk and went to the address given. She took a step forward, her head was
steaming with sweat from the nervousness, her hands were trembling. She
opened the door and was welcomed by a puppy licking her face.
“Surprise!” as her mom popped out Demala was so surprised that she did
this.
“I was wrong to think that you were irresponsible,” her mom said with guilt.
Demala ran to her mom and hugged her as if she hadn't seen her in ages.
“I love you mom. Thank you.” Demala muttered.
She then looked at the glittery and glistening eyes of the dog and named
him Whopper.

Words: 400
Key: Onomatopoeia- 1
Repetition- 2
Alliteration- 3
Hyperbole- 4
Metaphor- 2
Simile- 3
Adverb- 4
Adjective- 16
Verbs- 23