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Wen-Chi Vivian Wu, Jie Chi Yang, Jun Scott Chen Hsieh & Tosh Yamamoto
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(2019): Free from demotivation in EFL writing: the use of online flipped writing instruction,
Computer Assisted Language Learning, DOI: 10.1080/09588221.2019.1567556
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ABSTRACT KEYWORDS
Motivation has played an essential role in learning, leading to Demotivation; flipped
various research areas across diverse disciplines. While the lit- learning; English writing
erature is replete with findings supporting the essentiality of proficiency; efficacy in
writing preparation
motivation in an individual’s academic success, demotivation
(a.k.a. negative motivation) has been underexplored, even
though it has been a widespread phenomenon observed in
language learning, particularly in the field of English writing in
EFL settings. To keep leaners motivated and engaged, innova-
tive pedagogies have been proposed, among which flipped
learning and writing instruction have received extra attention.
Previous studies have shown the effectiveness of flipped learn-
ing and online writing practices on enhancing student motiv-
ation and learning outcomes. Nonetheless, research on how
the aforementioned instructional practices could be integrated
to facilitate English writing among EFL learners still remains
scarce, let alone a detailed probe into demotivational factors
that might exist in such an innovative instructional design.
Therefore, this study examined demotivation factors in EFL
writing and the effects of the online flipped writing instruction
on EFL writing proficiency. Forty-eight sophomore English-
majors in Taiwan were paired with American college peers.
Multiple sources of data over a semester included pre- and
post-tests on two genres (descriptive/argumentative),
‘Demotivation Scale’, reflective journals, and interviews. The
results revealed that the online flipped writing instruction
enhanced the students’ writing proficiency (both globally and
locally), and that four characteristics of the flipped instruction
were observed not to cause demotivation in English writing,
including self-interest, classroom atmosphere and teaching
material, writing product, and teaching method and content.
The participants held positive perceptions about the online
flipped writing instruction and such learning experience
enhanced cross-cultural observation. Based on these findings,
pedagogical implications are provided.
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Introduction
In globalization, there is general consensus that great proficiency in English
is an essential primary benchmark of competitiveness in modern society.
Many countries around the world are optimizing their education policies to
respond to the global trends of language learning, encouraging students
and nationals to study English as second or foreign language (L2/EFL).
Although authorities put huge effort into perfecting the existing EFL educa-
tional framework, many challenges still exist to improve EFL proficiency
among students. Therefore, establishing a suitable learning environment,
maintaining motivation, and preventing factors that demotivate learners are
weighty and urgent missions for the EFL teachers and researchers.
Traditional approaches to writing cannot effectively maintain or
improve EFL learners’ interests in learning, particularly when teachers
have acted as the highest authority in teacher-centered instruction
(Buitrago & Dıaz, 2018) and when conventional practices in EFL con-
texts have primarily focused on teachers’ responses to written errors with
red ink (Furneaux, Paran, & Fairfax, 2007). Studying the usage of
vocabulary and grammar, making sentences, and performing revision
exercises for the improvement of the language skills are commonly
included in typical English course instructional design. Clearly, learning
English writing is not a series of simple steps and English cannot be
learned or acquired at the mastery level in a short period of time.
Potential challenges that language learners might face include insufficient
linguistic proficiency (including grammar, syntax and vocabulary), weak
structure organization competency, and high writing anxiety (Fareed,
Ashraf, & Bilal, 2016). For foreign language learners or even native
speakers, producing a good piece of writing is not an easy task (Brown,
2004), particularly when learners have low motivation to learn. In gen-
eral, EFL students perceive that writing is much more challenging than
other language skills, as it involves complex cognitive processes (Xu &
Qi, 2017) that lead them to experience frustration and difficulty at any
proficiency level (Chen, 2001). Research has pointed out that for EFL
students, writing is the weakest aspect of the English proficiency (Chen,
1997; Tseng, 2008). Even with complex, multi-layered, and recursive
composing processes (Flower & Hayes, 1981), most students cannot per-
form well in English composition. One potential reason for such a situ-
ation is related to the students’ motivation to learn.
The concept of motivation refers to an individual’s ‘choice of a par-
ticular action, the persistence with it’, and ‘the effort expended on it’
(D€ornyei, 2001, p. 8; Manolopoulou-Sergi, 2004, p. 428). One basic
COMPUTER ASSISTED LANGUAGE LEARNING 3
Ghanizadeh & Jahedizadeh, 2015; Sakai & Kikuchi, 2009), with the
dynamics of motivational change receiving long-needed attention
(D€ornyei, 2010; D€ ornyei & Csizer, 2002). D€ornyei (2005) noted that
research on teaching and learning in EFL contexts mainly addresses the
positive side of motivation, but ‘past motivation research has typically
overlooked the negative motivation’ (p. 89). Nevertheless, the facets of
motivation cannot be explained merely by motivation theories (Hamada
& Kito, 2008). More effort should be directed to examining the form and
effect of demotivation, because language learning failure is highly related
to demotivation (Falout et al., 2009; Hasegawa, 2004) and ‘demotivation
trumps motivation’ in the real educational scene (Rost, 2004, as cited in
Falout & Falout, 2005, p. 280).
The demotivation phenomenon can commonly be seen in language
classes and the number of demotivated learners is relatively high
(D€ornyei, 2001). However, in comparison with research on the motiv-
ation, studies addressing the lack of motivation faced by EFL learners is
scarce (Lucas, Bernardo, & Rojo-Laurilla, 2016). Boo, D€ ornyei, and Ryan
(2015), while revisiting the psychology of the language learning, made
the point that demotivation should continue as an important field of
study. While previous studies have mainly focused on EFL motivation in
general (Boo, D€ ornyei, & Ryan, 2015), research specifically targeting on
EFL writing motivation has been still in its infancy (Lee, Yu, & Liu,
2018). Generally, EFL learners are faced with diverse types of personal,
social, cultural, and linguistic challenges that might severely affect the
processes and outcomes of their learning. Therefore, how to empower
students with grit in learning that enables them to persevere while facing
obstacles and to attain success has been a vital issue (Jahedizadeh,
Ghanizadeh, & Ghonsooly, 2016; Tanaka, 2017). Researchers and lan-
guage instructors, therefore, must turn their attention to demotivation
and see the need to motivate students with pedagogical innovations.
To tackle with the issue of demotivation, some EFL teachers have
started to use new teaching materials and to adjust traditional
approaches to the instruction of English writing. One of these innovative
pedagogies is the use of flipped instruction. Flipped instruction reverses
the places for learning (classroom) and for homework completion
(home). In the flipped learning framework, the EFL students acquire
knowledge via watching online educational videos at home and practice
the language skills by doing exercises or activities in class. Because they
are present in person when students practice their language skills, teach-
ers can monitor and bolster the learning efficiency of the students dir-
ectly and effectively. This pedagogical arrangement provides ‘a dynamic,
interactive learning environment where the educator guides students as
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they apply concepts and engage creatively in the subject matter’ (Flipped
Learning Network, 2014, p. 1). Bishop and Verleger (2013) argue that a
flipped classroom is an educational design consisting of two substantial
components: (i) the use of technologies, such as video lectures online,
and (ii) the involvement of interactive learning activities. In this educa-
tional design, digital learning materials are assigned to the students
before class with the use of technology (e.g. mobile devices, internet web-
sites, etc.) and the students are required to respond to the given materi-
als by doing exercises before classroom meetings. Previous studies have
shown the effectiveness of flipped instruction on enhancing student
engagement in class as well as increasing their motivation (Chen Hsieh,
Wu, & Marek, 2017b; Strayer, 2012; Traxler & Riordan, 2003; Wang, An,
& Wright, 2018). With greater readiness for in-class participation, learn-
ers are then engaged in interactive classroom activities that boost mean-
ingful learning and high-order thinking abilities (Baepler, Walker, &
Driessen, 2014; Hung, 2015). Such engagement further enhances learning
outcomes (Adnan, 2017; Boucher, Robertson, Wainner, & Sanders, 2013;
Chen Hsieh, Huang, & Wu, 2017a; Chen Hsieh et al., 2017b; Correa,
2015; Jamaludin & Osman, 2014; Leis, 2016; Li & Suwanthep, 2017;
Tseng, Lin, & Chen, 2018).
This study, therefore, sets itself apart from previous research in its
investigation into the potential benefits of a pedagogical innovation inte-
grating both flipped learning and online learning for English writing
among EFL learners. Last but not the least, the exploration of percep-
tions of learners about the innovative pedagogical design of this study is
of immense importance to researchers and language instructors, since it
yields insights into how demotivation factors in EFL writing can be
avoided for enhanced learning motivation.
In addition to flipped learning, another potentially effective peda-
gogical approach for tackling the issue of demotivation/motivation
among EFL students is the use of online writing practice (Chen, Chuah,
Tho, & Teh, 2015; Kikuchi, 2015; Sun & Qiu, 2014; Tsiakyroudi, 2018).
Tsiakyroudi (2018), in investigating the effectiveness of the Edmodo edu-
cational social network on Greek High School EFL learners’ motivation
to write, found that the implementation of the online writing project
contributed to students’ enhanced writing motivation, evidenced by a
shift not only in their attitudes to writing and writing habits but also
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increased participation and engagement in the writing process. Ozdemir
and Aydın (2015) presented a review of the literature concerning wiki
effects on motivation and pointed out the usefulness of online writing
tasks on improving motivation in EFL writing, aligning with the results
of enhanced motivation for writing in other studies (e.g. Kassem, 2017;
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Ware, Kern, & Warschauer, 2016; Zheng, Yim, & Warschauer, 2018).
While some researchers have examined how certain types of social net-
working affected motivational aspects of writing, others have directed
their attentions to online exchanges between EFL learners and their for-
eign counterparts, with promising affordances identified in relevant stud-
ies. In fact, using new technologies such as social media or online
platforms to foster knowledge sharing and real-time communication
between the EFL learners and native speakers of English is an emerging
approach in EFL writing. The online instruction enables learners to
develop not only socially, but also intellectually, while interacting with
other people (Vikneswaran & Krish, 2016), because social interaction is
the key to learning where knowledge is shared, explored, developed, and
co-built (Pritchard & Woollard, 2010; Wu, Chen Hsieh, & Yang, 2017).
In this approach to EFL writing instruction, learners interact with native-
speaking peers or preservice students, check comprehension, share opin-
ions, compose ideas, and receive feedback. Such online interaction thus
enhances learner critical thinking skills through the processes of compre-
hension checking, idea organization for coherence, and clarification of
feedback learners have received from their peers (Pritchard & Woollard,
2010; Shih, 2011), effective in enhancing the quality of the EFL learning
by maintaining the students’ motivation to learn. The fundamental ele-
ments of its online nature embedding technological innovation and inter-
action as well as communication with English-speaking native peers thus
become positive factors that maintain motivation, avoid demotivation,
and improve English skills (Peterson, 2009).
While it is evident that demotivation has caught the attention of
researchers around the world (e.g. Hamada & Kito, 2008; Kikuchi, 2015;
Kikuchi & Sakai, 2009 among Japanese learners; Trang & Baldauf, 2007
among Vietnamese learners; Kim & Kim, 2016; Song & Kim, 2017
among Korean learners; or Sahragard & Alimorad, 2013 among Iranian
students), the exploration of demotivation in Taiwan is merely at the
starting point, let alone receiving specific scrutiny of the factors leading
to demotivation in language learning (particularly in the field of English
writing). Furthermore, albeit the rich evidence of flipped instruction in
its contribution to learner empowerment (e.g. enhanced learning out-
comes, motivation, in-class engagement, and critical thinking), and des-
pite the effectiveness of online writing instruction on the intellectual as
well as social growth of students, there has been little investigation into
the integration of flipped instruction and online writing practices.
Studies specifically addressing how such integration could be imple-
mented in the field of English writing in an EFL setting to boost student
motivation and to lower demotivation have been even scarcer. More
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1. To what extent did the online flipped writing instruction enhance the
EFL learner’s writing proficiency?
2. To what extent did the online flipped writing instruction affect
demotivation?
3. What were the students’ overall perceptions about the online flipped
writing instruction?
Methods
Participants
The participants of this study consisted of 48 sophomore English-majors
from two Intermediate English Composition courses at a 4-year aca-
demic university in central Taiwan. The participants were between the
ages of 19 and 20 years. In terms of English learning, the participants
had received at least 7 years of English training through high school.
Having received training in writing for two years, their writing profi-
ciency was at an upper intermediate level. In order for the current study
to examine the effects of an online flipped writing practice on EFL writ-
ing performance, the Taiwanese students were paired with 36 under-
graduate students from two intact classes at a public liberal arts college
in the Midwestern United States. The 25 Taiwanese students in
Intermediate English Composition (A) were randomly paired with
American counterparts in Principles of Human Communication (N ¼ 20)
and 23 Taiwanese students in Intermediate English Composition (B)
were randomly paired with their counterparts in Intercultural
Communication (N ¼ 16). The students from both sides form a one-to-
one partnership. Since the Taiwanese participants were more than their
American partners, five students and seven students, respectively from
the Principles of Human Communication class and the Intercultural
Communication class were asked to give feedback to two Taiwanese
partners. The major tasks for the American students were to comment
on the Taiwanese students’ descriptive and argumentative essays and to
have meaning clarification sessions with the Taiwanese students.
With regard to online activities, the online platform Sakai was pur-
posefully chosen for the participants in both countries to interact and
proceed with the writing tasks, with its function of providing an environ-
ment for online learning free from limitations on space and time. It,
therefore, enabled learners from different regions to get together with lit-
tle effort.
written comments. After receiving the feedback for their American part-
ners, the Taiwanese students were encouraged to clarify meanings. With
the initial feedback and further exchanges of meaning clarification, the
students then proceeded with the first round of essay revision in class.
Therefore, the online interaction focused not merely on micro-level
grammar correction, but more on the content elaboration of the partici-
pants’ essays and meaning clarification. After the students finished
their revisions, they then uploaded the revision drafts to Sakai again,
where their American partners provided further comments. The
Taiwanese students then proceeded with the steps exactly like the first
round of revision; that is, reading the comments, arranging for meaning
clarification (if necessary), and performing a second round of essay revi-
sion. The instructor (also the first author) and three teaching assistants
(English-major graduate students) provided timely assistance with
any problems encountered by the students with their in-class writing
and revisions.
It should be noted that before the American students were asked to
provide feedback, a training session was carried out to make sure they
were familiar with the writing rubric and knew how to offer quality com-
ments in the required six areas of writing: ideas, organization, voice,
word choice, sentence fluency, and conventions. In the online training
session for 2 weeks, writing samples were provided for them to have a
basic understanding of what effective and ineffective essays were. They
were then asked to have trial runs of providing feedback, similar to a
norming session where they discussed the writing criteria and agreed on
the writing rubric. Training sessions for two weeks to the three teaching
assistants were also implemented. As the assistants, they not only fami-
liarized themselves with the writing rubric before the implementation of
the study but also provided immediate in-class help when the Taiwanese
students encountered problems. For example, when the students were
revising their descriptive essays, in addition to the American partners’
feedback, the teaching assistants directed the students’ attention to
whether enough details and descriptions were provided to enable readers
to gain a complete perception, whether each paragraph of the essay
focused on one aspect of the description, or whether the paragraphs
were ordered in the most effective way.
Research design
In this study, all of the participants in Taiwan experienced the online
flipped writing instruction, so that they were not deprived of the oppor-
tunity to experience the instructional design. Therefore, this study did
not employ a formal experimental design with separate control and
experiment groups. Instead, the study was designed specifically to explore
student reactions to and perceptions of the instructional design, as
opposed to testing the differences resulting from using or not using the
instructional design.
Multiple sources of data were collected to examine the demotivation
factors in EFL writing, to investigate the effectiveness of the online
flipped writing instruction, and to explore student perceptions about the
learning experience, including (1) pre- and post-tests of two genres
(descriptive and argumentative essay writing); (2) the Demotivation Scale
developed by Kao (2012); (3) semi-structured focus-group interviews;
and (4) the students’ reflective journals. Figure 2 demonstrates the align-
ment among the issues explored, nature of the issues, and instruments
used for data collection.
Demovaon Scale
1. English proficiency and self-confidence
2. Teacher feedback
Research Queson 2 3. Teaching method and content
Quantave
Demovaon 4. Wring difficulty
5. Classroom atmosphere and teaching material
6. Wring product
7. Self-interest
Focus-group interview
Research Queson 3
Qualitave
Overal percepon
Reflecve journals
Data analysis
This study included three research questions that specifically examined
the effects of an online flipped writing instruction on EFL learners’
English writing performance, demotivation factors in English writing,
and students’ overall perceptions about the given pedagogical practice.
Two research questions (RQ1 and RQ2) required quantitative analysis
and one research question (RQ3) needed qualitative exploration.
Writing Rubric to assess the participants’ essays, and later chose the 6
TM
Traits Writing Rubric designed by Mesa Public Schools (Appendix A1
and A2) (http://www.mpsaz.org/falconhill/teacherresources/filecabinet/
files/rubric-61_writing_3-6.pdf), with its appropriateness in essay assess-
ment using those comprehensive statements of qualities in each trait. As
a field-tested and research-based assessment designed for easy use across
text types (Coe, Hanita, Nishioka, & Smiley, 2011; Graham & Hebert,
2010), the scoring rubric included six traits of writing evaluation, cover-
ing ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency, and con-
ventions. The statements on the rubric explicitly define qualities to be
strong writing. Each trait is evaluated along a continuum from ‘1’ sug-
gesting the least desired feature of writing to ‘6’ describing the most
desired one.
To assign scores to the writing works for examining the effects of the
flipped instruction on English writing, the researchers consulted experts
specializing in writing assessment for converting quality levels into
scores. Based on suggestions from those experts, the traits of ideas,
organization, and voice were grouped as the global scope and each trait
accounted for 24 points; that is, the quality levels (from 1 to 6 levels)
were converted into scores (from 0 to 24 points). For traits of word
choice, sentence fluency, and conventions, they were taken together as
the local scope and each trait was converted to nine points. With three
traits (ideas, organization, and voice) respectively accounting for 24
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points and the other three (word choice, sentence fluency, and conven-
tions) each holding nine points, the total score on the agreed grading
rubric was, therefore, 99 points. Table 2 shows the overall score distribu-
tion of the conversion.
Three evaluators experienced in English writing later graded the stu-
dents’ essays using the agreed grading rubric, with the total of 99 points.
Inter-rater reliability among the three evaluators was evaluated via
Krippendorff’s alpha at .85, which is better than .80, which is often
thought of as the norm for good reliability (Hayes & Krippendorff,
2007). Descriptive statistics and a paired-samples t-test were employed to
investigate the effect of the writing instruction on the participants’ over-
all writing proficiency and specific traits of writing.
To probe into if the online flipped writing instruction affected demo-
tivation, in response to RQ2, the Demotivation Scale developed by Kao
(2012) was adapted for pre- and post-testing. Descriptive statistics and a
paired-samples t-test were adopted to compare the differences between
the pre-survey and the post-survey. The 36-item scale included seven
constructs, covering (1) English proficiency and self-confidence, (2)
teacher feedback, (3) teaching method and content, (4) writing difficulty,
(5) classroom atmosphere and teaching material, (6) writing product,
and (7) self-interest. Table 3 displays the internal reliability of the demo-
tivating factors in Kao’s study.
The constructs of English proficiency and self-confidence addressed to
what extend the motivation of the students to write in English decreased
as the result of the interplay between their current English abilities and
self-confidence. English proficiency included knowledge in grammar,
vocabulary, and idea expression. Self-confidence denoted a positive feel-
ing arising from personal abilities in English writing. Teacher feedback
probed into whether students would lose motivation for English writing
as the result of feedback from the instructor. This construct required the
students to think about whether the instructor taught the writing skills
in class, graded assignments properly, and provided constructive com-
ments. Teaching method and content, highlighted the perceived import-
ance of individual help from the instructor, understanding the purpose
of activities in class, speed of instruction, opportunities to practice writ-
ing in class, means of instruction, and relevance of the teaching content.
The construct of Writing difficulty asked students to reflect on the topic
for English writing, whether it was easy, interesting, related to your per-
sonal life, and familiar to you. Classroom atmosphere and teaching mater-
ial emphasized whether student motivation to writing in English might
be decreased as the result of classroom management practices, grading
policy, teacher–student interaction, peer relationships, and the use of
Table 1. Time allocation of the flipped instruction.
Taiwanese students
Taiwanese
Pre-class teaching
Week Stage assignment In-class task American partners assistants
1 Pre-task (5 weeks) Familiarized with the
functions of Sakai
2 Familiarized with the
functions of Sakai
3 Pre-test on descriptive Rubric familiarization
essay writing
4 Pre-test on argumenta- Feedback provision training
tive essay writing
5 Watched instructional video Pre-survey of Feedback provision training Rubric familiariza-
on effective descriptive demotivation tion
essay writing
6 Main-task Read chosen article on Finished draft of Gave feedback Provided in-class
(6 weeks) ‘Holiday’ and answered descriptive essay Had meaning essay writ-
comprehension Uploaded draft clarification ing help
check questions to Sakai
7 Read comments from the Finished revision Gave feedback Provided in-class
American partner draft of descrip- Had meaning essay writ-
tive essay clarification ing help
Uploaded the revi-
sion draft to Sakai
8 Read comments from the Finished final draft of Provided in-class
American partner descriptive essay essay writ-
Watched instructional video Uploaded final ing help
on effective argumenta- draft to Sakai
tive essay writing
9 Read chosen article on Finished draft of Gave written feedback Provided in-class
‘Parenting’ and answered argumentative Had meaning essay writ-
comprehension essay clarification ing help
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Table 1. Continued.
Taiwanese students
Taiwanese
Pre-class teaching
Week Stage assignment In-class task American partners assistants
10 Read comments from Finished revision Gave written feedback
American partner draft of argumen- Had meaning
tative essay clarification
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Uploaded revision
draft to Sakai
11 Read comments from Finished second revi-
American partner sion of the argu-
mentative essay
Uploaded final draft
to Sakai
RQ1: To what extent did the online flipped writing instruction enhance the
EFL learner’s writing proficiency?
The pre-tests and post-tests of the two writing genres (i.e. ‘School life’
for the descriptive essay and ‘Pros and cons of using smartphones in
today’s modern society’ for the argumentative essay) were graded by
three writing instruction experts using the writing rubric based on 6 þ 1
Traits. With the inter-rater reliability measured with Krippendorff’s alpha
at .85, the evaluation results yielded good reliability (Hayes &
Krippendorff, 2007). Table 4 shows the mean scores of the pre-tests and
post-tests of the two chosen genres. The results showed that in both gen-
res, the mean scores of the post-tests were higher than those of the pre-
tests. Specifically, the participants improved by 19.59 points on the
descriptive essay and 22.92 points on the argumentative essay.
The paired-samples t-test shown in Table 5 further revealed the partic-
ipants’ significant improvement in the post-tests of both genres in com-
parison with the pre-tests (p < .001), suggesting the positive effect of the
online flipped writing instruction on the participants’ overall writing
proficiency.
Furthermore, a detailed examination of each writing trait in each genre
via paired-sample t-test (Tables 6 and 7) revealed significant improve-
ment in the participants’ writing outcomes. Whether in global scope
(ideas, organization, and voice) or local scope (convention, sentence flu-
ency, and word choice), the participants significantly benefited from the
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Table 4. Mean scores of the pre- and post-tests of the two genres.
Test N Mean SD
Descriptive essay Pre-test 48 63.33 5.90
Post-test 48 82.92 5.79
Argumentative essay Pre-test 48 57.29 5.39
Post-test 48 80.21 4.79
Table 5. Paired-samples t-test of the pre-tests and the post-tests of the two genres.
Paired differences
95% confidence interval
of the difference
Std. Sig.
Mean SD error mean Lower Upper t df (two-tailed)
Descriptive 19.58 2.41 .49 18.57 20.60 39.772 47 .000
(post–pre)
Argumentative 22.92 3.4 .62 21.64 24.20 36.993 47 .000
(post–pre)
p<.001.
Table 6. Paired-samples t-test of the writing traits in the descriptive essay (post–pre).
Paired differences
95% confidence interval
of the difference
Std. Sig.
Mean SD error mean Lower Upper t df (two-tailed)
Ideas 4.25 0.90 0.18 3.87 4.63 23.215 47 .000
Organization 4.88 1.60 0.33 4.20 5.55 14.959 47 .000
Voice 4.63 1.44 0.29 4.02 5.23 15.746 47 .000
Convention 2.00 0.66 0.14 1.72 2.28 14.859 47 .000
Sentence fluency 2.08 0.78 0.16 1.76 2.41 13.160 47 .000
Word choice 1.75 0.79 0.16 1.42 2.09 10.798 47 .000
p<.001.
Table 7. Paired-samples t-test of the writing traits in the argumentative essay (post–pre).
Paired differences
95% confidence interval
of the difference
Std. Sig.
Mean SD error mean Lower Upper t df (two-tailed)
Ideas 4.92 1.28 0.26 4.38 5.46 18.780 47 .000
Organization 4.25 1.19 0.24 3.75 4.75 17.515 47 .000
Voice 7.67 1.90 0.39 6.86 8.47 19.732 47 .000
Convention 2.00 0.83 0.17 1.65 2.35 11.747 47 .000
Sentence fluency 2.04 0.86 0.18 1.68 2.40 11.648 47 .000
Word choice 2.04 1.00 0.20 1.62 2.46 10.011 47 .000
p<.001.
and the instructor’s timely help deepened the learning process, made the
students more engaged, and enhanced their writing outcomes.
RQ2: To what extent did the online flipped writing instruction affect
demotivation?
To examine whether the online flipped writing instruction contained
characteristics that affected demotivation, the Demotivation Scale devel-
oped by Kao (2012) was adopted in this study. Seven constructs were
included in the scale, consisting of (a) English proficiency and self-confi-
dence, (b) teacher feedback, (c) teaching method and content, (d) writing
difficulty, (e) classroom atmosphere and teaching materials, (f) writing
product, and (g) self-interest. Descriptive statistics of the pre-survey and
the post-survey shown in Table 8 revealed that the participants’
responses to the seven constructs fell into the upper-intermediate cat-
egory. The mean scores of the post-survey in five constructs (i.e. English
proficiency and self-confidence, teaching method and content, classroom
atmosphere and teaching material, writing product, and self-interest—
were lower than those of the pre-survey at a significant level, meaning
that they did not add to demotivation). Even though the scores of
teacher feedback and writing difficulty had somewhat higher result on
the post-survey than the pre-survey, the differences were not significant,
indicating that these factors did not contribute to demotivation.
The detailed analysis of the mean differences in each factor (as dem-
onstrated in Table 9) indicated that significant differences were found in
four factors, including teaching method and content, classroom atmos-
phere and teaching material, writing product, and self-interest. That is,
teaching method and content, classroom atmosphere and teaching mater-
ial, writing product, and self-interest in the course of the online flipped
writing instruction did not result in demotivation at the conclusion of
the study compared to the beginning. Among the four constructs, self-
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Table 8. Mean scores of the pre-survey and the post-survey of the demotivation scale.
Classroom
atmosphere
English Teaching and
proficiency and Teacher method Writing teaching Writing
self-confidence feedback and content difficulty materials product Self-interest
Pre-survey 3.70 4.10 3.79 3.45 3.93 3.70 3.89
Post-survey 3.57 4.20 3.62 3.51 3.65 3.51 3.34
Mean 0.13 0.1 0.17 0.06 0.28 0.19 0.55
difference
readings materials and instructional videos at their own pace. The revi-
sion process with the help of the instructor, teaching assistants, and
American partners provided flexibility that fit the needs of each individ-
ual Taiwanese participant. In addition, the given instruction offered
ample opportunities for the students to practice writing in class, includ-
ing responses to comprehension check questions, the draft, and related
revisions. The instruction also featured variations in instruction (pre-
instruction activities, feedback reception and meaning clarification during
in-class writing tasks, individual assistance from the instructor and the
teaching assistants). Therefore, features of the teaching method and con-
tent in the flipped instructional design did not lead to a decline
in motivation.
As a result of these findings, the answer to Research Question 2 is that
none of the factors in Kao’s Demotivation Scale (2012) produces demo-
tivation in this study, including (1) English proficiency and self-confi-
dence, (2) teacher feedback, (3) teaching method and content, (4) writing
difficulty, (5) classroom atmosphere and teaching material, (6) writing
product, and (7) self-interest. Specifically designed to meet the demotiv-
ation challenges in EFL writing, the flipped instructional practice with
peer feedback adopted in this study successfully avoided demotivating
the students.
RQ3: What were the students’ overall perceptions about the online flipped
writing instruction?
The students’ overall perceptions about the online flipped writing
instruction, collected via focus-group interviews and reflective journals,
were analyzed for themes. The overall results revealed that the partici-
pants showed positive perceptions about the learning experience adopted
in this study. Their responses again highlighted the need to avoid demo-
tivational factors in English writing, particularly in terms of teaching
method and contents, classroom atmosphere and teaching materials,
writing products, and self-interest. Such results were evidenced by their
reflection on three closely related dimensions: (1) motivation and enjoy-
ment, (2) time and effort commitment, and (3) learning outcomes.
Learning outcomes
The final theme in student analysis was based on the learning outcomes
resulting from the instructional design. In most cases, the students saw
beneficial outcomes. Nearly 75% of the students attributed their
26 W.-C.V. WU ET AL.
Conclusion
The results of this study have extended prior research by probing into
the under-explored issue of demotivation in EFL learning. The primary
affordances identified by this study were the beneficial application of the
online flipped writing instruction to English writing in an EFL context.
Specifically, four constructs (namely, teaching method and content, class-
room atmosphere and teaching material, writing product, and self-inter-
est) in the flipped instructional design were identified as prominent
factors that must be controlled to avoid demotivating students in English
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1. The flipped instruction did not contain elements that might lead to a
decline in motivation in English writing over time, thus keeping par-
ticipants from losing their initial level of motivation, allowing them
to become more engaged in the writing process.
2. It significantly enhanced the students’ writing skills, thus making
them more competent in the macro-level (the global scope) and
micro-level (the local scope) areas.
3. It successfully engaged the participants in the learning tasks (includ-
ing both pre-class and in-class activities).
Disclosure statement
No potential conflict of interest was reported by the authors.
Notes on contributors
Dr. Wen-chi Vivian Wu, who received her doctoral degree in 2006, is a distinguished
professor of the Department of Foreign Languages at Asia University in Taiwan. Her
recent research areas include CALL, MALL, cross-cultural communication, robotics
learning, and learner motivation for English as a global language. She has published
extensively on CALL and technology-related prestigious journals, including CALL,
System, Computer in Human Behavior, Educational Technology and Society, etc. Over
the past few years, she has integrated international experiences into her conversation
and writing courses linking her students with college students and university professors
in America and Japan. She serves on the editorial board of the CALL Journal, and as a
senior advisor of Asian EFL Journal and associate editor of Asian ESP Journal.
COMPUTER ASSISTED LANGUAGE LEARNING 29
Dr. Jie Chi Yang received his Ph.D. degree in Department of Human System Science
from the Tokyo Institute of Technology, Japan, in 2000. He is currently a full professor
in the Graduate Institute of Network Learning Technology at the National Central
University, Taiwan. His research interests include computer assisted language learning,
digital game-based learning, human factors, mobile learning, web-based learning envir-
onment, natural language processing, and multimedia technologies. He is working on
the design, development, and evaluation of interactive learning environments by using
advanced technologies, aiming to enhance language learning and science learning. He
received the Ta-You Wu Memorial Award (Young Outstanding Researcher Award) from
the Ministry of Science and Technology, Taiwan in 2009. He was also appointed as
Distinguished Professor at the National Central University, Taiwan in 2010.
Mr. Jun Scott Chen Hsieh is currently a Ph.D. candidate of the Graduate Institute of
Network Learning Technology at National Central University in Taiwan. He has four
academic papers published in CALL related journals while also serving as the production
editor of the Asian EFL Journal and the Managing Editor of International Journal of
Distance Education Technologies (IJDET). His recent research areas include flipped
learning, mobile learning, cross-cultural communication, intercultural collaboration, and
online learning community.
Dr. Tosh Yamamoto is a professor at the Center for Teaching and Learning at the
Kansai University in Osaka, Japan. He is currently an Associate Director for the
Division of Promotion of Educational Development. Tosh is an educational specialist for
curriculum, instruction, and media informatics ranging from the design for the educa-
tional paradigm at the institutional level, on the one hand, and for the course design to
ePortfolio design enhanced with active learning activities, on the other. For the last few
years, Tosh has been developing curriculum for Liberal Arts Education for Collaborative
Online International Learning (COIL) Program, in which students from various coun-
tries in Asia can conduct PBL in Global Teams in order to collaboratively design the
sustainable future society.
ORCID
Jie Chi Yang http://orcid.org/0000-0002-6265-1453
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