TITLE: My mom, My superhero

Introduction: There are quite a lot of people that I admire but the person that I admire the
most is my mom.

Topic sentence: My mom is so beautiful, has a great personality and she cares a lot about me,
which I admire the most.

Reason 1: My mom is so beautiful.

Details:

She has long black hair.

She is taller taller than my father, that’s the reason which I’m so tall.

She has a great fashion instict, she never looks bad.

Reason 2: She has a great personality.

Details:

Being selfless is a great quality that my mom has because whenever someone is sick she stays
up all night to look that person.

She sacrifices her own needs for her family’s requirements.

My mom also takes care of the street animals, she buys their food.

Reason 3: My mom cares a lot about me.

Details:

When I was on high school, she did a lot of work with me with my work because she dreamed
of me being the top student in my class.

She gives away all her pleasures for my sake and wants me to be happy all the time.

She also cooks the best food for me.

Conclusion:

I love my mom so much, and she also loves me. Ten maids can not even do as much work as
my mom does, mostly every woman can be a mom but it takes a lot of courage and hard work
to be like my mom.