七、混合图(5)

1. 混合图:温度与降水

The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of
Kolkata.

范文

The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a
calendar year in Kolkata.

It is noticeable that monthly figures for precipitation in Kolkata vary considerably, whereas
monthly temperatures remain relatively stable. .(compare 2 chart,,, general trend )

//////Rainfall is highest from July to August, while temperatures are highest in April and
May.(compare 2 chart ,, max )
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Between the months of January and May, average temperatures in Kolkata rise from their
lowest point at around 20°C to a peak of just over 30°C. ///// Average rainfall in the city also
rises over the same period, from approximately 20mm of rain in January to 100mm in May.
(( so easy semantic ) )
While temperatures stay roughly the same for the next four months (june to sep!!)), the
amount of rainfall more than doubles between May and June….. Figures for precipitation
remain above 250mm from June to September, peaking at around 330mm in
July…///////////……… The final three months of the year see a dramatic fall in precipitation,
to a low of about 10mm in December, and a steady drop in temperatures back to the
January average.((( para 4 ,,, key is grey words,, 不 coherant !!!// seen 100 times!!!))

(173 words, band 9)

###saved////good semantic skill :: Figures for precipitation remain above 250mm from
June to September, peaking at around 330mm in July… /// then,, no need mention some
fluctuations!!!!!!!

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See orange line ,, and pink line !

!!!3 things to mention!!

 

 
 
 
1))) dramatic change ((( slopy ))))
 
 
2))) curve shape (( curve))
 
 
3))) overall decrease ,, 不 管 fluctuate ,, 或 decrease 的 rate changes (( (overall ,,, draw
100 條平行時空 line )))
2. 混合图:英国移民
The chart below shows long-term international migration in UK.

范文

The chart gives information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration between
1999 and 2008.

Both immigration and emigration rates rose over the period shown, but the figures for
immigration were significantly higher. Net migration peaked in 2004 and 2007. (( so easy ,,
semantic !!))
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BG skill ///// 全文以 bar chart ‘’ net figures ‘’ 做主線想/// as 3 個 chart in this Q,,, has
causeual relationship !!!!

1111111In 1999( 描 starting point!!!! )), over 450,000 people came to live in the UK, while the
number of people who emigrated stood at just under 300,000. The figure for net migration
was around 160,000,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

and it 2222222remainedTT at a similar level until 2003.

…From 1999 to 2004, the immigration rate rose byCH nearly 150,000 people, but there was
a much smaller riseCC in emigration.

………. Net migration peaked at almost 250,000 people in 2004.

1000!！！！！（（段中 order,, 任意出 here）） (( 因 沒有所謂的 max,/// G 18

！！！！))

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Para 4

After 2004, the rate of immigration 55555remained high, but the number of people
emigrating fluctuated( = 升又跌！！

). ….. Emigration 66666fell suddenly in 2007, before peaking at about 420,000 people in
2008. …………………………….As a result, the net migration figure rose to around 240,000 in
2007, but fell back to around 160,000 in 2008.(159)

##saved 上面 chart ,,, 以 2004 做 cutting ,,, 但 2004 – 2005 可不 mention /// see this
1000 time ((((( img draw )) （（ima，，，大風 位 me 吹 ））

3. 混合图:水消耗
The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water

consumption in two different countries.

范文:

The charts compare the amount of water used for agriculture, industry and homes around
the world, and water use in Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo.
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It is clear that global water needs rose significantly between 1900 and 2000,,,,,,, and that
agriculture accounted for the largest proportion of water used((( general trend with the sig.
change )) (( use line graph 技 only !!!!))) . …………..We can also see that water consumption
was considerably higher in Brazil than in the Congo. ^^^^^^

In 1900(111111), around 500km3of water was used by the agriculture sector worldwide.
The figures for industrial and domestic water consumption stood at around one fifth 倍 of
that amount.(( 原點描，，常做)。。。。 By 2000( 2222222) , global water use for
agriculture had increasedCH to around 3000km3, industrial water use had risen to just
under half 倍 CC 他人 that amount, and domestic consumption had reached approximately
500km3.
In the year 2000, the populations of Brazil and the Congo were 176 million and 5.2 million
respectively XX。。。。。。。。。. Water consumption per person in Brazil, at 359m3,
was much higherCC than that in the Congo , at only 8m3, ，，，，，，，and this could be
explained( good specific skill, 找因果 ) by the fact that Brazil had 265 times more 倍
irrigated land.(184 words, band 9)

4. 混合图:运动开支

The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their
children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children
who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.
范文

The line graphs show the average monthly amount that parents in Britain spent on their
children’s sporting activities and the number of British children who took part in three
different sports from 2008 to 2014.

It is clear that parents spent more money each year on their children’s participation in sports
over the six-year period. In terms of the number of children taking part, football was
significantly more popular than athletics and swimming. ((( easy semantic ))))

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（（para 3 ,, chart 1 ） ( so easy semantic ) ( ^^^^^

In 2008, British parents spent an average of around £20 per month on their children’s
sporting activities.………….. Parents’ spending on children’s sports increased gradually TTover
the following six years, and by 2014 the average monthly amount had risen toCH just over
£30.
Para 4

Looking at participation numbers, in 2008 approximately 8 million British children played

football, while only 2 million children were enrolled in swimming clubs and less than 1
million practised athletics.。。。。。 The figures for football participation remained
relatively stable over the following 6 years. By contrast, participation in swimming almost
doubledC 倍 , to nearly 4 million children, and there was a near fivefold increaseC 倍 in the
number of children doing athletics.(185 words, band 9) （（easy semantic ））

5. 混合图:独居人口

The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who
were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-
person households.

Living alone in England by age and gender, 2011

Number of bedrooms in one-person households (England, 2011)

范文

The two charts give information about single-occupant households in England in the year
2011. The bar chart compares figures for occupants' age and gender, and the pie chart
shows data about the number of bedrooms in these homes.

Overall, females made up a higher proportion of people living alone than males, and this
difference is particularly noticeable in the older age categories.((( 兩節的 bar ,, must mention
which 節 is more!!!))(( trend + most sig 位)) ///////We can also see that the most common
number of bedrooms in a single-occupant home was two.
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just learn vocab here ///// dun learn semantic here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A significant majority of the people aged (1111)65 or over who were living alone in England
in 2011 were female. ……….Women made up around 72% of single occupants aged
(22222)75 to 84, …………..and 76% of those aged (3333)85 or over. ……………By contrast,
among younger adults( good word!!!))) the figures for males were higher. For example, in
the (4444)35-49 age category, men accounted for nearly 65% of people living alone. ((( bad
semantic ,, as no grouping )) (( can mem some vocab ))
In the same year, 35.4% of one-person households in England had two bedrooms,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
while one- bedroom and three-bedroom homes accounted for 28% and 29.8% of the total.
Under 7% of single-occupant homes had four or more bedrooms. ((( esay semantic))))

(189 words, band 9)