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september, 2019
< what can i get you ? >
ONE BODYGUARD...
do it...
for your trouble.
leave.
smoke the guard and let ’ s
get this guy bagged up.
it ’s him.
this is token. package secured. ready
for pick up at the service entrance.
coming out.
how is it that we are at ground zero, in
a city heralded as the mecca of the new
middle eastern free economic zone...
yet the network coverage
YET THE
goes NETWORK
from full bars to
zero every other block.
COVERAGE GOES FROM
FULL BARS TO ZERO
EVERY OTHER BLOCK?
one of the few perks of contracting, is we i still don’t know whether to take that
get exempted from all the chemical therapy as a compliment or insult. i mean fuck
and resistance conditioning. instead we get drinking their kool aid, but the random
random, no-notice polygraphs. though it’s polys are a total pain in the ass.
probably got more to do with saving money
than any kind of security measure.
you’re not on secure channels ?
* ZZZZZZZZZZ *
* RING
what ’s up buddy ?
check this shit out, we’re up for a random poly. again! hmmmm ?
shocker.
grinch here, was fucking the last
TL’s old lady. when the TL found
out, he didn’t take too kindly to it
and as a parting gift, when he
rotated out of country, he put us
on the shit list, so we get polys.
every week. thanks again for that.
* t l - t e a m le a d e r
YOU NEED ADDITIONAL PAX? no, we’re good. copy that, out.
jet, did you copy last?
copy direct.
one of those days ?
good times.
call me j.r.
SEND IT.
COPY THAT.
yes ?
* zzzzz *
where ?!!
* ZZZZZ *
de nada.
excellent. i’ll leave you his resume.
contact me to set up the meet.
roger that.
50/50.
you driving ? i ’m driving .
no...
oh fuck man, so check this out. yesterday, their case officer
gives them a routine pick up on an existing source. no
problem, right ? three variants later, their asset is a no show.
they have no comms, so they call it in. case officer whigs the
fuck out. she wants to burn all the safe rooms, extract
everyone of her sources and make a run for the border.
then, out of nowhere, the hajj calls in and is like, “where the
fuck are you guys? i’ve been standing out here for hours.”
turns out the case officer had her variants screwed up and
while jet and rocket were playing delta ninja secret agent, he
was pounding turkish coffees and kabobs.
haha fucker.
that ’s him .
* RING *
GO.
known supporters of
the ayatollah al-sistani
and muqtada al-sadr.
...
mr. shammari, i’m aware that such i don’t do this for money, mister.
information comes with a price--
i deal in solutions to
problems with dollar
amounts attached to them.
gentlemen.
SCRIPT
JON CHANG
STORY
JON CHANG AND KANE SMITH
ART & COLOR
JOSH TAYLOR
LETTERING
JON CHANG
LEAD EDITOR
DAVYYD PATTINSON
BLACK POWDER \\ RED EARTH LOGO DESIGN BY
JON CHANG
SPECIAL THANKS TO
ECHELON SOFTWARE CREW
COPYRIGHT
2011 & 2014 ECHELON SOFTWARE, INC. All RIGHTS RESERVED
www
BLACKPOWDERREDEARTH.com
APPENDIX AND NOTES
PAGE 1
Basran is a breakaway fictional nation that encapsulates the Shi'a diaspora within today's Iraq. In the world of BPRE, Iraq has
disintegrated into 3 separate nations: Basran, Kurdistan and the New Islamic State.
PAGE 4
When observing a target structure, sides of the buildings are color-coded consistently throughout an objective area:
WHITE--direction of assault side; GREEN--right side; BLACK--rear side; RED--left side and BLUE--roof.
P8
TOKEN is adding an Ipecac analog to the food to induce nausea in the target. The thinking here is to force the target’s body
guards to respond urgently to a situation they might not be trained to deal with. Off their game, they are more likely to make
mistakes and create an opening for TOKEN and GRINCH to snatch the HVT(High Value Target).
P17
Al-Basrah is the capital of Basran and the center of the nation’s new Free Economic Zone. Free economic zones provide a
venue for multinational companies to set up shop and do business while either being absolved entirely from paying tax or
taxed a token amount, to stimulate local economic development. Sometimes called Free Ports, al-Basrah is perfectly situated
as hub for ships and goods to flow into and out of the region. However, like the Free Economic Zones in Iran, half the services
in the city barely work unless you are in a “green area”.
P18
The jargon gets a bit thick here, but is a fairly accurate reflection of multiple conversations I have sat in on while researching
this title. The reference to "Star Fleet" is a common one. It can mean a lot of things, but in this case, it means the company
paying the bills - Cold Harbor.
Dog Chips or Blue Force Tracker micro-chips were fictional at time of writing(2009) but I would be surprised if someone was
not fielding something like it today. The idea is no different than microchipping a pet, except the chip would hijack any
nearby phone to geo-locate itself on a ping from an operations center like a souped up Recco® Rescue System worn by
skiers in the mountains. Of course none of that is expressed in the book, but that was what was going through my mind at
the time.
P20
There generally aren't a lot of jobs for young people in countries experiencing an ongoing civil war. Kidnap and Ransom has
become a full-time business for many in South America and now that business is coming to the Middle East. It is also is a no
brainer way to demonstrate that capability to a prospective employer regime that needs people who can do exactly that to
their enemies.
The chemical and psychological conditioning is another fictional element, but I believe it will be with us soon. The idea is that
through specific hypnotic suggestion and a diet of drugs, a person could be conditioned to resist interrogation or even
conversation about a specific topic without their body physically shutting down and preventing that person from even
considering the subject.
P21
Ayatollah Al-Sistani is one of the most influential imams in Shi'a Islam. He remains mostly apolitical, but has encouraged the
Shi'a people to vote, resist violence and use politics rather than terrorism to take their place at the head of the Iraqi
government. This position has put him at odds with both the US objectives in the region and the Iranian leadership in Tehran
several times since the US invasion in 2003.
APPENDIX AND NOTES (cont’d)
For Iran, Iraq represents a strategic buffer zone against the Sunni nations that funded Saddam’s war against Iran in the 80's.
Much like Afghanistan for the Pakistanis, Iran will tolerate some chaos to have a location where they can threaten Kuwait,
Saudi Arabia and Jordan via direct land access. Naturally, those nations do not want Iran to have so much influence, if not
direct control of Iraq, hence TOKEN's comment about his paycheck coming from Riyad. This is why the Saudi Intelligence
Service has retained Cold Harbor to enter the country under the auspices of a start up oil company bidding on well develop-
ment work in the region. As of today, almost 60% of Iraq's oil wealth is in territory controlled by the Shi'a.
P24
GRINCH doesn't crack the windows on his hardskin car as it would defeat the purpose of having an up armored car in case
one of the men working the check point was a suicide bomber, just waiting for the right target.
P28
A nod to one of my favorite shows, The Prisoner.
P29
Nissour Square is the location where a Blackwater TST was ambushed by multiple Jaish al Mahdi gunmen in police
uniforms. They initiated the ambush by knowingly directing non-combatants into a intersection blocked off by a Blackwater
TST Quick Response Force, who were clearing the way for another motorcade that had been hit in another ambush minutes
earlier. The reference here is just a fancy way of saying, "In case this goes bad."
P33
The situation GRINCH outlines is not uncommon. A company bids a contract, wins it and then upon realizing they underbid
the contract, they cut everyone’s wages but their own. Shocking.
P36
This is mostly back story about the region and is indicative of how the Iranians have done business in Iraq to date. If
opposition is Sunni, they kill them outright. If opposition is Shi'a, their operatives try to frame it up as a Sunni attack or better
yet, leak information to Sunni terrorist groups to do the hit themselves.
P37
The reference to Lebanon refers to the civil war that tore the country apart in the late 70's and early 80's. Lebanon became a
place where terror groups could fight war by proxy and test out new techniques for ethnic cleansing, kidnapping and car
bombs.
P38
JAF wants the Quds Force officer Al-Fahradi because he needs to question him and be able to present as much irrefutable
proof to his Ayatollah that the Iranians are deliberately attempting to destroy their organization.
P45
This source pick up is an expedient way to facilitate a check-in from an asset that minimizes risk to all parties as it is both
mobile and innocuous. Using a fresh burner phone also insures that it would be extremely difficult to detect and intercept.
P47-48
We wanted to convey a sense of the layers of security that would be in place guarding a location such as a safe house. Cold
Harbor works out of hotels and rented apartments as it allows them to constantly change locations, change cars and conduct
other tradecraft activities without arousing suspicion.
APPENDIX AND NOTES (cont’d)
P49
Security is all about mitigating risk. Working up a target profile on a meet is standard procedure as it gives the operator
insight into the behaviors and motivations of the people they will have under their control.
P51
A route plan is something the operators generally put together while doing advance work for a move. In this case, I had their
Team Leader brief them as TOKEN and GRINCH had just got back from doing the move with Khaliq on page 45.
An SDR is a Surveillance Detection Route. Fairly basic technique to confirm one is not being followed.
P52
"If this goes all Bay of Pigs on us," is of course a reference to the failed Bay of Pigs Invasion where the US Government left a
sponsored invasion force without promised air cover, leaving them to be slaughtered or captured by the communist
government they were in Cuba to overthrow. Just like the reference to Nissour Square, it is just a way of saying, "In case this
goes bad." JR's response about the Cuban Missile Crisis is him being a bit of a smart ass, since both operators are being
very professional and cautious about the mission they are about to go on and JR likes to bust their balls.
P54
"Wheel Gun Guy" comes from a story I was told about there being three types of guys in the business. "The Wheel Gun Guy"
is old school, he carries a wheel gun(revolver) because a cylinder will never jam and all this new technique and training is
just ninja kung fu grip shit. That, and he probably only fucks in missionary position. There's the "1911 Guy" who believes that
the 1911 handgun is the perfect gun because the amount of attention and care a 1911 needs, the ergonomics are just right
and plastic guns, aka Glocks, are bullshit. This guy may occasionally venture out of missionary into doggie style but don’t
hold your breath. Finally, there's the "Glock Guy", who carries a Glock because he wants a lot of bullets in reliable package
that will always go bang. This guy embraces new tech and will try anything at least once. Kinky!
P55
OK, the shop jargon is a little thick here but I'll try to make it short. Variants are different locations on a map where a move
can be routed through. I was told this exact story by a couple of mobile security officers who were at ground zero when all
hell broke loose after an important source missed a pick up in a somewhat sketchy area. Turned out, the handler of this
source wasn't keeping up with the latest location data packages and she sent the source to the wrong pick up site. Pick up
variants change constantly based on conditions and atmospherics in different places at any given time - for example, maybe
there’s an anti-government protest happening on street A today so it is not viable location for a pick up.
“Flies on eyeballs red dot special” is a reference to enthusiastic hires with little/no field experience. The “flies on eyeballs
guy” is a reference to Cofer Black, former Director of the CIA Counterterrorist Center who went on to work for Blackwater
USA and it’s subsidiaries.
“Kobayashi Maru” is the test in Star Trek that all captains must take before they can command their own ship. It is a no-win
test that gauges a potential captain’s response in a lose-lose situation. “Girls Gone Wild” was a direct to video series in the
90's that featured drunk college girls shedding their clothing for cash. Basically, the whole event they are commenting on is a
farce.
P56
My homage to "The Good, The Bad and The Ugly".
APPENDIX AND NOTES (cont’d)
P59
The event in the 90's Shammari is referring to occurred at the end of Desert Storm, when the US Government incited the
Shi'a and Kurds to revolt against Saddam in Iraq. Like the Bay of Pigs, the US Forces in the area did nothing to support these
uprisings, leading to thousands being gassed, executed in mass graves or gunned down by helicopter gunships. Ever since,
there has been a deep skepticism of US promises and intentions that exists even today among the Shi'a over that betrayal.
P60-66
This entire conversation was relayed to me by a former Iraqi turned US citizen who had become an asset hunting down AQ
and Baathist leadership. This is pretty much how the conversation went the day he was recruited as an informant by the
Americans.
AUTHOR’S NOTE
Thanks for picking up version 1.1 of Black Powder \\ Red Earth Chapter 1.
When I started writing BPRE in 2005, my goal was to tell a story that was almost documentary in nature rather than a more
traditional work of fiction where characters have a pronounced arc and there was a clearly defined villain that would be the
focus of the protagonists efforts. At the time, pretty much every tale of modern warfare I had read, played or watched ended
with it all being the work of Russian Separatists and there was a race to stop the nuke. BPRE would have none of that.
BPRE was developed over several years through hundreds of interviews with people working in Iraq, watching footage
captured from Contour and GoPro cameras and learning about the regional geo-politics. Many of those people became
friends. Some of them aren’t with us anymore. In many ways, BPRE is their story more than it is my own. I hope I was able to
do it some justice.
I can say without doubt, I was very influenced by the short films of Neill Blomkamp, the writing of Cormac McCarthy and Neal
Asher. I have just concluded my work on the second story arc in the BPRE universe and am now embarking on a much
larger story that is parallel to this one.
Jon Chang