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In what ways are animals helpful to humans?

It is undeniable that animals bring people many advantages. First and foremost, animals are exceptional
companions. For example, dogs and cats share melancholy with the bosses because these creatures can
alleviate the owners’ strain and tension when they unlock the door, see their dogs fawning or hear their cats
meowing after a hectic day. Thanks to that superb sharing, they no longer feel weary. Moreover, they are also
favorable to the treatment of many diseases. People with trauma should spend time being together with them
as they help to reduce the risk of living in solitude and contracting autism or depression. The second benefit of
animals is that they are also remarkable house guards. These intimate friends will completely do the tasks
whenever their hosts are away. The possessors are very secure due to the loyalty of the dog to defend
property from thieves by barking constantly or biting them. Besides, geese are reliable protectors. They use
the beak to peak at strangers who illicitly enter their masters’ area. In conclusion, animals, kinds of splendid
organisms, do good to human being.
1.The paragraph has the appropriate format
2.It has a topic sentence
3.The topic sentence has a clear controlling idea
4.Every sentence in each paragraph is directly related to the main idea
5.The paragraph ends with a concluding sentence
6. The concluding sentence uses the suggested signals
7. The concluding sentence summarize a comment.

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