Mid Term Test Project

For complete the points from make prewrite

The subject of Writing II

BY :
SUTAN WIJOYO (0600010071)

NATIONAL EDUCATION DEPARTMENT

ENGLISH LANGUAGE PROGRAM
BRAWIJAYA UNIVERSITY
MALANG
2007
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Christina Aguilera

Topic Sentence : Christina Aguilera make the best artist for three reason.

A. Christina Aguilera is a beautiful artist

1. She has a heart face and a straight nose
2. She has grey eyes and white skin likes snow
3. She has long and straight hair.
4. The hair colours is white and black .
5. She has thin lips
6. Also she has curlet hair eyes and good eyebrow in her face.
B. She is a look fashionable.
1. She is wearing black tang top and red cap
2. Also really likes wearing jewelery
3. She is wearing cross Christ necklace
4. Two piercings diamond in her nose and lips
5. The hair always full colour
C. The artist full talent
1. She is a singer
2. She is a movie artist

Concluding Sentence :Christina Aguilera is famous artist in the world and often
achieve from every awards.
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Christina Aguilera

Christina Aguilera make the best artist for three reason. Christina Aguilera is a
beautiful artist. She has a heart face and a straight nose. She has grey eyes and white
skin likes snow. She has long and straight hair. The hair colours is white and black .
She has thin lips. Also she has curlet hair eyes and good eyebrow in her face. She is a
look fashionable. She is wearing black tang top and red cap. Also really likes wearing
jewelery. She is wearing cross Christ necklace. Two piercings diamond in her nose and
lips. The hair always full colour. The artist full talent. She is a singer. She is a movie
artist. Christina Aguilera is famous artist in the world and often achieve from every
awards.
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Christina Aguilera

Christina Aguilera make the best artist for three reason. First of all, Christina Aguilera
is a beautiful artist. She has a heart face and a straight nose. She has grey eyes and
white skin likes snow. She has long and straight hair. The hair colours is white and
black.. She has thin lips. Also, she has curlet hair eyes and good eyebrow in her face.
Second, She is a look fashionable. She is wearing black tang top and red cap. She also
really likes wearing jewelery. She is wearing cross Christ necklace, two piercings
diamond in her nose and lips. The hair always alternating colours every week. Third,
she is a artist full talent. She is a singer and a movie artist in Hollywood. Christina
Aguilera is famous artist in the world and often achieve from every awards.