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Drill 9 1.When a writer create the perliminary version of a document . they are concentrating on conveying the intended ideas. 2.This ver sion of a preleminary document is called a rough. 3. Afrer the draft is created the Write edits refined the copy . 4.Sometime proofreaders marks are used to edit the draft. 5.The changes will them be make to the original 6.After the changes have been made then the Writer reads the copy 7. Edit ing and proofreading requires alot of time and effort. 8.An attiture of excellance is reqiured to produce error free message. Drill 10 When a writer creates the preliminary version of a document , he or she is concerntrating on converying ideas. This prelimiary version is called a rough draft . After the draft is created . the writer edits or refines the copy. Peoofreaders marks are used to edit the rough draft . The editing changes will be made to the original. Then the writer reads the copy again. Editing requires a lot of time and effort. AN attitude of exellence is requires to produce an error-free message.

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Any of us whose target is to achieve success in our professional lives will understand that we must learn how to work in harmony with others whose paths may cross ours daily. We will, unquestionably, work for ,with and beside people, just as they will, work for, with, and beside us. We will judge them, as most certanly they are going to be judging us. A lot of people realize the need for solid working relations and have a rule that treats others as they, themselves, expect to be treated. This seems to be a sound, practical idea for them.

Writing 9 I spoke with one company visitor recently; and she was very much impressed, she said, with the large amount of work she had noted being finished by one of our front office workers. I told her how we had just last week recognized this very person for what he had done, for output, naturall, but also because of its exciellence. We know this person has that magic touch . This magic touch is the ability to do a fair amount of work in a fair amount of time . It involnes a desire to become ever more efficient witout losing quality--the touch all workers should have.

Writing 10 Isnt it great just to untangle and relax after you have keyed a completed dociment? Complete, or just done? No document is quite complete until it has left you and passed to the next step. There are desirable thing that must happend to a document before you surrender it . It must be read carefully, first of all, for meaning to find words thet look right but arent. Read word for word. Check all figures and exact data. like a date or time, with your principal copy. Make sure format details are right . Only then, print or remove the work and scrutinize to see how it might look to a recipient.

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Anyone who expects some day to find an excellent job should begin now to learn the value of accuracy. To be worth anything , completed work must be correct, without question. Naturally, we realize that the human aspect of the work equation always raises the prospect of errors; but we should understand that those same errors can be found and fixed. Every completed job should carry at least one stamp; the stamp of pride in work that is exemplary.

Writing 12 No question about it; Many personal problems we face today arise from the fact that we earthlings have never been very wise consumers. We havent consumed our narural resources well; as a result, we have jepardized much of our environmemt. We excused our behavoir because we tought that our stock of most resources had no limit. So, finally, we are beginning to realize just how indiscreet we were; and we are taking steps to rebuild our world Writing 13 When I see people in top job, I know Im seeing people who sell. Im not just referring to employees who labor in a retail outlet; I mean those people who put extra effort into convincing others to recognize their best qualities . They, themselves, are the commodity they sell; and their optimum tools are appearance, language, and personality. They look great, they talk and write well; and, with candid self-confidence, they meet you eye to eye .

Writing 14 What do you expect when you travel to a foreign county? Quite a few people realize that one of the real joys of