Outline - Revised Version: Problem-Solution Essay

Please write an improved version of your Outline, based on your

teacher’s comments. Highlight new sections/words or corrections
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Problem: xxxxx
Hook (capture the reader’s attention)
xxxx
Introduction
Connecting information - (why is the problem significant or troubling?)
xxxxx
Thesis statement (mention the problem and a statement affirming that there are solutions)
xxxx
Solution 1: xxx
what?
Supporting xxxx
Body
idea Who?
paragraph 1 (10 words per
section max) xxxx
How?
xxxx
Solution 2: xxxx
Supporting what?
idea xxxx
Body (10 words per
paragraph 2 section max)
Who?
xxxx
How?
xxxx
Restatement of the Thesis
xxxx
Concluding
paragraph Concluding sentence (call to action)
xxxx