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Usama Personal Essay - TB Comments
Usama Personal Essay - TB Comments
Dr. Bradway
ENG101
Date: 9/25/2022
Who said you must become a world champion to be a professional athlete? Six years ago, I
started my running journey, which taught me a lot, and shaped me into the person who I am today. But
before that let's go back and see how it all began. As a kid, I wasn't interested in sports at all. I just wanted
to play video games and have fun like any other kid, until I met this coach in one of our PE classes. He
visited our school in search of players for the academy where he trains. To find out who among us has the
talent, he gave us a fitness test. The test consisted of running back and forth until you get tired. I couldn't
tell if I was stressed, scared, or excited. My hands couldn't stop shaking and sweating, and I could hear
my heart pounding. So, the test began, and we began running, back and forth, back and forth for thirty
minutes. I saw all my classmates collapse to the ground like flies from exhaustion. I wanted to stop too,
but I kept telling myself Just one more minute, Usama, just run for one more minute. '' Until someone
shouted, "Congratulations," it was the coach, he stopped me after one hour of running and asked me,
``What's your name kid? I answered while hardly catching my breath. My name is Usama. Well Usama,
congratulations again. I’m coach Dave. You killed it kid. I will see you in our Academy next year, he
In 2015, my life changed when I started attending the academy. I was surrounded by professional
athletes of different ages, from all around the world, participating in a variety of sports, everyone was
focused on their goal. After seeing that, I became enthralled and resolved to become a professional runner
and win Olympic medals. What a childish dream right? it was still too early for such goals, and I knew
there would be many obstacles in my way. I went to my first training session, and coach Dave was there.
When I told him about my dream, he burst out laughing and said, "Well kid it's a big dream and you have
to start working for it brick by brick. Let me tell you about coach Dave a bit. He is from Ireland, thirty
years old. He has a great body. He is very serious when it comes to training, but other than that you will
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find him smiling all the time, and he always says positive things even when you mess up. I took his
advice and began building my road brick by brick, as he suggested. I was going to the academy at 7 a.m.
and returning at 7 p.m. it was new thing for me not to be at home all that time, but I learned how to
manage my time and balance my athletic and academic careers. I was determined, no matter what, to
achieve my goal. By training twice a day, and waking up early in the morning while everyone is still
sleeping and go for a run, ignoring all the aches in my bones from working out at the gym. I even made
myself like the bad taste of the protein. It doesn't even smell good. I have been in this discipline for five
months. Even my parents were astonished by their 13 years old child who is behaving like an adult. One
day, they asked me what changed you like this? I said with a smile on my face I'm a pro athlete now. I
could see in their faces how proud they were. Finally, the hour has come. My first official race, unusually
I wasn’t feeling any of the nervousness and fear that I used to, I was calm and ready to race. I spoke to
Coach Dave before the race started and he said, this is the first step towards your dream, and I am sure
you will do well, you worked hard for this. Go get your medal now. Go put your first brick champ. And
that was what happened. I was far ahead of my fellow runners. And all I was thinking was, first place,
first place. I kept saying that in my head. I was not hearing anything, even though people were cheering. I
have never been this focused in my life. After I crossed the finish line, I suddenly started hearing
everything again, the people's cheers, and the sound of my heart racing. I crumbled from exhaustion,
looked up at the sky, and said to myself, this is what it feels like to accomplish something, this is
discipline. After the race, everyone congratulates me, including those who were with me in the race. One
of them said, wow, man! You were flying. He is my friend now. His name is Salih. He came second in
that race. At the end of the day, before going home with my first medal, Coach Dave came to me and
said, congratulations again. Remember now good recovery, good food, and don’t train tomorrow you
need rest. But unfortunately, I ignored the last part of his advice and went for a run the following
morning.
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That day, while running, I suffered my first injury. At first, I thought it was just a minor ache
from not warming up properly, but as I continued to run, the pain became increasingly severe. I felt
suffocated and full of regret, and all I could think about was the coach's words, "Take a rest." I had no
idea what to do. Many questions popped into my head. What will the coach say? Should I tell him? What
about my dream? Why didn't I pay attention to him? I walked back home limping, while reflecting on my
mistake. When I came how my father noticed something was not going well with me. He asked me are
you okay? You look sad. I told him everything. He told me not to worry, just go to the coach and tell him
about it, and he'll understand. I went to the academy the next day, and Salih saw me limping asked me
what happened, so I start telling him everything. He told me it's okay, this is a normal thing in sports,
focus now on recovering from your injury. After the school we went to the training together. while
walking someone behind me said, looks like you did it. It was coach Dave. I didn’t say anything I was
ashamed and waiting for him to give long speech, but instead of that he just said. let’s this be your last
injury kid. We all get excited sometimes and do more than we should but remember. One hard training
session won’t make you hero, but one hard training session could bring you to zero. It's been a month
since my injury, with help from both Dave and Salih I was able to recover from the injury and get back to
what I was before and better. I went back training, racing, and winning both Domestic and foreign
tournaments together with Salih. Pushing each other to become the best. It was six fun years in my life.