Online learning is gaining a foothold in our days.
However , a significant number of people express
their view against this innovative teaching method. What is your opinion?
OPINION ESSAY
1 . INTRODUCTION (REPHRASE THE TOPIC- EXPRESS THE CONTROVERSY- STATE YOUR OPINION)
In our days e-learning is gradually attracting the interest of
institutions and schools. On the one hand, its implementation/introduction in education is gaining popularity and acceptance but on the other side of the coin this modern way of teaching is doubted. As far as I am concerned, online learning is the future of education and teachers should use it wisely.
MAIN BODY ( 2-1)
To begin with/ To start with, according to the graph online learning
provides flexibility to students.(topic sentence – κεντρική ιδέα). To be more specific/ In particular, / Particularly/ to be more precise / More precisely, (CLARIFICATION), students have the opportunity to attend online classes anywhere and anytime as long as they have a computer and an Internet connection. Therefore, even students who have to stay at the comfort of their home can participate in the e- course. 2nd paragraph --- pros of online learning
3rd paragraph --- opposing viewpoint
On the other hand, online learning is considered to be ineffective as
a method because it causes distraction. To be more precise, a lot of teachers have reported instances of students who exhibit problematic behaviour during the lesson because they are distracted. For example, they may play videogames or cause disturbance in the e-classroom as they find it tedious. Therefore, the teaching community has any reason to believe on the negative aspects of distance learning. To sum up/ In conclusion/ Taking everything into consideration, I firmly believe that online learning has still a lot to offer but teachers should employ it wisely and in moderation.
1. να γράψω μια αντίστοιχη εισαγωγή και πρωτη παράγραφο από
κύριο σωμα. Να χρησιμοποιησω πληροφοριες από το infographics